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adagio vs. brethren
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usual rules check in when ya see this checked in |
ill spit after ya have checked in................................................ .....
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check in, due in no more than one hour! MAKE SURE YOU READ THIS, I don't want this battle taking all month.
O yea, go ahead and drop |
Ive got an open mind 24/7//
You shouldnt battle anymore just give up// Like your momma said its better safe than sorry// I took her advice, I wore a condom when I fucked her// I felt for her, she dont need another son like you// When you came out the world was in shock// The worlds ugliest baby, so tha doc slapped ya mom// Go crawl back under ya stone before ya get stepped on// Im gonna smoke you like I would canibus// Just Get out of here, heres some coin go catch the bus// hurry up and spit, aint got all night |
Ok, the only way you'd possibly win, is if people read my verse, and mistake is for yours,
How can you fuck, when your dick is as big as apostrophed words? I'm harrasing this bitch, like he was a woman working in the office, Accomplih literacy dude, before you attack with that nonsense, Like Jennifer Lopez, I can still beat you with half-assed, I could speak fucking gibberish, and you still couldn't match that, You're shitty like a trash-bag, I'm still on the wonder, How you could beat anybody, your verse needs a plunger, And just to crush you I'm go out with a bang, shut your eyelids, Oddjob faggot, get a hobby, and a lolly-pop, so then I can kill you like a virus. |
alright, ready for votes
Bitch. |
lookin for some votes up in here.....................................
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Adagio.... The best advice I could give you would be: Learn how to rhyme. Only your last 4 lines rhymes..... That's all I'm gonna say Quote:
Brethren, you rhymed, so that's a plus. work on your punches, man, they ain't hittin. Try and work some personals into your verse next time.... Good job though Vote: Brethren. Overall better verse. |
I know this was just enough to beat him, I don't wanna waste material on weak kids, uppin
Wait till I get a battle with a Elite, I'm drop some crazy shit |
uppin
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Let's get some fucking votes please............................................ ....
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its not the greatest battle but can we get some votes in her please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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How about we make it first to 2 votes, at this rate, it'll take about another month. Just Kiddin. Uppin this shit, vote, kwit fucking sleepin
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5th Fucking UP, this is fucking redicilous, I've voted on 10-20 fucking battles, and I'm repayed with one, what the fuck is this
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Uhh.. Is It Me... Or Did Adagio's Verse Not Ryhme....
Punches....Clearly Breth...Tha Plunger.. And "" Lines Flow...Breth Not Really Any Personals.... Creatvity/ Wordplay....Definately Breth Vote-Brethren Yall Need To Vote On This Battle....Brethren Deserves Tha Win |
apologies but adiago that was terrible
Flow: Breth Wordplay/Metaz: breth Multis: breth Humou: breth Structure: both Bretheren Kained him |
sorry..freepost
i spelt both your names wrong.........apologies........................... .................................................. ..... |
well.....uhhhh.....LoL....no need to really break this down, because adagio didn't even rhyme, LoL....
punches=breth wordplay=breth multi'z=N/A flow=breth Brethren took every category vote=Brethren |
whats the fuckin point of cats sayin who won if they cant POLL VOTE thats the idea of the POLL so ya can POLL VOTE
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^^^^^thats exactly what i was thinking, ive made a suggestion to the mods about it in Q&A, so we will see what happens
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lookin for some votes up in here.....................................
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lookin for some votes up in here.....................................
uppin...................................(3) |
can we get some votes up in here..........................................
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just uppin this for these cats this has been active since monday............................................ ..............................
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adagio you upped like 8 times im reportin this so brethren will win due to disqualification, im doing you guys both a favor becus brethren was gonna win anyway and this thread has been up since monday
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^^^word there wernt really any personals in there and breth definatly had better flow vote:breth |
This Was A Pretty 1 Sided Battle Brethen Took Thios Easily With The Flow Puches wordplay Multi Use Etc.. Half Of Other Dudes Shit Didnt Even Rhyme SMH....
Vote=Brethern Can Ya'll Vote On This??.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102778 |
Thanks everybody, but Autopsy, your link doesn't work
Damn 100 characters |
adagio is DQed for upping more than 5 times.
Remember:Every post after both verses are dropped are considered ups |
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