Jab -vs- Butcher
 

Check in when u see this link....Bwoi....

Aiiite????

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check in butcher___________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __

checking in now beeyatch.......................................... ......................

and dont go offline again

hey j-a-b, dont eva test me/
its the butcha,come to slice and cook-ya/
noting but a pest to me, put jabs in your chest,lyrically/
bring a vest and a deadly weapon,
if you come to combat, otherwise keep steppin/
dy-nasty soldiers, is who im reppin/
allways roll heartless, i dont take exception/
chew bitches up, and shit 'em out my rectom/
so tell the rev unit, that you got stept-on/
your rymes dont stick, like writing on teflon

(the non stick coating on frying pans).

Butcher.....Tha only male who actually likes Ashton Kutcher....
You spit rhymes as if u got a cone up your ass,
Whats wrong dawg? Am i goin to fast...
You a butcher without a sausage and i shud know...
What can i saw bitch u wud of done better if u were a NO SHOW..
You talking bout bitches? only one u seen is ur relfect-ion
You chattin wid jab on tha REV UNIT - Connect-ion
Im a push u in tha right way give u sum Direct-ion
Cos looks like Dynasty** got a shit ass select-ion
So im a rest my mouth cos im hittin to hard....
If tha battle wasn't text IT BE NO HOSE BARRED...
Im a beat u like OJ beat his missus,
last thing im a say to u....BUTCHER DO THA DISHES
BITCH

***Dynasty is his "so called" Cru

ite shit battle yall,
but jab gets this easy man, flow was ite structure got it and atleast an attempt at a punch........bit wak.butcher elavate alot man work on structure and punches.


hit this up dnt woz bout polls http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104426 .....................pz

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Jab, you did good

Punches: Jab
Flow: Jab
Everything Else: Neither

Butcher.....Tha only male who actually likes Ashton Kutcher....
That was your best line, but if you re-worded it, it could've been a lot better.

Butcher, your verse just sucked.

Vote - Jab

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butcher
flow-2
meta-2
multi-1
punch-3
vocabs-2

jab
flow-3
meta-1
multi-1 (forced)
punch-2
vocabs-2

vote: butcher

please check out my battle:

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I cant poll vote, but ima break it down for ya anyway.



Butcher, you had very few punches in this battle & the ones you did include were pretty weak. You talked way too much about yourself & wot u do to people which you from focusing on your opponent. Your flow was ok for most of the spit, but was off at points. Lack of metas, personals, wordplay..... but what you really need to work on is your punches.

Jab, that wasnt the greatest spit, but you did all that was needed. Punches were direct, although some werent that hard hitting. Personal was ok. Lacked metas & wordplay.
There was one only one MAJOR thing i saw wrong with the spit:
You a butcher without a sausage and i shud know...
^That line sounded gay :laugh:

Vote: Jab



KaYNe -vs- Problem C
^ Could you do me a favour & drop a fair vote on this battle.

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Jab got dis one, he flowed better, and had harder punches, but my vote doesnt count so w/e......

vote Jab

could u plz drop an honest vote on dis......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104412

LAST TIME OF UPPIN OTHAWISE I GET DQ'ED AGAIN!!!

LOL

VOTE PEOPLE PLEASE...............................I NEED SOME HONEST VOTING!

Punches-=- Jab
Flow-=-Jab
Vocab-=-Jab
Structure-=-Jab
Multies-=- None Really
WordPlay-=-Jab

Jab's Verse-=- Work On It. Throw Harder Punches, If This Was A Battle Against A Vet And You Used That Verse, You'd Get Blown Out...Work ON Multies, Flow, And Structure. You Had Decent Wordplay...Elevate Son..

Butcher's Verse-=-ELEVATE. ELEVATE. ELEVATE. You Had WEAK Punches And OK Flow. Not One Thing Was Tight In Your Verse. Didnt Like IT. Had Nothing Special. Come Harder Next TIme Dogg. Elevate, You'll Get Good.

Hit THis uP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=rock1n

..This was one sided battle..

Punches-Jab
Multis-Jab
Flow-Jab
Meta-Jab
Personals-Jab

..Vote-Jab..

>>Go vote on this Battle~~

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104404

same opinion from me. butcher said nothing much of intererst, and his rhyming scheme seemd off key for the first few lines. i'm sure you'll do better with time though. (i've decided that encouragment is gonna help u more than the people that just straight diss you, cos that sereves no purpose but to make yourself feel good). i'd spend time workin on you're ryming schemes and punchlines. but then, what do i know. my lack of posts obviously menas i'm a newbie, and as we all seem to know, noobs don't know shit and have the iq of a 2 year old. that's teh immpression i got from some guy that turned me down for a battle just cos i didn't have enough posts. lack of posts seems to mean i'm not worth battling and am in fact scum. oh well. excuse the ranting, but i felt this was a good a place as any to let off some steam. maybe i should try and get my name changed to the crazy ranting guy or something. but yeah, even though my vote doesn't count, jab once again get's my vote. when u gonna battle me man?

uppin 4 votes people
give honest opinions and leave the links to any of your battles
uppin 4 votes

can u all actually poll vote please...cos thats what closes dis battle
Cheers everybody!!!!!!!
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...052#post1063052
vote for this fuckin battle please and ya shit is polled already so dunno how to vote so if i feedback it's a waste of it cause it won't poll dunno wtf is wrong wit this battle