doc_knock vs. oCANTi
 

10-20 lines
due one hour from checkin
no crew, d/, hate
you spit first

good luck
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This is my check in
Alright 1 hr it is
G*luck
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um...you're late...better hurry up.....
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Love ya life while u have it
stop rappin it's ya bad habit
lock away your keyboard, literally store it in ya cabinet
I don't deal jokes about faggots
my repertoire of words has expanded
when I rap I use all sorts of fabric/you attach to static
just consider me one of the 9-11 planes that landed
I'm a female doin big things, I'm not a scarecrow I have a brain
only way you'll make it is if you hurry and learn how to sing
lets remind you westcoast is not on the map
cali ain't bringin it and neither will your pack(crew)
life right now is about pimpin and killin
well you need to kill them pimples so aim and start drillin
then maybe we can start chillin
you tell me about yo life,
i'LL TELL YOU ABOUT MY LIFE
and then we hook you up with them singing lessons alright



I like to tell stories.....if yall can't feel that I don't know what to tell ya, better yet I don't know what to tell myself I'm sick of yall voting for simple punchlines that require no thought.

Join the campaign:
This is not any many miny mo......stop b-shittin and properly vote

Oh I'm sorry....not... just shut up and drop. You're feeding off of me any way so calm down and follow the leader.......................

your repotoire may expand, but mine's gon get explicit/
i can sum up ya verse in one simple word: BULLSHIT/
lock away my keyboard? why dont you lock away ya mouth/
no one gives a shit about those stories you talkin bout/
cali aint bringin it? oh i think u made a mistake/
ill smack ya stupid little ass until ya spirit breaks/
chillin? fuck that, i wouldnt chill with you fa dough/
you arent good at illin, just go outside and be a hoe/
you may not be a scarecrow, but you aint a female empowered/
cuz you try to fake toughness, but you really like the lion, a coward/
im fuckin sick, ill, dope, bitchin, anything you can think to say/
talkin bout ya life? bitch i aint got all day/
while you out doin big things, im signed to a record deal/
you bringin a story style? fuck that, aint nothin there to feel/
you talk shit for an hour, but yo im a rappa with class/
and oh, one more thing, some them singin lessons up ya ass


...aight....vote

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This battle was good, but...

Ocanti: Your verse was good, but I didn't really feel your story this time. You needed to say some stuff that hit home harder, cause your punches weren't that effective. Oh and when you talk about the both of you in your verse, it kinda weakens it. But everything else in your verse was pretty good.

Doc Knock: Your verse was good. I liked the way you attacked her lines and made them your own metas. Punches coulda been a little more effective, but you had decent wordplay.

Vote: Doc Knock

aight battle....

ocanti.... you came pretty weak.....
your flow and structure was off
punches were gay..no offense
you rhymed like 8 lines 2gether

Doc.... better structure... good flow
punches were decent.. could of been better
You fed big time... but you still had a better verse

vote-Doc

hit this up with an honest vote....thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104078

Doc took this with harder hitting punches and a more creative verse. oCANTis verse was lacking in punches and the floe was kinda fucked.
Pleased rop an honest one here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103729

THAT WAS A GOOD BATTLE
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Ocanti you have improved since me and you battled.. good work keep it up girl..but unfortunatly 168 had a better verse with better punches that landed harder and where more on point then your where, keep elevating you will get there aventualy..No hate just a vote

peace

Can both of you please return the favor and vote honestly on my battle... I took the time you should too..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104281

Thank You.. Much Appriciated
Peace

Im sorry i meant to say doc_knock instead of 168 i was readin a verse by that person and just confused the two sorry for the confusion and this freepost.

Sorry :(

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Good battle, my vote wud go to Doc!

any chance u can vote on these?? please??

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104450

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104120

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104452

yeah i think this is the way i should say it................................................ ...............................doc knock gets the win..............................................g ood battle.......heres the breakdown though

Flow:doc....well both actually
Structure:both
complex=both
enjoyment=docknock.....i seen his was more fucnnny
punches-docknock....I seen a lot more punches that were ill than ocanti
personals=yeah.....docknock ^same as that
overall=doc knock....I seen better out of you both...You guys should keep up the work u have been back then....dont be lazy

s0rry to point out but thats a crew vote and u said no crew voting............................................ .................................

Punches= Doc Knock, They Actually Connected...Ocanti, Come Harder With Punches, They Were WWEEAAKK

Structure= Doc Knock, Your Lines Were Near The Same Length Every Time, Ocanti, Make You Lines The Same Length

Flow= Doc Knock, You Both Had Ok Flow. But Since Doc Had Betta Structure, His Flow Is Better..

Vocab= Didn't Really See Any

Multies= Didn't Really See Any

Ocanti= You Need To Work On Everything Badly. Punches Sucked, You Can Elevate, Structure Was Even Worse, And Flow Was Off. Fix Those And Throw Some Vocab IN Your Verse

Doc Knock= You Need To Work ON Everything Too, Just Not As Badly. Punches Were Decent, Structure Was Decent, Flow Was Decent Too. Throw Some Multies And Elevate

Overall= Doc Knock

Hit This UP

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103925