ILLunatic vs Center Sight
 

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post soon
no bullshit

keeeeeeeeeezy fo sheeeeeeeeeezy son..


no location? hmm..
ya must live near my punches, i know they down to go there
cuz the one to knock you outs.. bout to 'come out of nowhere'
theres no need to continue, but i guess i'll saddle it through
even tho its no secret that this cats 17-2.. from battling newbs
always babbling too.. ya punches suck & ya flows even worse
& its not funny.. yet i die of laughter everytime i read a verse
knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold
cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control
theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor
cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer

just to let youknow dawg that ryhme is bout to get ate by ILL....u underestimated ILL da man got flow....GOOD LUCK THOUGH

ummmmmmmmmmm.... SHUT THA FUCK UP



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wow talk abour Front Lines dickriders................................
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LoL...
I thought i'd set it up
But oh well this good
Nice drop.. dont kno who HotBarz is
But thats kinda funny he said that
I'll try and drop in a few minutes
But if i dont.. i'll drop when i get home
From school....................................

7-1... ... ...Obviously your over-rated cuz your too weak and cant stand my heat
... ...Killed in line of defeat, Center Sight's punches couldn't hit if played in repeat
Actually thinkin he's got me beat... but nah cuz this bitch couldn't handle my flow
...Shoulda killed him along time ago, ugh oh, did center sight just call me a hoe?
...That was a mistake, kid just take a break, cuz its hard when ya rhymes is fake
For goodness sake, look at this skank, He's 7-1? he must be in tha reversed rank
... ... ...Ya claim ya 1st loss came from DQ, well bitch i really wouldn't wanna be you
Cuz after the punches i spit hit you, you mind as well be called casper cuz ya see-through
Center Sight Who??? Oh the kid i just ripped with sin and threw out to tha recycle bin...
Well...Do ya feel tha pain? cuz i already feel tha win, wanna go....well... lets do it again

Dropped....But didn't really try
But i'm still shit i got this... ...
... ... ... ... ... ...UPPIN for votes... ... ... ... ... ...

Damn...I just got home from school
And this shit aint got a single vote?
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Center Sight

ya must live near my punches, i know they down to go there
cuz the one to knock you outs.. bout to 'come out of nowhere'
You might wanna re-word that but that was aight
theres no need to continue, but i guess i'll saddle it through
even tho its no secret that this cats 17-2.. from battling newbs
LoL... Good Personal .. but most ppl battle newBs
always babbling too.. ya punches suck & ya flows even worse
& its not funny.. yet i die of laughter everytime i read a verse
Umm that was kinda wack..
knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold
cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control
The 1st line poses no purpose in the verse
theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor
cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer
Wat a weak closer...


ILLunatic

7-1... ... ...Obviously your over-rated cuz your too weak and cant stand my heat
... ...Killed in line of defeat, Center Sight's punches couldn't hit if played in repeat
Nice multis right there what! lol
Actually thinkin he's got me beat... but nah cuz this bitch couldn't handle my flow
...Shoulda killed him along time ago, ugh oh, did center sight just call me a hoe?
LMAOOOO ha ha humor
...That was a mistake, kid just take a break, cuz its hard when ya rhymes is fake
For goodness sake, look at this skank, He's 7-1? he must be in tha reversed rank
Oh nooo lol... DISSSSSSSSS
... ... ...Ya claim ya 1st loss came from DQ, well bitch i really wouldn't wanna be you
Cuz after the punches i spit hit you, you mind as well be called casper cuz ya see-through
LMAO... nice nice.. but a bit played (casper)
Center Sight Who??? Oh the kid i just ripped with sin and threw out to tha recycle bin...
Well...Do ya feel tha pain? cuz i already feel tha win, wanna go....well... lets do it again
Nice closer


Structure-Center sight
flow- Tie
Punches- Illunatic
Humor-Illunatic
Metaz-Center Sight
Multis-Illunatic

Vote-Illunatic

and your the one who said no stretched bars bwahaha whatever.. merked you.. votes will show that soon enough

knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold
cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control
The 1st line poses no purpose in the verse



dont evfer vote on one of my battles again, the first line is OBVIOUSLY THE SET UP LINE YOU RETARDED FUCK

think your hot?
heat on lock

wow your fuckin dumb, you were obviously an aim, vote, because u dont come in here and vote.. i notice shit.. you dickriding fuck

center sight took this battle.. his wordplay was much more advanced that illunatics shit.. his disses were more clever too

multies- center sight
impact of disses- center sight
creativeness- center sight
flow- center sight (illunatic had some stretched ass bars)

VOTE- Center sight

i need votes in this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103902

centre sight
no location? hmm..
ya must live near my punches, i know they down to go there
cuz the one to knock you outs.. bout to 'come out of nowhere'
6/10

theres no need to continue, but i guess i'll saddle it through
even tho its no secret that this cats 17-2.. from battling newbs
6/10

always babbling too.. ya punches suck & ya flows even worse
& its not funny.. yet i die of laughter everytime i read a verse
5/10

knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold
cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control
5/10

theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor
cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer
5/10

overall 27/50


illunatic
7-1... ... ...Obviously your over-rated cuz your too weak and cant stand my heat
... ...Killed in line of defeat, Center Sight's punches couldn't hit if played in repeat
6/10

Actually thinkin he's got me beat... but nah cuz this bitch couldn't handle my flow
...Shoulda killed him along time ago, ugh oh, did center sight just call me a hoe?
4/10

...That was a mistake, kid just take a break, cuz its hard when ya rhymes is fake
For goodness sake, look at this skank, He's 7-1? he must be in tha reversed rank
5/10

... ... ...Ya claim ya 1st loss came from DQ, well bitch i really wouldn't wanna be you
Cuz after the punches i spit hit you, you mind as well be called casper cuz ya see-through
5/10

Center Sight Who??? Oh the kid i just ripped with sin and threw out to tha recycle bin...
Well...Do ya feel tha pain? cuz i already feel tha win, wanna go....well... lets do it again
4/10


overall 24/50



my vote center sight

both you plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104431

Hmmmmm....
Aint this a bitch....
Anyways... UPPIN FOR REAL VOTES.......
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This was a good battle.

Center: Your verse was pretty good......you structured it pretty well i thought.......you had some nice multies through out the piece, i liked that.....flow was good...you had some alright punches, none that really hit hard i thought.

ILL: You had a good verse, the better one i thought....Your structure was ok, could use work though.....flow was decent in it....had some multies but not as good as Center....but you did have the better punches i thought.

Overall this was a good battle...but my vote goes to ILL, he had better punches.

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Thank you.......
A real vote.......
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Unlike Centers
Dick Ryders.....
Oh yea Center
One of ya votes
Was inproper....

how was the vote improper i posted an explanation....................................... .................................................. .....

^Stop Freeposting
...Read the Voting rules...
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Center Sight

ya must live near my punches, i know they down to go there
cuz the one to knock you outs.. bout to 'come out of nowhere'
not to good..weak punch
theres no need to continue, but i guess i'll saddle it through
even tho its no secret that this cats 17-2.. from battling newbs
No hes not, ive seen his battles..fake personals are wack
always babbling too.. ya punches suck & ya flows even worse
& its not funny.. yet i die of laughter everytime i read a verse
You dropped first...so u couldnt see his verse...wack
knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold
cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control
No diss...just self shit...ok though
theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor
cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer
played...so-so closer

ILLunatic

7-1... ... ...Obviously your over-rated cuz your too weak and cant stand my heat
... ...Killed in line of defeat, Center Sight's punches couldn't hit if played in repeat
Good opening...good punch and creative
Actually thinkin he's got me beat... but nah cuz this bitch couldn't handle my flow
...Shoulda killed him along time ago, ugh oh, did center sight just call me a hoe?
LMAO....funny line....cuz that hoe shit he did was wack
...That was a mistake, kid just take a break, cuz its hard when ya rhymes is fake
For goodness sake, look at this skank, He's 7-1? he must be in tha reversed rank
Good Punch...creative
... ... ...Ya claim ya 1st loss came from DQ, well bitch i really wouldn't wanna be you
Cuz after the punches i spit hit you, you mind as well be called casper cuz ya see-through
Kinda Played...but creative
Center Sight Who??? Oh the kid i just ripped with sin and threw out to tha recycle bin...
Well...Do ya feel tha pain? cuz i already feel tha win, wanna go....well... lets do it again
Played...

Overall - ILLunatic...his punches hit harder and his verse was more creative

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UPPIN #4..
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Center- come out pretty strong but I didnt think the puches were all there
"knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold
cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control"
Good line but no punch
"theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor
cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer"
Very weak closer
I liked your opener tho


ILL-Came strong flow was off at times kinda like you forced it a little tryin to add to much shit in ya verse makes it sound a little cluttered. You had some dope punches and multis tho

Your opener funny and was strong I liked it
You stayed strong threwout and your verse was pretty damn funny



OVERALL- ILL
He had better punches
Center's were a little weak
But a good battle none the less



Even tho I cant poll vote I still took some time to give feed back an up this post so do me the favor of voting on my shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104380

An this one has been slept on bad

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103568

Thanks

I think illunatic killed this bird!
his punches were much better, and some of the verses of centre didnt rhymed at all!
please vote on these battle, at least the 2 battlers in here! 4th day and just 1 fucking vote!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1046442

no location? hmm..
ya must live near my punches, i know they down to go there
cuz the one to knock you outs.. bout to 'come out of nowhere'
theres no need to continue, but i guess i'll saddle it through
even tho its no secret that this cats 17-2.. from battling newbs
always babbling too.. ya punches suck & ya flows even worse
& its not funny.. yet i die of laughter everytime i read a verse
knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold
cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control
theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor
cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer
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This was dope...^
Nice werdplay and decent flow...
ok punches...
kinda ok personals...
overall it was a good battle verse...
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7-1... ... ...Obviously your over-rated cuz your too weak and cant stand my heat
... ...Killed in line of defeat, Center Sight's punches couldn't hit if played in repeat
Actually thinkin he's got me beat... but nah cuz this bitch couldn't handle my flow
...Shoulda killed him along time ago, ugh oh, did center sight just call me a hoe?
...That was a mistake, kid just take a break, cuz its hard when ya rhymes is fake
For goodness sake, look at this skank, He's 7-1? he must be in tha reversed rank
... ... ...Ya claim ya 1st loss came from DQ, well bitch i really wouldn't wanna be you
Cuz after the punches i spit hit you, you mind as well be called casper cuz ya see-through
Center Sight Who??? Oh the kid i just ripped with sin and threw out to tha recycle bin...
Well...Do ya feel tha pain? cuz i already feel tha win, wanna go....well... lets do it again
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yo this was very nice...
kinda Stretched bars...but dope shit...
hard hitting punches...
hard hitting personals...
good and fly werdplay...nice style...
well ima vote for ILL cuz came with more Effort...
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peace...

Punches: Center Sight
Flow:Center
Multis: Neither
Personals: Center
Creativity: Ill
Wordplay: Ill


Vote - Center

cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer
You'd think this line would be played, but I've never heard it before, so good job.

Decent battle.

Please vote on my battle, in the sig

^ Is that another dick ryder?
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ILLunatic - Vote

LOL Major Dickriding Here..ILL Just Had The Advantage Over Center Sight..He Just Had A Better Flow, And His Verse Was More Complex With The Punchlines..Center Came Out n00bie Ish With Some Weak Punchlines..So I Think ILL Won This By Better Punchlines And More Complexitiy Inside Of His Verse...