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dw VS rule (Crew Battle-peep)
CeNtRaL vs SoFt FoCuS
15 lines max all rules u spit first dawg n i'll reply straight after! gud luk........pz |
alright checkin in.....i'll post a verse tonight cuse im goin to the library to study for exams
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Ight Heres My Verse.
Watch Your Bars Sink Like Water Clogged Noodles ..Ya Annoying..A Fake Vet.. Similer To A Farm Animal In The Morning 'Cock'a Doodle' 96 Battles You Must Recycle..Bite..And Flip Concepts Chrit Envy He Ye Idole Get Banned With Similer Herb Rejects Slay This Rap Vampire Sucken Talent From RB Illness Disolved Wrath Lyrically Crusified Like Jeezus..Ye Finished We Battled Before But I Didn't Clap Back I Held On A Bit ..Ya Ducked Dodged A Virgin Lyricest.. Relaten To Premature Ejaculaters Ya Let Loose & Quickly Spit Dw's Audio's Disabled Jaws Locked To Tight..Take This Advice Shut Off The Light..No Crew On This Site..Likes Gays..Alright Kids Soft In The Center Punches Blurry I Can't Put Em In Focus ..Declined From The Elite Roster.. Only Way Ya Beat Me My Crew Be A True Vet Is By Hocus Pocus A Crew Named Center Full Of Guys..Faggets..Your all Gay ..Tryn'a Elavate One Another.. So I Take It..Ye'all Take It..After A Shot Of Viagra..The Jail Way There Ye Go Man...Uppen For Ye Verse |
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dis-obey this fool...all u breakin is a sweat while im breakin this rule... bitch u can't handle this lyrically dual...put u in a plunge pool so u keep ur cool... spittin these barz breakin out of my cage....now whos "soft-... ..-focus" on the task in hand...cos there the mic is lost... reached the middle of this battle...we're central keepin it tight... we might as well be blind-folded cos these bitches out of sight... jus try to be polite...and maybe D won't humiliate you... jus remove you from the main page to physilitate my crew... rule u tried this once before...came HALF-arsed n still put u to the floor... now u back to even the score...ha this the SEQUAL time to beat u even more... soft focus u goin back to new crews...y'all goin round in circles... u bitches got lucky twice...but about to fall at the 3rd hurdle.... complainin that u topical...well eres a topic to the tables... how the fuck did u lot get a main page space...it must av bin disabled.... ...................................1 UPPIN THIS! |
stronger punches from DW and nice multis.....i didnt feel that rule had a great verse...flow was off and punches werent too complex...no disrespect but nothin stood out 2 me from rules verse...kinda same with dw except he had a few more personals and it just seemed stronger
v/DW hit this up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103509 |
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im a vote on this battle but hit this battle of mine up with a vote before i poll vote in this shit
heres the link reached the middle of this battle...we're central keepin it tight... we might as well be blind-folded cos these bitches out of sight... this how i see it that battle was close neither of yall had amazing wordplay.. but dw had some funny ass lines that pulled it off like this one "reached the middle of this battle...we're central keepin it tight... we might as well be blind-folded cos these bitches out of sight..." this was a close battle but dw had the better wordplay pucnhlines- dw metas-neither multies- neither impact of disses- dw flow- rule VOTE_ DW |
heres the link to the battle i need votes in.. ill poll vote in this battle if yall drop a vote in my shit heres the link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103902 |
ite no hate 2-0 CeNtRal uppin for dw................................................ .................................................. ...............................pz
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i think dw came with better punches and flow as well better wordplay. lemme break it down:
punches - dw: dw came harder multis - none: no multis flow - dw: his came better structure - rule: his was a lil easier to read overall - dw: as u can see, dw won more categories. nice job both vote - dw btw, it says im banned, but it still lets me vote... dunno why |
alright uppen for some more votes
Hopefully from no noods ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- good Verse Though DW Uppen |
^^^u to dawg gud battle!
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yo dw i spent time voting on your battle
now i got a battle that needs votes in heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104449 |
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come on y'all can we get this finished!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hahhaha everyone voting has less than 300 posts this is gay...
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aight well i got 700 so here we go rule:: aight you had some good ideas and some good lyrics and all - but your structure just was off - like the bars were real uneven which hurt you lines like :: A Crew Named Center Full Of Guys..Faggets..Your all Gay ..Tryn'a Elavate One Another.. So I Take It..Ye'all Take It..After A Shot Of Viagra..The Jail Way just seem like its off - and could hit harder if some words werent there dw:: your verse had alot of punches notibly complainin that u topical...well eres a topic to the tables... how the fuck did u lot get a main page space...it must av bin disabled.... that shit had me laughin consitant all around ima vote for dw in this battle you guys both had good drops - d jus edged ya in punches these two crews seem like there on their way so props to both crews for a str8 battle love, Kost ps. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104202 |
ok i dont got 300 posts but im still gon vote
my vote goes to DW, i liked da flow and you both tied for punches and multies but the overall i liked DW's favorite line rule u tried this once before...came HALF-arsed n still put u to the floor... now u back to even the score...ha this the SEQUAL time to beat u even more... |
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