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Detrimental vs. :)
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No dickriding, hate, or crew votes No BITING (i see its common round here lol) I hve to reply within 20 minutes of his verse Lets do this...Waiting for you to drop 1 |
aiight here we go
yo this GEEKS LAME...and dude you got a fuckin WEAK NAME i could rip your brains out and throw it on the "hollywood boardwalk" and you still wouldnt have "STREET FAME" i got a UNIQUE GAME while you STAY FAKIN your like raps version of CLAY AIKEN the chances of you gettin signed is like that of eminem makin a deal with a GAY STATION you've probably had a dick in EACH JAW cuz all you do is reach in GEEKS DRAWS your damn mouths like "pac man" cuz all it does is consume and EAT BALLS @ im exposin you for what you are a snitch and a CRIME SQUEL who'd suck of a whole label to get a RHYME DEAL your mouths probably had more bombs go off in it than an iraqi MINE FIELD i should have a NINE PEELED at you SNITCH FAGGOT all you do is roll with BITCH MAGGOTS your whole crews lips are like tight underwears cuz they stick to and KISS ASSES |
This kid is wack as hell, people can smell the wackness within miles-of-the-place...
So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face!!.. I can see that ya trying to rhyme, and no better place to start than rhyming-online... But you're like kids affraid of the dark, you'd probably cry for some-shine!.. I'm here to enlighten you, so smiley face, I just hope that you can maybe-see... That having trees over the road is the only time you'll ever live in 'shady'-streets.. You've gotta advertise links in ya sig, because truth is no1 wants to read-ya-shit... And the last time ya mom ate a roll, she lifted it up and seen-ya-dick!.. :laugh: Like a girl that ran away from home, this faggot is nothin but a lost-bitch... And working your day job as a lawnsman is the only time u'll 'drop-shit'.. You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good... And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'.. . . . . . yep...it's over... |
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cmon can we get some votes in here or wat......... |
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Opener- Tie (Nice opener from both)
Structure- D Flow-D Creativity-;) Punches-;) Vocab-:) Metas-D Closer-:)" Close battle, but overal Ima give it to :) He had way better punches... Good shit Detrimental, keep elevatin' Return da fava http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103798 |
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:) had some god ass punches like:@ im exposin you for what you are a snitch and a CRIME SQUEL who'd suck of a whole label to get a RHYME DEAL your mouths probably had more bombs go off in it than an iraqi MINE FIELD and i was feel'n this line by D: This kid is wack as hell, people can smell the wackness within miles-of-the-place... So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face! (this was my favorite line of the whole battle) but when it came down to consistency and structure ........ vote: :) check tha sig for links to my battles |
uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. .................... if niggas vote ill be sure to vote in your battles
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Sorry...
I think peeps is ridin the 100 + guy here... Smiley had some good shit, no doubt... Won't say he didn't. But so much of that was played and not directed at anyone in particular... Pre-written like a motherfucker. After nearly 200 battles, even split on the wins and losses... Trust, I can spot one. Street Fame hit personally, (the "backspace" line was tight). Hit with wordplay in almost every line... And ripped the punches WITH PERSONALS! Letting you know this was a freestyle!!! Punches, originality, wordplay, and some nice flow... Give the win to Street Fame. Ya'll who voted the other way... For shame! |
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Flow-D Creativity-smile Punches-smile Vocab-smile Metas-D Closer-"simliy ;) won with better stucture but it was not the greatest battle I have ever read |
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Dis battle was very Funny was feelin :) verse cuz of the structure and how his shyt was on point.....buttt ReaSonz: 1. I was Feeling this Line Right here: Quote:
^^^^ Dat was Funny....the whole Eminem thing....if u had worded it a lil Shorter it woulda Came out betta but it was good! 2. Dis Line right here....Just FuCked up errthing from My Point of view Quote:
lol^^^^^ Dat Ish was funny....hehe 2.Another Line tha was str8 was: Quote:
dat was funni^^^ But then i kinda got lost in ya shyt like 4 instance [QUOTE][You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good... And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'.. /QUOTE] Scrating in the hood??? u lost me there.....i get the scratching....but where the hell does IN THE HOOD come from???? hmmmm Overall 8/10 well my vote goes 2 Vote: StreetFame |
^ i aint finna explain it, if u dont get it dats coo
MODS: will u please erase casualtys vote, because 1)he didnt read the verses i can tell, and 2) ur not allowed to vote like that peace |
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damn.. the votes are 2 to 1 me can we get this battle over with.. uppin
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Opener- Tie Structure- Tie Flow- Tie Creativity- Smiley Punches- Smiley Vocab- Tie Metas- Tie Multis- Smiley Closer - Smiley Vote- Smiley Best bar you've probably had a dick in EACH JAW cuz all you do is reach in GEEKS DRAWS your damn mouths like "pac man" cuz all it does is consume and EAT BALLS Street, your verse was good, but Smiley's was just better. |
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UPPIN THIS AND BREAK DOWN UR FUCKING VOTES SO U CAN PROVE U READ THE VERSES VOTES LIKE ^^^THAT ARE NOT ALLOWED ................... |
I'm not gonna bitch about it, it's a vote, I'll let Smiley deal with that, but every vote against you so far, you've complained.
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read the rules for voting and don't come back in this thread...
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i know man stop complaining dog.. if you lose this battle just shut your fuckin mouth |
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structure-d punches-d flow-tie multis-smiley metas-tie wordplay-d overall-d this was close but that was n honest vote there gud shit by both...props to ya....pz will ya hit the poll smiley on my battle! |
for shame you guys are voting on :) He did ok...But bunch of dick riders need uppin for a vote on your battle...lamos....LOL Ok this is the way i put it....
Streetfames: Had multis..Good closer...ok opener...Could have been better...Flow was on......Punches were good enough to rip the :)face. Personals were ok also...could have been better though.And ill put up a A+ for him. :) verse: Ok mutlis a lot...But u lost ur flow cuz of the structure...I the bold hurt my eyes....your complex killed this...Next time take the bold off and u might win.,..But anyhow...Punches were ok...But weak....Next thing...personals...Came out alright...But still no cookie. Overall my vote goes to street fame...Stop voting on people that have many posts and stop dickryding them. SO u can get votes to. |
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stop swaing votes and messing with peoples minds...u can get dqed for that...Just a little warning |
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ok smiley was ok but very newbish and played...
the bold has got to go..and the structure was way off lines should be as even as possible... u mentioned something about a crew and unless i completly missed it..i dont think he is in a crew... seemd prewritn ............i could e wrong but it def...seemed prewritin.. street fame... had better structure..was easier to read.. some played punches but some nice original punches as well welll.......not played..maybe i just wasnt feelin some of your lines as much... that first couple of lines was pretty good and is really what took it for me... therefore poll vote=street fame seemed quite obvious to me |
heres the breakdown...
FLow=Both...I cant say who had the best but both were on. Structure=Streetfame...His shit was very readable. Complex=streetfame...^same Punches=this was a toughy..i have to go with streetfame...Cuz he had more punches and your punches seemed ready to go...Must have already been written Personals=LoL....streetfame....LOL yeah thats about the same ^ overall vote=street...No hate... |
these votes have to be dick ridding votes.. since when have niggas voted on battles that are in the 2nd page
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:) Smily LoL
yo this GEEKS LAME...and dude you got a fuckin WEAK NAME i could rip your brains out and throw it on the "hollywood boardwalk" and you still wouldnt have "STREET FAME" I Could Say The Same About Yours i got a UNIQUE GAME while you STAY FAKIN your like raps version of CLAY AIKEN the chances of you gettin signed is like that of eminem makin a deal with a GAY STATION LMAO... Klay Is Good.. But Funny you've probably had a dick in EACH JAW cuz all you do is reach in GEEKS DRAWS your damn mouths like "pac man" cuz all it does is consume and EAT BALLS Good meta .. ahhahaha @ im exposin you for what you are a snitch and a CRIME SQUEL who'd suck of a whole label to get a RHYME DEAL your mouths probably had more bombs go off in it than an iraqi MINE FIELD Played... i should have a NINE PEELED at you SNITCH FAGGOT all you do is roll with BITCH MAGGOTS your whole crews lips are like tight underwears cuz they stick to and KISS ASSES Wack!.. not too fond of ur flow n structure and the 10 line limit was abused.... lol Street Fame This kid is wack as hell, people can smell the wackness within miles-of-the-place... So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face!!.. Nice structure.. p.s I agree with that one I can see that ya trying to rhyme, and no better place to start than rhyming-online... But you're like kids affraid of the dark, you'd probably cry for some-shine!.. LMAO... Good Stuff I'm here to enlighten you, so smiley face, I just hope that you can maybe-see... That having trees over the road is the only time you'll ever live in 'shady'-streets.. Funny... You've gotta advertise links in ya sig, because truth is no1 wants to read-ya-shit... And the last time ya mom ate a roll, she lifted it up and seen-ya-dick!.. Good personal Like a girl that ran away from home, this faggot is nothin but a lost-bitch... And working your day job as a lawnsman is the only time u'll 'drop-shit'.. LOLLLLLLLLLll You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good... And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'.. Well Done . Vote-Street Fame... he came harder |
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punches street: You've gotta advertise links in ya sig, because truth is no1 wants to read-ya-shit... And the last time ya mom ate a roll, she lifted it up and seen-ya-dick!.. personals street: You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good... And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'.. metas street: Like a girl that ran away from home, this faggot is nothin but a lost-bitch... flow both: both didnt have stretched bars so thats good overall i gotta go with street |
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