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BLING VZ Gazeebo
aight 10 lines
no crew no d/r no hate no dumb shit blind spit due 20 minutes after check in your rules thier k drop it then |
aight check !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yah its blind so who ever drops just drop ~out~ ``````````` `````````````````````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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You reached your peak, so now u must think that ur Pac/
Bein a rapper is ya dream? Wake Up, I'm The Alarm Clock/ Word by word ill strip your dignity and ur verse like banana peels/ And if balanced means talent ..you got bloody knees n training wheels/ Try to act tough, but ya ass prolly already started to perish/ But thats aight dawg, you had 2 months for your undefeated record to cherish/ Now ya got your head achin searchin for punches to return back/ Maybe ya should jus take some tylenol, maybe the whole pack/ Undeafeated record bout to change..think before u battle me again, u just a pup/ The alphabet's shrinking down to 25 cause GaZeeBo just ate U up/ |
ohky i might be late like a few mins but mine will be up soon ~1~ ```````````````````` ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~```````
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On yah own u crash and burn like 9/11 stomach still churns faggot poser I got u slipping like 100 on a fast turn cuz we real niggers don’t fall when its time to burn
Yah say yah a hard thug gangster but u flee faster then Taliban fighters I burn yah so bad cause a bon FIRE battling nobodies am TIRE only 16 but yah should RETIRE before i dump clips in yah die like da rest of the BITERS but How you going to win calling hard niggers a worthless Negro? Give up yah lost forgotten by tomorrow ask whose GAZeeBO? Cuz face it kid you can only get so far on a BOAST cuz after those 5 seconds your TOAST Final word yah Am tired of taking on whack ass NOOBS Gangster? Give me a break you faker then pams BOOBS k i notice right now we both spat 12 line but no one cares k good battle upping for votes now |
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Oh man...
Gazeebo wins this with a little bit better format... (Some of Bling's shit was really stretched) He also had a better rhyme scheme. (Bling was scattered with different line sets) Punches and wordplay also belong to Gaz. (Cuz some of Bling's shit was played) Simple breakdown, simple decision. No beef. Peace |
(Cuz some of Bling's shit was played)?
w/e i dont play shit but any ways for the biter part i was talking about here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103923 Any ways more voting here ~peace~ |
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yo... i give this to bling....
I do agree tho... work on your format... once i read it like three times i got the rythem of it... gaz shit was ill tight tho... easy to read.. hard ass punches... got much respect for both of you... this was a hard battle to vote on but i think bling took it by a little... vote: bling return tha fava dawgs.... audio: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102425 text: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104688 |
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Gazeebo - flow was good, decent opener, feelin ya closer, vocab was good, the multis u had were ok, wordplay was good, punches hit pretty hard, peronals were good
Bling - ur fucked up strucutre threw off the flow, opener was basic, closer was ok, vocab was good, multis were nice, wordplay was good, punches hit pretty hard, personals were ok Conclusion - wit Gazeebo takin this in flow, punches, and personals ima say he takes this, multis, wordplay, and vocab dont win battles and thats what bling took him in VOTE - GAZEEBO |
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flow and structure gotta go wit bling
punches humor and mad wordplay wit dat last line gotta go wit gazeebo final vote gazeebo i took time to vote for your battle take time ta vote for mine thnx jus return the fav i keep votin on ya battles http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103757 |
heres the breakdown...
FLow:gazebbo....Fucked up flow on bling...need to shorten it Structure:gazebbo...As i said its fucked up on bling Punches:some witty punches from both...But gotta give it to gazebo Personals....hmm this goes to gazebbo...most personals were the punches overall-gazeboo....yeah thats about it...No hate just a honest vote hit my battle up both of you Please no hate votes man. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104513 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103792 |
gazeebo gets ma vote
both were kinda weak but the battle was almost even, Bling was a played with "as fake as pam's boobs" thats so played, also bling was stretched in some parts gazeebo had better punches, not by much but still had better, his flow was also better then blings, not really a lot of metas or multies, but thats iight i guess close battle but gazeebo cops ma vote |
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