Aragorn cs Doc_Knock
 

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30 min
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no b/s

aight checkin in...good luck
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aragorn, you bout to feel my wrath like i was khan/*1
when i finish with ya bitch, you gon be ara-GONE/
see i aint a fuckin joke, aint no movie character fool/
you a dungeons and dragon nerd, playin at lunch at school/
the king may have returned, but im bout to send him back/
like it or not yo, ima throw ya whole style outta wack/
its an easy game i play, called "find the dead body/
ive seen you rap, ya shit, i bring lyrical karate/
the end be near for you, you can see it like the ring/*2
cept mine is a spinning pendant, reppin dynasty, bling-bling/*3
so get it straight real quick, yo shit aint neva gona last/
cuz ima fuck up ya present, ya future, and ya muthafuckin past

*1--star trek movie, "The Wrath Of Khan"
*2--the movie "The Ring"...they see the ring before they die
*3--reppin dyansty...my crew, Dynasty soldiers

aight....good luck

I'm a product of my environment... Herbs grow and I smoke
When herbs flow.. I just blow... your brains out your head bro
Doc knock... I hope your specialty is brain surgery
Cause you gone have to rearrange the way your brain's working B.
You thinking punch...your arms jab..your multi's suck..the rhyme lags...
To many of these / those * and those ,
You don't really flow... you blow!
And what's really cold... it's scrapish.. too many teeth to take it.
Your record is barely shaping... you took a challenge from Satan.
Well you asked this devil to dance...put yourself in this circumstance
Barrel on the back of your head.. now it's time to put you on blast!

aight...this was a good battle. lets get some votes up in heeuh.

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Opener: doc_knock
Closer: doc_knock
Flow: aragorn
Enjoyment: tie
Vote doc_knock
Return the favor and vote on this honestly please:

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

This battle was pretty good, but...

Doc: Your verse was good. Nice flow, nice metas, nice punches, even though they could be stronger. Nice wordplay. You should work on your multis.

Aragorn: Your verse was pretty good, but everythingf was just a step down from Doc's.

Vote: Doc Knock

Vote taken away. Read the rules.

damn both of yall have similar styles this wasnt really a good battle though the vote was close

Doc Noc- you could have done alot better with your verse i really didnt see those many punchlines in your battle
you just had a lot of filler lines like this "the king may have returned, but im bout to send him back/
like it or not yo, ima throw ya whole style outta wack"


Aragon- your verse was sort of like dock knocks yall could have done better in the diss department.. you had some decent wordplay in this battle

VOTE:ARagon- this battle was close kinda hard to decide but i just felt like aragon came with better wordplay in this battle

i need votes in these 2 battle here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103902

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103517

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Doc-knock stayin on the whole movie thing kinda got old after a while, but he had a great opener, started off well but kinda went downhill, puches weren't too insulting on either side, could be more personal, I enjoyed aragorns better and liked the flow better, overall just had a better feeling about it.

Please return the favour some one, I only need ONE more vote in this one to KO this guy.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

aragorn got this his punches was better and so was his flow.Doc u had a good verse its juss u punches didnt hit hard enough.

Vote:aragorn


please drop a vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...974#post1051974

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Doc_Knock had a much better structure/flow for me... Hit consistantly but did little damage.. played/basic punches really... shit like 'find the dead body' etc...
Aragon had the weaker flow but had some creativity in there... some nice multies also...
Basically it came down to creativity... thats all that took it for me... I think if Doc kept the structure tidy but had some better punches it mighta been the other way around..... still.....

Vote - Aragon

Return the favour with an honest vote.. I need ONE more, thats it - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101913

damn.....Doc dropped pretty good.....but the explanations are corny and make ur punches less effective......Aragorn had a better flow and harder punches with consistency.....Doc had a few personals.....but only one was actually hard hitting.....here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Metas - Doc
Wordplay - Doc
Punches - Aragorn
Personals - Doc
RhymeScheme - Aragorn
Flow - Aragorn
Creativity - Aragorn
Complexity - Doc
Vocab - Aragorn
Overall - Aragorn gets this just for having harder punches without explanations......Doc had some good wordplay but u need to drop the explanations duke....

peace

Both did pretty good, but Aragorn cames tronger than Knock did, his punches landed hardered, thats the only thing that won it from him, close shit though.

Return Da' fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103798

wasnt much to compare here......

My opinion ARAGORN's verse was way better than Doc_Knock's in every categorie.....The flow was much much better....and his punches were alot funnier and creative.....the personals on top of everything really made this a merkin for ARAGORN.....nice drop.....your flows nice....

vote -ARAGORN