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Mr. Mike Dew .\/s. Vendetta
4-5 bars (i dont go by lines and netither do REAL MCs)
u got 30min to an hour after i spit to drop 1st to 5 votes wins 3-0 or 4-1 = KO ill spit after u check in |
herb this battle isnt set up right.. ill go set it up................................................ .................................................. ...
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nvm ^ checkin in................................................ ...........................................
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wz up wit that "herb" shit i keep see'n
u fucks kno u dont use that word in daily life (If u have any) well ne way will a mod close this so i dont gie dq'd for this battle too ;) thnx |
damn sonu need to make up ur mind abd dto be'n so anxious to post cuz its really piss'n down my leg dude
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in the blue corner coming in with three losses in Mr. Mike Dew//
battling me was a dumb desicion, can u win? no ur stumped u dont gotta clue// your rap is a M.A.(Z).E, this kid admits in his signature// im lyrically lethalty hurting you and to your pain there is no cure// this wannabe obie trice must be 'I Suck', The Boy Wonder// this kids so stupid in 3rd grade he aint understand the OverUnder// When he spits, he spits blood and pieces of his raw ruined teeth// he made his own regilon, prays for penis enlargements, thats his number1 belif// to see me ur gunna need a lil more than glasses cuz this kid randomly spits// this person is proabbly 21 and still hasnt developed puberty, hasnt got hair under his armpits// uppin v Spitting a closer for fun v came into this battle talking like a well spoken man// this kids wack he doenst use a toliet he uses a bed pan// |
^^ damn i can't type (lol) but ne way heres my verse:
im no herb say "sir" when u speak to mister son/ "Vendetta" -- c'mon be real that name is played like the game that u ripped it from// let me end all "vendettas" here, Oh yeah the word means grudge in case u aint kno/ lets be serious ,on mics u like a periods + tampons, son u just cant flow// who the hell implanted rap'n in ya brain, ya whole aura just makes me ask-- how u can want mo money but still be so clueless like stacy dash*/ hmmmm lets see....the only way you'd be "dope" is if u was "crack" which makes "ass"// take the 1st and last letters off ya name and that just whut im gonna do**/ u need to change ya name to air force 1 cuz i just laced u up and put my foot in u like my shoe// *-stacey dash was int the movie mo money and in the show clueless **-Vendetta - V & A = endett (end it) |
check the archives dumbshit my 3 loses come from dq's for rip'n too many of u fucks at one time vote-wise im 3-0
ha ha |
Probably been DQ'ed for being a dumbass... Uppin............................................. ................
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uppin peeps.. c'mon give us a vote........u.p.p.i.n .................................................. .....................
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aight......close battle peeps......
mr. mike dew got this with betta punches and flow........ dat opener from mr. mike dew was tight.......... vendetta, u had no originality in ya rhymes and punches were weak............i didn't feel 'em at all keep battlin and u'll elevate.......... vote = Mr. Mike Dew peace |
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Vote gone.. No quoting votes. -Token |
^fuck u bitch no quoting votes............................................. ......................hating and dickriding fool
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i kno that vote was for me but damn homie that was kinda lazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
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up'n!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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opening - tie...both blah
flow - both blah...but Ven's was alittle better punches - Ven struct - ven metas - blah personals - Mike closing - ven overall - ven |
^thanks.....uppin..
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aight dew won this cuz of a better opener closer and pucnhes
he basically won in every category..vendetta i wasnt feeling urs at all dew had better flow structure and vocab also my vote-dew hit these up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105343 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105342 i took the time to vote on this so please return the favor |
^pure d/r vote...
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Ya'll Dick Ryders gots to Go.........vendetta took this,.......betta Punches,.....betta Metas...Personals and Structure...Flow wuz on point....
Vote~Vendetta |
^thank you...
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opening - tie...both blah
flow - both blah...but Ven's was alittle better punches - Ven struct - ven metas - blah personals - Mike closing - ven overall - ven __________________ he killed the herb http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105427 hit itup i got s killz now |
^thanks for the oppinion..
ill hit urs up................................................ ................................................ |
vendetta took this with opener closer punches and structure the other guy only had flow and metaphors not such a good battle...
vendetta when you get 100 posts vote and poll vote on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...459#post1072459 |
my bad the rong link click on my latest battle in my sig............................................... .............................
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dickriders??? thats bullshit cuz i aint been here 2 weeks and nobody likes me that much anyway your just mad cuz i voted against u lame ass |
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multis-v personals-none complexity-v enjoyability-v punches-v elemantary-mmd overall-v |
Vendetta DQed for uppin more than 5 times.
Any posts after both verses are dropped will be considered as an up |
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