Rev Unit |vs| Sphere
 

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No bullshit
Checkin Then Spit

Due: When i get back from school in 4hrs ill write my verse

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Il spit my verse now
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My Flow
 

My 1st battle up in dis bitch im genst this dude name sphere/
Potential upset coz im gon show no fear/
Sphere....... as in the shape of this planet?
Just like tha O-Zone Laya.... Bitch uve had it/
I aint gon come in here, talk shit, then be away on me toes/
Dawg im stayin put.... just like these hoes/
But dont get me started on pussy/
If sphere saw sum he'd feed it sum milk/
Im puttin his bitch ass to sleep/
Sum1 pass me his quilt/



sorry took so long to post, my net has been fuckin me round sumet stupid.

spit dawg

come on
 

post ya flow man

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Up'n HOPING SPHERE WILL SEE THREAD............................................ ........................Hope thats ok................................................ .................................................. ........................

thanks

for uppin this jab

thought you didnt spit

iight gimmi a sec to write somethin


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Rev would be on top of the ball…but hes already past it
Past death ya still stink why imma rev n blow ya casket
Fuck..ill come light so by accident ya voice don’t break
Only time rev got some flow is after he dreams of lakes
Guess Rev’s just stuck on his ass from takin r n r to far (sig)
Im layin you out..and it’s the only time ya take charge

fuck it

keystlyle

lol yeh it sucks but i dont need to come hard

^yeh u had more complex and actual good punches

Fuck..ill come light so by accident ya voice don’t break
Only time rev got some flow is after he dreams of lakes

nothing really stood out no hate.....but u didnt need to come any harder

the other rev guy.....ur stuff was basic and not really good punches

if u can.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104467

uppin 1 for votes

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good battle boys shame i cant vote...not allowed anyways cos he my cru....any chance u can vote on these sphere?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104450

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104120

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104452

Sphere that was ill. good and short.. but well said

no explination needed

Rev Unit.. Keep elevatin:thumbup:

vote-Sphere

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Peace
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:)

lol it sucked admit it

thanks for votin babe

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uppin 2

LoL yea it kinda did lol... but compared to his it was ill;)

Did u get my pm

:thumbup:

Holla

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yup

the question is...

did you get mine

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blah

uppin 4...

vote

leave links

ill vote honestly on your battle

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Short little battle i see.. but its pretty much slef explanitory...

Sphere wins better punches more consitent and more on point then rev's where.. keep elevated Rev you'll get there aventually..

Peace

Can you return the favor and votes honestly on my battle vs Aragorn. that the only one that both have verses in so far..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104593

Thank You .Much Appriciated
peace

fuckin good comin from someone who cant spell eventually...

lol j/k :shoot: :spit:

I cant poll vote, but ima quickly break it down for ya anyway.



Rev Unit, your spit was way too simple. Punches were pretty weak. Your flow was a little choppy throughout. Lack of metas, wordplay & hard hitting punches.

Sphere, not the best spit ive seen, but you did what was needed. Punches were directed at your opponent. Flow was good & personal was ok. Lacked metas & wordplay but they really werent needed in this battle.

Vote: Sphere



KaYNe -vs- Problem C
^ Could you do me a favour & drop a fair vote on this battle.

votes plz...... i know ive lost but just to confirm it. lol

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decent battle revs flowed better, and he had harder punches. but i cant vote so w/e.........................

i personally think that rev unit was better. he had some good punches, but structure needs work. sphere, yours was too short, but you had better structure. it was a good battle, but rev unit was better. vote - rev

thanks 4 the voting............ but we still need more votes up in here
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yo ite easy merk for my man sphere nice spit man quick simple but efective just had harder punches..........................................s imple........................pz

You can't spit under 10 lines. Read the new rules. This is bullshit. Battle closed. If it's an easy win spit some bullshit. Lesson learned.