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Wr!te Mind vs. Pr3cise
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No c/h/dr EXPLAINED VOTES ready when you are |
are you almost ready to drop.....im almost done keying......
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Get smashed wit ease, I say words louder than action speaks
you're ur a junky, buggin off downers, crack n speed tappin’ keys, wit ashy knees, needle tracks, n’ nasty teeth, his whole social life is revolvin around his dad’s PC Write you're fuckin garbage bums dicking trash cans Your style has passed hands worse than high school class rants Ya whole rap styles kitty litter a shitty mixture I’m mini-hitler, you’re as frightening as titty twisters get hit wit a stray, from rocket fire from missle arrays, you’re a fag workin at Foot Locker... officially gay |
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should be, Write you're fuckin garbage LIKE street bums dickin trash cans |
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Funny I came here not caring, knowing this kids pleasure is to Wr!te So if winning was my bearing, then my measurements Precise This bitch needs to face history because I leave him in my dust The only reason u taste victory is because I wrote it on my nuts He thinks its good that he can fight me, but he’s tethered to worse And I didn’t want to take you lightly, but you feathered your verse I could have came and blown down your house, but this isn’t a fantasy You could write my name on your mouse, you still couldn’t handle me Fuck this shit, the kid is whack and I ‘m trying to suck They say “Losing is for pussy’s” and this kids dying to fuck |
Alright upping for v---------------------------------------------------------------------
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who is this whats your alias....pm me
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Up x2
son latley it's been a huge pain in my ass to up a post with one hundred characters so I'll waster the spce to bitch about it becuas ei have nothing better to do |
One Sided Battle.....
Punches.....This Person Had Punches On Every Line......Wr!te Multies....This Person Had Multies on Every Line....Wr!te Flow.....Perfect.....Wr!te...Structure Good As Well Creativity.....Wr!te.....Very Much So This bitch needs to face history because I leave him in my dust The only reason u taste victory is because I wrote it on my nuts ^^ Fuckin Sick... Pre....Try Not To Ryhme Four Lines Together Vote-WR!TE M!ND |
Wr!te Mind is no newbie, that's for sure...
Better wordplay, better punches, just overall had a better verse....not hate towards Pr3cise though, you had a decent verse...I'd just say work on fitting in more punches, too many fillers.... nice shit Wr!te... Vote=Wr!te Mind vote on my battle w/ Echo if y'all could... .::[oNe]::. |
Up Up
Up Up Can Only Go Up...................... Damn.....I didn't think Shania Twain would pop in my head here............oh well, uppin for votes |
alright, Precise, your verse was good. It was just filled with multis. But, punches win battles, and yours lacked hard hittin punches in most lines... That foot locker line was probably your best.
Write, you had some clever lines, solid multis, good punches, overall better verse. Vote: Wr!te (sadly, I can't poll vote yet) It'd be cool if someone could check out this battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...18&pagenumber=1 |
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If you can poll vote it would be appreciated........................ Vote, vote, vote, vote, 100 characters vote, read, vote,,,,i won |
precise win the multis battles
but write def won the everything else battle precise i've seen your shit before..its pretty good.. but write is a vet.and showed he is a vet in the battle his punches hit harder..and his flow was on point pre..had good flow as well..but punhces didnt really hit as hard write had good wordplay and creativity poll vote= write mind good read from both here |
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polling this vote keep forgettin i cant poll under that name yet... vote=write mind... |
aight
cise you came str8 - my favorite line was that garbage can line - other parts were choppy and some of your verse really wasnt a battle verse - write your verse was tyte - hot punches up and down the battle - you win this battle |
Up x2 this time, lets get two poll votes and close this shit up huh?
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write mind for me, he killed da battle....aint wantin to battle u in a hurry....
now i voted any chance u can vote on mine? please i took da time for u :D http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104450 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104120 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104452 |
your links don't work genius.............................
sorry............................................. .... |
Let's get this shit closed...........
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all you sleepers die............................................... ... Last up, come one peeps, two poll votes need |
write mind def got that
overall better flow as a whole, it was funny too, amusing is a must he said cus it was tattooed on my nuts, great! yo write you should come check out the dynasty soldiers im sure you could get in |
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precise won the multis categor, but write definitely won everything else in the battle.
precise, you coulda done better, but write is a lil more experienced than you in battlin and he showed it in this battle. his punches hit harder..and his flow was on point precise, you had a good flow...structure was a lil messy, but you can fix dat... overall it was a good read by both catz.... vote-writemind. |
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