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CarsonJet -v- Reflektionz
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This kid called out Jet and then set up wit Token? We both left reflekt like parent's..his record's broken Broken Record This won't stay open, reflektionz? take another look Your only 5 and 1 because u battled 5 more rook's Forget input...it's like Socom on 56k..He froze-n-shook Newbie crook, like u took a chapter from Borntokill's book He's defintion of status mis-placement..Flekt don't belong Look in the mirror son...the bay-town rep's men wearin thongs Battlin vets...It's like u want 2004 jus to mean "wins no more" hardcore?...ur names only reflektionz cus u clean my floor |
When Reflektionz drops on this, I'll definitly give you an honest vote. Nice drop Carson. If you wanna battle hit me up. But in the meantime. I have a pink slip battle up. Gimme an honest one. Thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103779 |
i shuda told u i only do 10-14 bar battles
in every battle every time..... Nice verse.. shud be a coo battle.. aite.. PEEP Sig an the fact that i beat him before.. no beef carson..just spittin... check.... If you wish to slaughter foes, this is shit you outta know.. Jet started text cuz he heard himself over audio.. because he spits inaudible, he's not what he claims to be .. so i'll put carson in a headlock and throw away the key .. come on Jet, i can't believe my skillz are non sense.. i'll attack with snooker cues and knock your balls into your pockets .. spitting some soft shit, and asking me to battle him .. but i won't stand for it, like when retards make an acronym .. now i'll cut off your finger tips, you can tell what to do .. that's to take them back from me just to help you improve .. often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again? because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then .. only time ya scriptures are lehtal is when ya pen xplodes. if you want this to be forever ill i think it's best you don't post.. |
Yea. Ima definitly give this to Reflektionz. He came with some nicer punches and personals I thought. Carson wasnt bad at all, just didn't come as hard as he needed to to beat Reflektionz. Vote goes to Reflektionz.
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This kid called out Jet and then set up wit Token?
We both left reflekt like parent's..his record's broken Broken Record nice opener This won't stay open, reflektionz? take another look Your only 5 and 1 because u battled 5 more rook's played Forget input...it's like Socom on 56k..He froze-n-shook Newbie crook, like u took a chapter from Borntokill's book nice similie He's defintion of status mis-placement..Flekt don't belong Look in the mirror son...the bay-town rep's men wearin thongs good punch Battlin vets...It's like u want 2004 jus to mean "wins no more" hardcore?...ur names only reflektionz cus u clean my floor very strong way to close it out If you wish to slaughter foes, this is shit you outta know.. Jet started text cuz he heard himself over audio.. ha, nice because he spits inaudible, he's not what he claims to be .. so i'll put carson in a headlock and throw away the key .. filler come on Jet, i can't believe my skillz are non sense.. i'll attack with snooker cues and knock your balls into your pockets .. haha very strong words, best line of the battle spitting some soft shit, and asking me to battle him .. but i won't stand for it, like when retards make an acronym .. either I'm missing something or its pretty weak now i'll cut off your finger tips, you can tell what to do .. that's to take them back from me just to help you improve .. filler often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again? because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then .. ok only time ya scriptures are lehtal is when ya pen xplodes. if you want this to be forever ill i think it's best you don't post.. good closer Well both verse were pretty good, and even though relekt had the strongest punch I still would have to give it to Carson. He had more consistent, quality disses. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069 |
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]This kid called out Jet and then set up wit Token? We both left reflekt like parent's..his record's broken Broken Record nice opener This won't stay open, reflektionz? take another look Your only 5 and 1 because u battled 5 more rook's played Forget input...it's like Socom on 56k..He froze-n-shook Newbie crook, like u took a chapter from Borntokill's book nice similie He's defintion of status mis-placement..Flekt don't belong Look in the mirror son...the bay-town rep's men wearin thongs good punch Battlin vets...It's like u want 2004 jus to mean "wins no more" hardcore?...ur names only reflektionz cus u clean my floor very strong way to close it out If you wish to slaughter foes, this is shit you outta know.. Jet started text cuz he heard himself over audio.. ha, nice because he spits inaudible, he's not what he claims to be .. so i'll put carson in a headlock and throw away the key .. filler come on Jet, i can't believe my skillz are non sense.. i'll attack with snooker cues and knock your balls into your pockets .. haha very strong words, best line of the battle spitting some soft shit, and asking me to battle him .. but i won't stand for it, like when retards make an acronym .. either I'm missing something or its pretty weak now i'll cut off your finger tips, you can tell what to do .. that's to take them back from me just to help you improve .. filler often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again? because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then .. ok only time ya scriptures are lehtal is when ya pen xplodes. if you want this to be forever ill i think it's best you don't post.. good closer Well both verse were pretty good..carson had a few nice lines but reflektionz killed it on him wit then metaphors an punhces plus the flipped personals Vote- REflek Copying votes don't count -Token |
Yea. I'm polling for myself. I mean. Polling for Guilty. Which is me as you can probably see by the numbers at the top. Like I said. Reflektionz wins.
No. Bad vote.. read voting rules, Token |
This kid called out Jet and then set up wit Token?
We both left reflekt like parent's..his record's broken Broken Record 8/10 cool opener original This won't stay open, reflektionz? take another look Your only 5 and 1 because u battled 5 more rook's 6/10 Forget input...it's like Socom on 56k..He froze-n-shook Newbie crook, like u took a chapter from Borntokill's book 8/10 GOLDDDDDD He's defintion of status mis-placement..Flekt don't belong Look in the mirror son...the bay-town rep's men wearin thongs 7/10 kek Battlin vets...It's like u want 2004 jus to mean "wins no more" hardcore?...ur names only reflektionz cus u clean my floor 8/10 HA 37.00000000000000 If you wish to slaughter foes, this is shit you outta know.. Jet started text cuz he heard himself over audio.. 8/10 because he spits inaudible, he's not what he claims to be .. so i'll put carson in a headlock and throw away the key .. 6/10 so what man who cares about keys and headlocks? come on Jet, i can't believe my skillz are non sense.. i'll attack with snooker cues and knock your balls into your pockets .. good simile nigga but it dont rhyme together 7/10 spitting some soft shit, and asking me to battle him .. but i won't stand for it, like when retards make an acronym .. 6/10 now i'll cut off your finger tips, you can tell what to do .. that's to take them back from me just to help you improve .. 6/10 often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again? because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then .. 6/10 only time ya scriptures are lehtal is when ya pen xplodes. if you want this to be forever ill i think it's best you don't post.. 7/10 46 - 12 = 34.00000000000 I had to subtract 2 of ur lowest scored bars cause u had 14 lines to his 10 Close battle guys but Carson took it off of more lines that were better and all of his shit rhymed together better, more original too. |
PUNCHES:REFLEK(JUST LOOK)
METAPHOR:REFLEK(like when retards make an acronym) VOCABULARY: REFLEK (RETARDS MAKE AN ACRONYM) CREATIVITY:REFLEK(i'll attack with snooker cues and knock your balls into your pockets ..) CLOSURE:CARSON(ur names only reflektionz cus u clean my floor) VOTE= REKLEKTIONZ |
I will have to give this to Reflektionz..he just had an overall better verse..although..sense doent rhyme with pokets..in..no way at all in hell..smh..Carson's lines were mediocre..Ref had some good lines..I myself liked the headlock line..I dont know how Bredan said it was a filler..he prolly didnt understand it...oh wellz..Ref gets my vote..
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That was my mistake, I meant I thought the line before it "because he spits inaudible, he's not what he claims to be .." was pretty much filler. |
aiight this was an ill battle but carson jet really did take this, i know that young p is trippin on carson but damn, he came hard with the personals, an personals are better than punches.
reflections did have a few punches, an personals but they didnt come close to carsons!!! no hate jus a vote |
Both came pretty well and this was an over-all close battle.
Break-Down Punches - Reflektions, it hink came ahrder with punches it was close but i felt his hit harder and jsut edged this category Flow - Both were good, i would call it even Personals - Carson, jsut seemed to be better quality and more of them Creativity/ Originality - Carson-Jet, mroe creative more unused punches, jsut overall mroe original Structure - Even I think this was a close, when i read them at first i thought reflektions had won, cause he had more punches at sight. But i re-read both verses and carsons seemed to come harder, Reflekt came with MORE punches, but Carsons were mroe cretive, original and had better and mroe well thought out eprsonals... My Vote = CarsonJet having a more original and creative verse...i can't poll vote :( But can you guys vote on this, since i broek it down so well... pce |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103975
heres the link.... votes be much preciated........ |
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personals-carson punches-tie wordplay-reflek consistancy-tie disses-carson reflektions obviously had the better flow, and he started off with harder shit, i thought he was gonna take it, some creative shit, some weak lines too, which brought your verse down.. carson had some weak lines too, the mirror line and finisher were hot tho, he had a few more personals hit harder with a few more disses, so altho reflek was more complex and fluent.. carson had the heavier hitters which edges him the battle.. reflek pretty nice tho, keep at it vote-carson |
actually i think punches an personals are main an i did have personals
read my last 2 lines often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again? because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then .. an that an a few more..but ok |
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stop swaying votes..and get my name out your sig..unless you're going to marry me;) |
get my name out yours man..he sudnt of won that battle he got skillz but wueva.....
an r u proposing |
roflmfao!!!!..you gay as fuck!!!..I knew you were gay..I knew you were..lmao!!!!...this nigga asked me if I was proposing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reflections wins this battle with great word technique and stand out lines.
The snooker cue ball in the pockets line was the best in the match. Carson gave a good show but his drop neede to be more creative to win this battle. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103997 Don't make me come back to this thread =) |
im not the one with the fukin rya street fighter Sig
fukin bitch damn,............................................. ............................ |
ok no hate vote............pretty close battle...heres the breakdown...
flow=both....Yeah pretty much both were easy to read Structure=both.....same as flow Personals=both....I just think reflect had more punches-reflections.....Carson had played punches which is a no no...Some played not a lot overall-reflections |
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CarsonJet--
This kid called out Jet and then set up wit Token? We both left reflekt like parent's..his record's broken Broken Record Ok..nice concept..original..Ok opener This won't stay open, reflektionz? take another look Your only 5 and 1 because u battled 5 more rook's Basic concept..'played'..cud've done more with this.. Forget input...it's like Socom on 56k..He froze-n-shook Newbie crook, like u took a chapter from Borntokill's book Screw the similie..nice personal.. He's defintion of status mis-placement..Flekt don't belong Look in the mirror son...the bay-town rep's men wearin thongs Again cud've done more with it, Ok punch. Battlin vets...It's like u want 2004 jus to mean "wins no more" hardcore?...ur names only reflektionz cus u clean my floor [B]..Nice..good closer.. nothin great but still. [B]Overall: Good verse..some nice, simple wordplay. Nice work on the personals.. work on creativity though.. Sometimes in there..i've seen before. Reflektionz-- If you wish to slaughter foes, this is shit you outta know.. Jet started text cuz he heard himself over audio.. Cud use a little rewordin.. but still nice..ok opener because he spits inaudible, he's not what he claims to be .. so i'll put carson in a headlock and throw away the key .. No real punch here..lame concept..average filler here come on Jet, i can't believe my skillz are non sense.. i'll attack with snooker cues and knock your balls into your pockets .. Good lines..cud up the flow but none the less..nice spitting some soft shit, and asking me to battle him .. but i won't stand for it, like when retards make an acronym .. Could be..but isnt. now i'll cut off your finger tips, you can tell what to do .. that's to take them back from me just to help you improve .. Again filler..its all in wrists to! lol.. often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again? because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then .. Muah.. ok,ok.. add more complexity only time ya scriptures are lehtal is when ya pen xplodes. if you want this to be forever ill i think it's best you don't post.. Would be good, if it wasnt for the fact..he has already posted Overall: Ok drop, you need to work on wordplay, meta's & what not.. just add more overall complexity. Also ur verse included to much filler n not enough personals. Vote: CarsonJet |
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