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007 [Vs.] Twizzle
Cant remember your rules...blah
usual shit tho No D/R, Bitin, Recycling.... Reply's MUST explain their votes..no 1 line reply's I'm spittin first... Seven check in when you peep this :thefinger: |
....oh and its also
10 lines...No Feedin...No Swayin...and no crew votes... Pz........ ............ ............ |
aiight...........................................c heck.............................................. .........good luck.......................................
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Lets, key this up for today...
Started Battling again, Left SS because he was str8 wack Attempted to write emotionally...and had a heart attack eatin Mc's? kid's just a snack, i'll leave you wrecked I'll smack you into celestial orbit... ...and gladly forget your dialect Got respect?...hell no, no-one know's or gives a fuck who you are And when it comes to verses... you own more stretch lines than an atkin's diet Bizzare.. Hurrah! hunting you the fuck down like english upper classes And when it comes to gaybar's...you got all the backstage passes Now This n00b is done..sonned like the rest w/ no regret Only thing is, your so wack this is the only W that i'll forget... :flipoff: |
i suppose i need to try, against some one with 34 wins,
off me you gets sword n axes, instead of needles n pins, i spit like a wordsearch, an keep ya scrambled an confused, shift, an '/' is what i make of your punches, u got no pimp juice, there was no, battle callout, just permisson to be beat, a name like twizzle stix, ur not keepin ur wackness discrete, your lines are never on track, after i de-rail ur train of thought, girls love you, playin tennis, is the only time he gets to court* like shootin stars, it aint long till you completely vanish, if i were the leader of wits end, you position i wud banish. *court, when you see a girl, like go out with her |
Kinda weak battle here...
Very soft punches from 007. (pimp juice, come on!) Ya shoulda known you'd have ta come harder than this. Wordplay and format were on mark, it's really just your punches I'm bitchin about. Twizzle came like I expected... Hard, witty shots that hurt... But this line was borrowed or recycled or flat out bitten. "No one knows or gives a fuck who you are" I KNOW I saw that very, very recently. Still, despite that, ya verse was flat out better... Harder, wittier and more complex, better personals. Peace Holla back... Kill me!!! |
well i didnt intentionally use it...
its not exactly a unique phrase tho.. anyway i can assure you i didnt bite it i havent read or battled in a while so..meh .. |
Aight.
Below average battle here. Twizzle came decent with some aight wordplay and some good punches. 007 came kind of weak with some punches that really didnt connect at all. The wordplay just didnt go with the punches at some point. You need to learn how to put a better verse together. Vote- Twizzle for coming with a better executed verse |
Get a mod to poll my vote.
Dont have 5 wins... lmao Although I do have over 100 on this site Poll voted, Editted -Edicius |
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Return da fava http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104314 |
Uppin Mcmuffin
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waitin for my death,
BI Detained aint been in yet, an gave me his usual i hate you, without showing it off obviusly vote....................................... |
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Come on i vote on yall shit...
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Uppers.
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dadi kwelis verse
Started Battling again, Left SS because he was str8 wack Attempted to write emotionally...and had a heart attack eatin Mc's? kid's just a snack, i'll leave you wrecked I'll smack you into celestial orbit... ...and gladly forget your dialect good flow with these lines Got respect?...hell no, no-one know's or gives a fuck who you are And when it comes to verses... you own more stretch lines than an atkin's diet Bizzare.. nice creative line.. punchline hit pretty hard Hurrah! hunting you the fuck down like english upper classes And when it comes to gaybar's...you got all the backstage passes Now This n00b is done..sonned like the rest w/ no regret Only thing is, your so wack this is the only W that i'll forget... overall this was a pretty good verse i give this shit a 7/10 007's verse i suppose i need to try, against some one with 34 wins, off me you gets sword n axes, instead of needles n pins, weak oppener to a battle i spit like a wordsearch, an keep ya scrambled an confused, shift, an '/' is what i make of your punches, u got no pimp juice, there was no, battle callout, just permisson to be beat, a name like twizzle stix, ur not keepin ur wackness discrete, the wordplay in these lines were pretty basic and elementary... you could have had better disses than these your lines are never on track, after i de-rail ur train of thought, girls love you, playin tennis, is the only time he gets to court* like shootin stars, it aint long till you completely vanish, if i were the leader of wits end, you position i wud banish. overall i didnt really like this verse at all you aint have that many hard dissing punchlines in this battle most of your disses.. were pretty basic.. and your wordplay could have been much better.. i give that verse a 4/10 VOTE: i got to vote for dadi kweli in this battle he had better wordplay and more creative disses than 007 had |
Can a mod edit that vote in.... ;) Cheers Ed
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ounches twizz: his punches hit harder than 007 good verse
metas twiz:you own more stretch lines than an atkin's diet Bizzare.. multies neither: you both should include some in your battles more often personals twiz: Started Battling again, Left SS because he was str8 wack overall i gotta go wit twiz both please drop a honest vote on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103266 |
twizzle loses for excessive uppin. sorry twizzle but everyone has to follow the same rules. you know better.............
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aigh...
I'm just pissed that i vote in plenty of others then get none in my own.... But yea... Pz. |
^ Yep.. sorry but I gotta do it.
Twizzle DQed. |
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