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Dialect OTYP vs Jab
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Fuckin wit me's like buyin tickets online, it results in thge worse cost,
you came expectin a win but in stead, this battled ended in a ya first lose/ this dirt ball's a fake rapper, spitin bout fake drama, here i'll predict his lines, i bet he'll say sumthin *regardin my mama*/ im gunna beat this kid, and believe me i can, he still on that toddler shit, yet *he's older than i am*/ i send, slugs through ya spine, and take you out ya so called thuggin, *you claim you was raised by killaz and dealers but is there even hoods in london?*/ you talkin bout droppin hard but on the real, you couldnt rock the mic if you was ted nudgent, look everyone, its wannabe banks and the rest of the *rev unit*/ *you are a real dj* jab, a true dick jerker, dawg you couldnt make ryhmes flow wit a job as an atlantic worker/ im da champ da merk ya,(ring ring)pick up da phone its your mommy callin, wonderin why your cryin, jus tell her cuz you suck at rappin and *should have stuck ta ballin*/ im'a sew his mouth shut in an attempt ta get him ta spit it tight, he wants ta be a 'superman' so i guess i gotta be crep-ta-night(kriptonite)/ Jabs just about butts(j.a.b.) and keeps dicks in his mouths possesion, after i beat you in this battle jus *go to the ring* ta take out your aggression/ my verbal attacks assault you and put you out of your misery..............so sue me, game over, come play again when you aint just a bitch ass new b/ *in one of his battles he made lame 'your mama' jockes *im 16 he's 17 *read his bio in profile and he is from london *hes crews the rev unit(name bite g-unit) *he has a hobbie and job as dj *he plays b-ball *he boxes be sure you drop ya post home boy |
you boy, u changed ur verse.....whats goin on there.....seems like a DQ to me.....
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what do you mean i changed my verse its say last edited if i changed plus i cant even edit it wont let me holla back
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dialect dawg that was pretty tight nucka. this part
you talkin bout droppin hard but on the real, you couldnt rock the mic if you was ted nudgent, it was raw.jus cant wait till he spits, his shit..................... |
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Seems like you know what im gonna say, But heres a new diss... You cant fuckin rhyme u just tut and hiss.... Look bitch you read my profile now u know me? Oh i forgot your Elton John's homie... You from Baltimore....you a Wagwan G? There aint no hood in london...You wanna see my Fam-ily... I forgot you i shudnt talk about par-ents... Cos if i do ill probably diss ur uncle clar-ence We all know ur an Inbread with a bitch ass mouth... Talk again and ill pull ya fuckin tounge out.... You say u'se a freestyler and a baller? Gimme 3 mins on the court and im'a show ya... You aint shit against me...Your worth less than Ze-ro, Soon you'll be a washed up kid, similar to De-niro. You wanna fight but u right shit down? Bet i could beat u vocally you mothafuckin clown! Im a stick you bitch, wid a blade i clean daily... You will cry so much im a call u a bitch name Hayley... You had a good verse im a give u credit for that... But im sure u got ur olda bruva to right ya rap... You cudnt type shit like that, ur just a young buck... If i made u freestyle vocally u kno u gettin stuck... "my verbal attacks assault you and put you out of your misery..............so sue me," With shit like that bitches know u aint goin throw me... With a name like Jab u kno i hit hard... If we played sport it be Like a NFL Game, Ill be ur wild card Anyways u aint a good rapper dont be fooled, U ever wanna stick me? Be prepared cos im tooled |
idk i have to give it to dialect on dis one. bc his punch lines and flow was alot better.
vote dialect |
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I WANNA KNO HOW IM GET'N GET'N DQ'D FOR BATTLES I AINT EVEN CHECKED INTO AND THIS GUYS GOT 3 ON THIS PAGE ALONE
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dialects flow was a lot beeter, and the punches wer more personal, so my vote goes to dialect,
it was an ok battle |
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flow- dialect
impact of disses- dialect punchlines- dialect overall verse consistency- dialect VOTE- dialect hit up this battle of mine it needs votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104449 |
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JABS VERSE WAS TO NON-BATTLES-ISH (NOT EVEN A WORD) HIS VERSE WAS TOO ELEMENTARY
AND DIALECT STUCK O STR8 RIP'N THIS GUY VOTE-DIALECT |
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vote is dialect heres the breakdown....
flow=dialect...good but yeah.... strcuture-^same complex-same^ punches=dialect good punches....Laughed at some..And wondered personals-dialect better than last time personals...^good punches overall-dialact |
Dialect took this hands down, better flow, better punches, overall flow he won it..
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Dialect Has won this battle!!
Much better rap than Jab (Sorry) But true I hope u return the favor/vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104673 And http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104670 |
dialect took dis one hard . better vacab n flow. nice punches really put dis rhyme together well.
keep all yall shit up. nice battle vote=dialect |
vote: dialect...
flow was better this dirt ball's a fake rapper, spitin bout fake drama, here i'll predict his lines, i bet he'll say sumthin *regardin my mama*/ hahahaha.... jab.. you had some jabs but D... punched ya ass.. one audio: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102425 text: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104688 |
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