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It Vs. Limitz
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blind spit... both drop in 30... no d/r...hate votes... check in... |
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Heard You Need Some Work Done On Ya Word-Play..I'll Piss Ya Facts...It Gets Sacked Ten Flips Get Passed
I Caused SOLAR ENERGY *SONNED YOU* I'll Have Ray Sayin.."I MISSED YOU DAD!"* I Spit This With Acidic Characterisitics And Cannabalism Is Attacking This Kid.. Rappin Friends? Here's A Saddened Clinch..You Always FOLLOW MY LINES Like A TRUE ADLIBIST Its Real Here, No Time For Fun Now.. Leave Ya ACTIVE WORDS STUCK Like I HUNGED NOUNS.. Fuck You, Limitz KILLS IT Like BRINGING THE SUN DOWN!! It's Just A Rotten Set.. Another Kid Off The Boughten Deck Why The Return? Stick To Ya WRECKORD..Its Clearly Your Not GOOD AT TEXT** U Battling Me Is A Useless Win Ya Audios Sound Like The Flu Is Within And Ya Highest Rate Is 2 Out Of 10 Superior Wackness Gets More Blunts Than That, The Truth Would Admits I Dont Need To Battle You.. Youd Loose To My Sis*** Explanationz: * - "SONNED YOU" son...sun, get it? ** - your not good at TEXT... hes an audio guy *** - this is pretty easy... losing to my sis, she sux |
oh, btw... sorry about posting 12... i had figured i needed a good closer and i lost count of my lines, so just change the rules to 12 lines... sorry
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Start Off By Saying WTF Iz A Limitz...Tryna Pull A Gimick But U Cataclizmic...
Meaning U Ugly In Every Way...Banned For Cheating Ofcourse Ur a Figment... U Wrote T.he H.uman U.nder G.od In Yer Sig...But Why...OMG Please Stop... Your Whole Approach Was Wrong...Tried To Be Creative...& Yer Head Poped... From Streets Of Indy-Polis...But No One Supports This...Its Wak Yer Dumb... But Of Course Yer Homeless...U X-port No Speacial Brand...Cuz Yer A Bum... 3 Wins And 3 Losses...I guess Yer Evenly Distributed...ahha But Not Anymore... I guess Yer Avy Speaks For It Self...Yer Depressed And NoBody Iz Felt...Yer Tore... Imma End This Right Quick...Yer Simply A Fat Female With Small Tits................... And Couldent Pimp Me Even If I Was Grotesquely Affiliated With Dead Pits... |
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nice spit man... good job. this bitch is uppin for votes... UPPIN #1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ok... a bit played Structure was horrible Punches were ok.. Wordplay was off Personals were lacked Vocab...nah...not really Overall......10/20 Quote:
Dope shit IT Nice wordplay Vocab was good Punches were decently hard Personals were ok... Overall.......14/20 Vote-IT Simply came harder... Better structure, vocab, punches.... Limitz.... Dont Stretch ya shit so much.. And dont be cocky And dont use different colors in ya verse.. Makes it look stupid Hit this up... i'm getin d/r'd against badly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104353 |
aight. thanx for the vote dog. uppin # 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo i say a tie, i don't know who vote for here, i was falling more towards limitz, but i.t. just equaled everything. i say a tie.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104427 !!! CHECH THAT LINK OUT IF YA LOOKING FOR A CREW !!! |
yo limitz when did i battle you. i can't remember any battle, my minds blank. i'm gonna check that out but i cant remember any battle
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uppin2
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uppin3
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I know i cant poll vote, but im break it down anyway:
Limitz, Not a bad first spit. The punches werent brilliant, but they were far from bad. Your metas were ok, but you need to brush up on wordplay coz the creativity was there but it wasnt worded in the greatest way. multis & the rhyme scheme in general were both ok. Lacked personals & the flow was off at points. IT, your spit looked less complex, but had a better effect. The punches were harder hitting. metas were pretty nice. multis and rhyme scheme worked effectively. It flowed nicely & you had some quite nice personals too. Vote: It Problem C -vs- KaYNe ^ I got a battle thats gettin slept on here. It would be much appreciated if you could drop a quick vote. |
vote on this and later i will vote your battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1046442 |
anyway, limitz was pure shit, so it gets this
vote, vote, vote!!http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1046442 |
aight. rapper, vote for somebody damnit. and dont post here if u cant poll!! uppin # 3...................
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Yo Fucken newbs with there gay posts...lol...
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This was a close battle. Both came strong. I felt that Its stuff was easier to flow with, and hit harder. Perosnals were pretty lame by both.. but not a bad battle
vote - it plz return a honest fev http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104606 |
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I'm a say It took this for better structure, for sure.
The punches were tighter, the wordplay was aight, and the flow was definately on mark. Limitz... Well, aside from the shitty format, you did ok. I'd work on punching more... And stop forcing your wordplay... Some of that shit barely made sense. Not everything has to be a, "like"...(meta) And you certainly don't need to capitalize shit up in there. Overall you didn't come bad, just need work, especially personal punching, even if it's just playing off his name. You need to let us know in some way, shape, or form... That this was meant for him and not some kinda pre-write. I"mnot accusing you of anything, just saying when there are personals, it helps like a motherfucker. Peace |
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Limitz - As said, an okay verse for a first attempt or whateva.. very stretched lines messed the flow up alot tho... It seemed like you were being to complex at times while not putting it across properly... punches didn't connect really...
It - Again, the lines seemed slightly stretched, but the punches worked well, some good hits throughout.. nice p ersonals, the t.h.u.g reference etc... nicely done... overall better in most catergorys... Vote - It Return the favour with an honest vote - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104125 |
if i could vote it would be Limitz i didnt like I.T. word play.
you go dog keep rippin up indy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
thought the structure of both verses was pretty bad... not very good flow, tho ITs was better.... punches i give to IT, they were stronger... and wordplay, tho limitz verse was more creative,...but weighed up, ITs tips the balance...vote=IT....pZ
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