Verstyle v.s Se7eN
 

ayo,

rules:

10-20 lines
Explain votes
blind spit
and 1 hour time limit

U KNOW WAT i'LL JUSS DROP MY VERSE N E WAYZ Typing it now**********************************************

Ayo,

Verstyle is a lyricist, without a clear knowledge of wat year it is
You couldn't spit grand champ spits, if DMX was hearing this

I punch your raps, and tell every mothafucka on dis site ya wack
Your faker than Murder INC, putting out a gospel soundtrack

Verstyle is good at his game, I'll have him stretching his brain
Smack his bitch dad so hard, I have him rearrange his last name

I go against the grain so tactical, this bitches style is so practical
He can't beat me in a spit, if fairy's gave you a skill that's magical

You a 10-0 record why u wanna lose now, watcha gonna do now
Verstyle's 1st lost so sad, u can lose 2 ways bitch, so choose now

I spit against this MC who's undefeated, I'm about done so read it
Your mouth turned into a pussy wit lips, your wack shit feeds it

I beat a fucking MC clown, buried so far under the fucking ground
That his self-esteem got shot and now his ego juss went down

So next time Verstyle aKa Ja Rule's bitch, u spit some kewl shit
You'll remember our battle and how I took you 2 school bitch

Ive checked ya rhymes you couldn’t pack punches if you gift wrapped ya fists
Your just a wack bitch, your skills lopsided and sucks like miss matching tits
Fuck Se7eN, that’s just an alias so you can muster failures
Cus like non custard ailments ya passed sloppy and nowhere close to sick
You shouldn’t boast ya thick cus we know your mostly bitch and ya raps get mouldy quick
You dropping more bad lyrics than micheal Jackson fumbling rhyme books
Get some real attacks faggot, or just keep mumbling ya mimed hooks
Every battle verse you post makes reference to your madd rhymes and name
Faggot should be jailed for wackness and crimes against this game
How about a little bit of wordplay or better yet how about a punch or two
Hey man why you all red, oh im sorry is it that time of the month for you
So what you can flow bitch? you about original as thumbs and digits
You’ve lost sight of all remnants of punches like boxers with cataracts
ive stolen your drive for rap like taking a hostage cadillac
your falling short of the minimum mark in rap like clumsy wacks in running tests
you always seem to be two steps behind me, like backs huntin chests

Finisher:

My Divine Scriptures Intertwine Mixtures of Mind Pictures
and Sinister Quotes that don't Administer Hope cuz you're Fucked
when I Drop like a Prisoner's Soap

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damn. this was a very close battles. both threw very good punches. both had very good flow. very good structure. good multis. but im gonna break it down a lil bit.

punches - ver (by a very very little hair)

multis - 7 (just feelin a lil more)

flow - tie (both were easy to read and came good)

structure - tie (look up ^^)

overall - ver (this was very close, but im only giving it to him cuz he had a very little better punches)

vote - ver

this was very close, for the 5th time. lol, scores:

ver - 9.7/10

7 - 9.5/10

punches is what won it, but good job both of ya

sry bout that guys. i posted on my bros name. well, just use the explanation from above.

vote - ver

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se7en- structure was good, some of the punches were tight, wordplay was ok, multis were minimal

verstyle- strucutre was good, punches were ill, wordplay was good, multis were nice, the closer made this battle though

conclusion- verstyle takes this wit tighter punches and an ill closer

VOTE- verstyle

yo if u dont mind please hit up my battle wit lil' tagger.........

peace...........

upping #1 for some honest votes on this battle..............
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EErrr Vote people... Upping #2..................
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Honestly there wasn;t much special in this battle,

I can't poll vote anyways yet, but i'll put in some insight for u

Verstyle, your verse had better wordplay, altough some played concepts........i.e., gift wrap

se7en, punches were hard, but nothing was personal, that verse could have battle dme, no one would see the difference if u changed a few words.........

^^^
On that note my vote would got to verstyle, overall, he took the battle.

Vote- Verstyle

I can't edit my post...sorry, but hit my battle vs. Pr3cise,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104306

seven was played as fuck no wordplay and no personals
the punches u used hit for shit and are wack as fuck
sorry:(

versytly came played but wordplay was there
and the punches were better

he wins

vote - verstyte

you know i have been watching this verstyle kid and i really like his stuff...........nice job too se7en though....i think it was really close but ver has got some good wordplay............im not hatin on either but i just like vers style better........
peace

I liked this line......How about a little bit of wordplay or better yet how about a punch or two
Hey man why you all red, oh im sorry is it that time of the month for you

^^^LMAO^^^ yea thanks kid, appriciated the votes from those who have voted....still upping to get this battle over with #3

Thank You
Peace

MY FEELINGS EXACTLY
Except I can vote I vote for verstyle cuz all around better verse but....The last line of sevens verse was nice

you might of forgotten to poll vote...go back and check please..
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Thank You
peace

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sorry for the freepost but I forgot to include it in my last message oh and if you can't find the battles go to search cuz I don't know how to post a link.

That would be something if I never voted and no one else came in here to look at your battle that would be fucked up for you. Well you kniow what that's what I go through every day on here. EIther I'm just so "weak" or I'm tight but they don't feel like voting.
I figured it out It's cuz i'm a gurl...........................