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Yo What Up vs. lil tagger
aight..........u said it was already in front lines, but i looked through like 3 of them pages and couldnt find it so i assume it was deleted due to inactivity, so here it be...........
10 lines house rules verses due 30 min after both checkins........... lets do this.................... |
CHECKIN IN...............
After u check we can both start keystylin............ so hurry up................. |
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"~Yo wat up~" wat da fuq b dat????
dis aint no fuqen convo, imma smach dis cat I kill fake ass emcees like you when i spit dis wangsta unconscious, sum1 get em a 1st aid kit! he wangsta, hiz yahoo im handle iz: fakeassgangsta88 dis 15yr old dyke aint goin nowhere, not at dis rate Dis wi99a only wanna battle cuz i be 0 and 3 but i battle real rapperz, no bootlegged emcee yo son, ur sad, u lost gainst' SOUL FIRE!! I aint at hiz level, try n aim a lil' higher... Dis wi99az interestz r battlin' motherfuckers nah dawg, u got dat win by battlin a sucker U from arizona, well that showz dat u white yo dawg, heres some advice, plze quit dis site!!! good luk....no hate ......*~1~*...n plzeeee no prewrittin!!!! |
That was some whack ass shit. Tagger wins this for a better flow and structure, and also more punches. YWU verse was jus dumb. Please drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103729
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"~Yo wat up~" wat da fuq b dat????
dis aint no fuqen convo, imma smash dis cat I kill fake ass emcees like you when i spit dis guy droped,quik sum1 get em a 1st aid kit! Dis wi99a only wanna battle cuz i be 0 and 3 but i battle real rapperz, no bootlegged emcee Dis wi99az interestz r battlin' motherfuckers nah dawg, u got dat only win by battlin a sucker U from arizona, well that showz dat u white yo dawg, heres some advice, plze quit dis site!!! good luk....no hate ......*~1~*...n plzeeee no prewrittin!!!! |
aight sons.........lets rip dis...........RIP DIS.............
u gay ass bitch u stuck tryin to savage-for-cum, u act like u good, but this is ur fourth battle and u still havent-won/ shit kid this battle has yet-to-begun, u think u have a chance of winnin a battle but the outcome has been set-to-none/ u think wit them 190 posts ud at least have some-skill, u acted like u were prepared for this merking but u come-killed/ once the battles done u run-still, it dont take a genius to realize that u made a mistake takin this cause u been outdone-in-skill/ ima rap giant and u-cant-miss-this, u cant compare wit my skill, and u dont fit in my "group" like a jew-at-christmas/ ur through-after-i-rip-dis,u can pull out a shotgun, fire thousands of rounds, but u knew-u-couldnt-hit-this/ wit punches like these ill leave ya mind-twisted, cause if u check to see who has losing records, ull never find-me-listed/ when i come through im refined-and-never-assisted, and its even sadder that u gotta remind-peeps-that-u=once-existed/ do u really intend-to-fight, u can act like a o.g., but u so far off, that if u put on a dmx costume u still couldnt pretend-ur-tight/ ur wack skills alone will descend-this-site, cause u cant compare to me, my punches keep killin cats and i wont hesitate to end-ya-life/ EXPLANATIONS- 1st bar- hes 0-3, this is his fourth battle 2nd bar- when this battle started he already came merked.........once again another diss to his 0-3 record 3rd bar- jews dont celebrate christmas..........no offense to jews though...... 4th bar- ill never have a losing record 5th bar- self explanatory ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- that vote before i posted will be taken to the IR, and it will not count......... so lets get some votes up in this bitch............ |
UPPIN #1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LETS GET SOME VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! peace.............................. |
UPPIN #2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CMON...............YALL BEST VOTE IN THIS SHIZNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!1 peace.................. |
lil tagger- no wordplay, no good punches, bad structure...work on ur rhymes kid, but stay up...
Yo what up- bars were a little long...no wordplay or really good punches...u flowed smoother....keep elevatin'....n' no need for the explanation, if peeps can't figure out a line they shouldn't be here... vote=Yo what up peep my battle w/ Echo... |
This battle was okay, but...
lil' Tagger: Your verse was wack. You had a nice attempt at attackin' his record, but you ain't bring it hard enough. Your wordplay was wack, you ain't really have much creativity. Not really much flow in your verse. Next time get some harder punches rather than commenting on his previous battles. Kinda weakened your verse's strength. Keep elevatin. Yo What Up: You had the better verse. You had strong punches, decent flow, but no structure. Your wordplay was pretty good. Keep elevatin'. Vote: Yo What Up |
Oh, and lil' tagger, this was honest shit. No dickridin' and no hatin' on the fact that you put me in your verse.
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NO MORE FREEPOSTING... I cleared all of it... Don't start it again. Any post after your verses are considered uppins.
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Yp Wut Up got dis one he flowed better then lil' tagger. better punchlines. if i could vote i would.........................
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y soulfire.....no hard feelingz bout me addin' u in/////i juss needed suttin 2 rhyme......no hate......1
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UPPIN #3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CMON NOW...........HONEST VOTES MOTHAFUCKAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! peace.......................... |
damn lil tagger u know u can up too............how come u lettin the thread go down to third page........i only got one more up left so how bout u do somethin herb.............
UPPIN #4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
yo got it for me he hotta than tha otha.....good wordplay n structure....i did fink it was close but i preferred "Yo's" sorry dude
any chance u can honestly and fairly vote on mine? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104452 |
aight i think that yo won this because his flow strucutre punches opening closing were better and overally his verse was better
aight battle my vote-yo what up yo honest on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104537 i took the time so u take the time |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104792 vote on this battle afta feedback
lil tag=ur shit was trash and horrible need to elevate son and didn't like nothin u said sorry homie yo= his verse was more decent and he had personals and was more consistent u need to make ur bars shorter and more vocab and harder punches vote=yo and please go vote on my battle and i will come back and poll the vote hollaz |
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UPPIN # 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
from now on, i cant up anymore, so if the thread goes down the second page make sure u up it so people can vote............ peace.............. |
ite....i will..lol****************************
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yo what up wins this with better flow structure harder punches and better humor
hit this up wit an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103757 |
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