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BombZ vs. Eki
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bombz aint shit,, and notthin but a pussy nigga,,,, im dah bigga nigga,,,i got 10 says u aint eva touched a pussy,,,, bet its cause u like it in the tooshi
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Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer,
Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air, You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break, Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age', U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit, Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits, Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments, For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense, You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent, |
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Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes
I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with with swords I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong Insane Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine ............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn..................... Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom, ............dates back to your childhood.............. ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass, your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy) |
my vote down
Bombz Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer, Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air, You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break, Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age', U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit, Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits, Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments, For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense, You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent, good wordplay good vocab and strieght pounchs overall a very good verse but you could have came on harder -----no hate jus a vote--- Eki Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with with swords I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong Insane Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine ............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn..................... Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom, ............dates back to your childhood.............. ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass, your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy) better overall verse with better and stronger pounches and personals really got me laughing better wordplay overall vote ---------Eki---------- no hate jus an honest vote vote my battle in sig tight battle you had peace |
aight boyz i can't poll it won't let me
get that fixed peace sorry for this freepost but had to tell yeah i hope i reached a hundred fuckin characters |
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BombZ
Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer, Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air, LMAO... nice meta.. kinda extended You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break, Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age', LMAOOOOO nice last line U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit, Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits, Humerous.. what what this is 2 funny Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments, For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense, You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent, ohhh thats cold... ha ha nice closer Eki Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with with swords ..... ohh nice last line I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong wak.... sowwy:( Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine ............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn..................... Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom, ............dates back to your childhood.............. woah whats up with the dotting.. damn ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass, your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy) good closer.... Eki u had to explain.. ur structure wasnt too good.. and some stuff was wack.. but my vote goes to Bombz.. he came a bit harder... |
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bobmz had much better flow and humor in his lines. eki had the personals but it wasnt enough to overcome the punches from bombz. bombz wins my vote wiht the funny lines and good flow |
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BombZ
Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer, Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air, ^^lol...good opener very witty...well done You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break, Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age' ^^LOL...that was fuckin dope i have never heard that very creative U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit, Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits, ^^midgets is played but you did use the line concept well Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments, For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense, You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent, ^^Good line...i liked that...well done finisher Eki Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with swords ^^Alright line didn't sound to creative...flowed good... I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong ^^not bad...didnt hit hard though Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine ............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn..................... Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom, ............dates back to your childhood.............. ^^meh another okie punch ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass, your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy) ^^good finisher...but thats about it Overall Bombs came harder vote B Yo it wont lemme poll vote ask a mod to fix that...sorry guys |
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Well, Bombz blew up here...
But it was self-destruction. Weak punches, some decent vocab, but the wordplay wasn't there, cept for that "stone age" line (that was tight). Eki came tight, good flow... But I think he had the harder punches (the "sister" line was nasty). And I think his wordplay was steadier and wittier. Not by alot, this wasn't a blow out. But I've seen Bombz do way better. Eki for the win... Holla back... Vote here, please!!! |
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Vote-Eki
Punches-Tie..nuttin devastatin from both.. Flow-Both-both had an iight but dodgy scheme Sustainment-Both..both came good..but too many fillers metas-Eki..this is wot edged the battle Structure-More or less the same Eki jus had more witty metas thats all that seperated this battle Bombz w/ a record like that ya gotta elevate fast pz MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ..BEING SLEPT ON http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104776 |
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Bombz takes this w/ an overall better verse
didnt like EkI's at all, too messy V/ Bombz... ..................... ........................ ....................... |
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Bombz=?? Lol He Really Had No Personals And His Flow Was REally Wierd Some Punches I Didnt Feel At All He Came Aite But He Kept Fallin Off
Eki=Lol He Smoked Bombz He Had That Signature Personal Which Was Hot And Had Me Rollin And The Dad Shit Was Funny Soon U Took It Cause Ur Shit Was Funnier And More Creative Vote=Eki |
my vote goes to eki youve elavated alot man whereas bombz has seemed to go the other way.o/well,
eki had better structure(bombz was streched), harder punches and better personals.......... nice verse. plz hit this up na man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105059 ................pz |
uppin this bitch, everyohne sleepin' on this bitch, come on, we need some votes niggas
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Ok, here's tha breakdown:
Bombz - bombed. most of your "punches" were little more than wordplay, nothing really hard hitting. You definitely have a creative mind, I think with a little more emphasis on personals you could be a heavy hitter. My only advice - humor not necessary for hurtful punches. but humor is good, enjoyable read, no beef, you just haven't fulfilled your potential yet, but it is there for sure. Eki - similiar to Bombz in lacking hard hitting punches, though I did see more personals from you, which I feel are the true grit of a battle. unfortunately his creativity far outweighed yours in this battle, which made his verse stand out more. I liked the "less than 2/3" of the crew name punch, nice personal. I see a lot of potential for you as well, keep it up. My vote goes to Eki for the personals/punches yall hit up my battle with Dadi Kewl (just click the link in my sig) and drop an honest vote. peep the way I broke him down and see if you feel me on what I am saying about punches/personals. peace dogs |
Eki Had Some Ok Punches, But Bombz Had Good Wordplay And He Hit Harder Punches..But Not As Many Personals Than Eki..But It Was Good Enough To Slide By For A Win..
Punches - Bombz (Threw More) Personals - Eki Vocab - Bombz Flow - Bombz Structure - Tie Wordplay - Bombz Opener - Bombz (Eki's Didnt Even Rhyme) Closer - Eki (OJ Lines Are Old) Vote - Bombz For Having More Punches And Better Wordplay.. Will You Two Check One Of These? FuE-xIoN vs. Kaos Theory FuE-xIoN vs. -Technician- |
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man...this was an okay battle..it was close fo sho...
My vote goes to Eki...More entertaining and just had the slight edge in my opinion... tough to vote on...but decent battle guys Vote: Eki. Hit up battles in sig plz.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token Your a fuckass token. |
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I think that bombz won this battle cuz of the stone age punch mostly, and because he had relevant stuff. Wehneki went off on some tangent about sister banging father I think that's where he lost the battle. An okay battle I guess. PLease return the favor if you see my name on a thread
Vote bombz ( maybe u should change your name, lol) |
ok uppin to get this closed... its been open for ages
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