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Island vs Born to Kill
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He's an Island unto himself, ain't no castaway... Even someone as dumb as Gilligan, would swim tha fuck away. No play, cuz he ain't got game, he's boring as birdcalls... And fucka Wilson, he ain't here, cuz this Island has no balls. Plenty of curtain calls, Avalon's always banned or retired... But you were allowed back, so I guess biters are inspired. How? Ya musta sucked a good dick ta earn that pardon... Now! Ya gettin fucked, so consider ya situation about ta harden. This battle oughta be closing, but he wants ta write a book... So in order ta flow like water, he's gonna be a babbling brook. Ramble on and on, like Robert Plant but minus the skill... That's got him always cryin, so for a change he gives milk a spill. Then there's his dark side, I've seen Av cut to tha bone... But silly me, I forgot, he's using rhymes that ain't his own! Threatened whole crews, but you were hollow and false... Cuz ya never followed through, guess ya threats lacked a pulse. Now you've called me out, the whack boy who held a tourney... Lookin ta buy clout, but ended up paying for a ride on a gurney. Hauled outta here like ya career, but since ya good at resurrection... You'll be ok in a few days, and even have a better complexion! You've just been fucked. |
You and your appetite for destruction, get the afterlife introduction
This beating is ‘on the house,’ like putting the satellite where it functions... Until you sanitize your sloppiness you wont captivize the audience At age 70 you’ve lost all competitiveness, your demise was obvious... it's obvious My flow severs frames with archetypical design of text If life’s a bitch, you’re the euphoric interval between life and death... Poundin' this chump, drownin' this punk with various sounds "down in the dumps" was ya parents' mood at ya birth and later where ya were found... and no one cares clown... just stop pretendin you're a black guy, when the closest you came to the complexion was defendin why you had the black eye... On forums all day whining... in tournys you get entered cold Cause youre just a free poster, like playboy centerfolds... You suck at trig and failed... yet thats not the best part yet ...but that this the type of fag to bring lipstick to a make-up test... WHOA! Shake this shit... now just watch me break this dude Nothing rhymed with ''Island's bitch''...till I shared the stage with you... no names were born to kill but you'll die in the moment, and honestly on Rapbattles... this is the first time I truely ever noticed you on it... This is first round k.o... in the 2nd will you regain conciousness you can even say ya verse-is fire... I'll simply take it as a compliment... I only did this battle figuring... you'd wanna jump at it this time, but I didn't know you were an acrobat... nicknamed you, "Mr. Flip-o-line"... as far as party clothing, this guy aint the best one cus hes like a fucking postcard, he always arrives with address on... i cant wait to murda ya... Born To look... if ya nice i dont care while the only thing ure itching to Kill dunny... is the lice in ur hair... this time ill show dope... you'll stare at me in amazement and start re-treating without hope... like kemotherapy patients... 13th must be missin a rib... the way he killed you quick cus he managed to eat you kid... while you were still eatin his dick... you're probably predicted to win... but in this fight you'll get slain n' it's a damn shame you only get tipped for success... like champagne... and I'm done... Next time I say I don't know you... stop tryin to be down with the popular kids and fuckin realize... You're a super senior... We don't fuckin know you..! |
Not a single vote all day...
I don't think peeps know this is finished. So a uppin I will go. And about ya footnote, Av... I guess ya just in tha dark then, kid. Peace |
strong nicer verse born with good personals
He's an Island unto himself, ain't no castaway... Even someone as dumb as Gilligan, would swim tha fuck away. No play, cuz he ain't got game, he's boring as birdcalls... And fucka Wilson, he ain't here, cuz this Island has no balls. ^^haha nice Plenty of curtain calls, Avalon's always banned or retired... But you were allowed back, so I guess biters are inspired. Then there's his dark side, I've seen Av cut to tha bone... But silly me, I forgot, he's using rhymes that ain't his own! Island..... it's obvious My flow severs frames with archetypical design of text If life’s a bitch, you’re the euphoric interval between life and death... Poundin' this chump, drownin' this punk with various sounds "down in the dumps" was ya parents' mood at ya birth and later where ya were found... and no one cares clown... just stop pretendin you're a black guy, when the closest you came to the complexion was defendin why you had the black eye... On forums all day whining... in tournys you get entered cold Cause youre just a free poster, like playboy centerfolds... ^^^dope Shake this shit... now just watch me break this dude Nothing rhymed with ''Island's bitch''...till I shared the stage with you... ^ha as far as party clothing, this guy aint the best one cus hes like a fucking postcard, he always arrives with address on... ^^^^hahahahah i cant wait to murda ya... Born To look... if ya nice i dont care while the only thing ure itching to Kill dunny... is the lice in ur hair... ^ha this time ill show dope... you'll stare at me in amazement and start re-treating without hope... like kemotherapy patients... ^nice i feel silly quoting so much stuff of Avs verse but ti was a fuckin dope entertaining verse with real good wordplay...very good shit overall i feel Island came alot stronger and he had this in all aspects v/Island |
It's all good...
As long as ya enjoyed the battle. That's what it's there for! Thanks for voting, Dick. Peace |
Best line from BTK-
And fucka Wilson, he ain't here, cuz this Island has no balls. ^^lmfao Best line from Island- no names were born to kill but you'll die in the moment, and honestly on Rapbattles... this is the first time I truely ever noticed you on it... ^^ouch....lol overall- I aint gettin into everything...there was way too much.... but overall... Born came wit ok Flo, great meti4's, decent punches, nice multi's and nice personals Island came wit nice flo, ok meti4's, hard punches, ok multis's, ans punishing personals.... I guess i'd have to give it to punches and personals...... Born was much funnier but it didnt help his punches...... nice from both- but vote- Island |
thanks for the votes kids...
and B2k... Dunny... it wasn't a foot note... just added to the impact of the verse... don't worry about it... Island still loves you... |
oh my god!...i ain't gonna quote nuthin...but i'll just put in my two
cents followed wit a vote... B2K...u came out nice...good personals no doubt...u did a good job.. but.. Island ripped u a new asshole...his wordplay was sick...his vocab was dope...his multies were on point...and his punches just rocked it...seriously... good battle.... great verse Island.... vote-Island |
Better Stuff From BTK...Good battle
personals were nice and you put across a decent verse...props But...Island tore this...and whored you his wordplay and punches just overpowered your verse Good battle V/island.. |
v/Avalon
honestly..this is one of the best ive seen B2K come... nice structure...flow..punches..basicly everything was on point.. haven't seen a verse from you like this in a long time but i really enjoyed the read... quotable lines No play, cuz he ain't got game, he's boring as birdcalls... And fucka Wilson, he ain't here, cuz this Island has no balls. Plenty of curtain calls, Avalon's always banned or retired... But you were allowed back, so I guess biters are inspired. nice^ line here born..lol *shakes head* and then i read Island's verse... i could be wrong but i didnt see not one played concept or punch not saying b2k was came played either...but every concept was original...and creative. vocab was amazing and wordplay was def on point.. i just kept reading punch after punch... and personal after personal... quotables: You suck at trig and failed... yet thats not the best part yet ...but that this the type of fag to bring lipstick to a make-up test... this time ill show dope... you'll stare at me in amazement and start re-treating without hope... like kemotherapy patients... had me lmao ^ with these and many others but these were my favorite... dam this was a good battle and born put up a fight but... Av took this with cold heart personals, and excellent wordplay good read..no hate to either...just an honest vote out... poll vote=Island get a mod to poll it..for some reason i cant poll here... |
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I hear ya, my man... Pretty much what I was doing with mine... Ya dropped a great verse... Good victory. Props to ya. And peace. |
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ok...bored right now and got some time...so I feel I can do a line by line breakdown
B2K He's an Island unto himself, ain't no castaway... Even someone as dumb as Gilligan, would swim tha fuck away. lol No play, cuz he ain't got game, he's boring as birdcalls... And fucka Wilson, he ain't here, cuz this Island has no balls. LMFAO nice shit Plenty of curtain calls, Avalon's always banned or retired... But you were allowed back, so I guess biters are inspired. decent How? Ya musta sucked a good dick ta earn that pardon... Now! Ya gettin fucked, so consider ya situation about ta harden. lol..pretty good This battle oughta be closing, but he wants ta write a book... So in order ta flow like water, he's gonna be a babbling brook. a bit played...but flipped nicely Ramble on and on, like Robert Plant but minus the skill... That's got him always cryin, so for a change he gives milk a spill. weak.... Then there's his dark side, I've seen Av cut to tha bone... But silly me, I forgot, he's using rhymes that ain't his own! lol.....good Threatened whole crews, but you were hollow and false... Cuz ya never followed through, guess ya threats lacked a pulse. aight Now you've called me out, the whack boy who held a tourney... Lookin ta buy clout, but ended up paying for a ride on a gurney. eh...... Hauled outta here like ya career, but since ya good at resurrection... You'll be ok in a few days, and even have a better complexion! lol..nice finisher Island- You and your appetite for destruction, get the afterlife introduction This beating is ‘on the house,’ like putting the satellite where it functions... [B]lmao..nice opener Until you sanitize your sloppiness you wont captivize the audience At age 70 you’ve lost all competitiveness, your demise was obvious... hahaha...nice..personals are killing it's obvious My flow severs frames with archetypical design of text If life’s a bitch, you’re the euphoric interval between life and death... Lmao....nice shit...multis are nice as hell Poundin' this chump, drownin' this punk with various sounds "down in the dumps" was ya parents' mood at ya birth and later where ya were found... ohhhhh shiitttt and no one cares clown... just stop pretendin you're a black guy, when the closest you came to the complexion was defendin why you had the black eye... No, you ended your streak!!! this was aight... On forums all day whining... in tournys you get entered cold Cause youre just a free poster, like playboy centerfolds... pretty good You suck at trig and failed... yet thats not the best part yet ...but that this the type of fag to bring lipstick to a make-up test.. the woah sort of takes away from this..but the bar was nice as fuck..lmao Shake this shit... now just watch me break this dude Nothing rhymed with ''Island's bitch''...till I shared the stage with you... lol no names were born to kill but you'll die in the moment, and honestly on Rapbattles... this is the first time I truely ever noticed you on it... your first weak bar...flow was pretty choppy here as well.. This is first round k.o... in the 2nd will you regain conciousness you can even say ya verse-is fire... I'll simply take it as a compliment... lol...decent I only did this battle figuring... you'd wanna jump at it this time, but I didn't know you were an acrobat... nicknamed you, "Mr. Flip-o-line"... lol...nice as far as party clothing, this guy aint the best one cus hes like a fucking postcard, he always arrives with address on... LMFAO...this was fuckin hilarious! i cant wait to murda ya... Born To look... if ya nice i dont care while the only thing ure itching to Kill dunny... is the lice in ur hair... haha...good shit... this time ill show dope... you'll stare at me in amazement and start re-treating without hope... like kemotherapy patients... What???Hahahhaha! 13th must be missin a rib... the way he killed you quick cus he managed to eat you kid... while you were still eatin his dick... ooh shit....nice personal you're probably predicted to win... but in this fight you'll get slain n' it's a damn shame you only get tipped for success... like champagne... pretty nice finisher Overall-Wow, truly a sick battle, both clearly showed lots of effort and came with some nice verses. Both had a great flow, nice multis, and few weak lines. But what made the difference in this battle were the punches and personals. Born had some nice ones, but Island, damn, that was some real nice shit. I just think that Island outpunched you here Born. Perhaps if Born matched his lines it might be different, but in this battle, Island simply took it with harder punches and killer personal, so he gets my vote. Mad props to both of ya. Great battle. Vote=Island |
Someone give Av his freakin win, will ya...
He earned the shit outta it. Peace 100 Characters 100 Characters 100 Characters |
OK...
Born - Some nice punches/personals here: "Plenty of curtain calls, Avalon's always banned or retired... But you were allowed back, so I guess biters are inspired." but my favorite from your verse was: "And fucka Wilson, he ain't here, cuz this Island has no balls." but alot of your verse seemed like you weren't putting full effort into it... definitely worth the read though. I think if you focus more on those personals than the general disses, you would have murdered him. Not bad though and Island - word... nice drop, especially "At age 70 you’ve lost all competitiveness, your demise was obvious..." LMFAO "If life’s a bitch, you’re the euphoric interval between life and death..." ILL AS FUCK ""down in the dumps" was ya parents' mood at ya birth and later where ya were found..." AGAIN, JUST PLAIN MEAN LOL "as far as party clothing, this guy aint the best one cus hes like a fucking postcard, he always arrives with address on..." OK, THAT'S ENOUGH... Jesus you murdered him. good battle, Island just seemed liek he wanted this way more. Nice job pz yall drop an honest vote on the battle in my sig. Thanks |
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