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retard101 01-07-04 09:01 AM

retard101 V/S Zedd
 
10 line min
100 line max
lets go boy

retard101 01-07-04 09:47 AM

check in.............
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retard101 01-07-04 09:58 AM

dog ya rymes be wic wic wicedy wack,
ya best get the fuck off RB.com b4 your ass gets jacked,
you fuckin wit da retard101 nigga dat was dumb,
im stright out Cali and alredy won,
your mama be a slut a stright up ho ho ho marry christmas,
so nigga quit bitchin,

you aint got no aint even a fuckin beat,
so nigga get the fuck off streets b4 your ass meets heat from a 40.cal glock,
so put down the keyboard and step the fuck off doc.
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retard101 01-09-04 08:55 AM

give me the win he aint comin i've sent him 4 pms on it !!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kosta 01-15-04 10:13 AM

why'd you ask me to look at this when he hasn't even posted.
and besides that was terrible

Kosta 01-15-04 10:14 AM

oh, ! you don't get a win because he didn't show. he never even
posted in this thread . it will just get closed ..

retard101 01-15-04 11:22 AM

thanks sand
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Zedd 01-15-04 05:08 PM

Re-tar-ded your really garbage
another bitch rapper for my yearly harvest
Get it corn y rapper dont ever spit at ya dad
You ignorant fag dont get no props like small ass ads
Ill battle you in space, sea, air or land
Did you plan to get Jammed by your homeboy sand^
I know you cant get close to be as ill as me
DO even know the meaning of versatility
Well, if you need me tell you your flow is unclean
with no sheen, I guess thats because your only 16

NyZ GrIncH 01-15-04 05:11 PM

yo zedd i think u wasted ur time cuz this thread is closed...............also both of ur shyt was weak

Zedd 01-15-04 05:11 PM

CHeck in and battle^
Game over B dont ever holla at me in one of my hip hop lounge threads kid

Zedd 01-15-04 05:12 PM

LOL thanks sry bout that...............................

Zedd 01-15-04 05:12 PM

LOL thanks sry bout that.............................................. .............

Zedd 01-15-04 05:13 PM

LOL thanks sry bout that.............................................. ...................................

:) 01-15-04 05:14 PM

ok this battle was a typical newbie battle

retard.. the intro to your verse was weak that shit bout wickety wack.. needs to go ... also your wordplay was pretty weak lines like "you fuckin wit da retard101 nigga dat was dumb,
im stright out Cali and alredy won,
your mama be a slut a stright up ho ho ho marry christmas,
so nigga quit bitchin,"

are not getting it done.. plus your disses were pretty basic

zedd- you had some ok wordplay.. you came with some aiight punchlines and metas this shit was ok "Get it corn y rapper dont ever spit at ya dad
You ignorant fag dont get no props like small ass ads
Ill battle you in space, sea, air or land
Did you plan to get Jammed by your homeboy sand^"

you threw some nice metas and personal disses in this battle

VOTE: zedd took this battle with and overall more complexed verse.. plus his disses hit harder than retards did..

retard101 02-03-04 02:50 PM

ALL IGHT lets get some more votes my niggas

retard101 02-12-04 02:56 PM

up it up it up up it up it up it up it it up it up it up it

Hitta 02-12-04 03:04 PM

Battle #2...........................................

Hitta 02-12-04 03:05 PM

battle #3..............................................

HeXen 02-12-04 03:12 PM

this da most 1 sided battle eva...
zedd.....some good punches....flow wasnt there tho...not much strutcture....and no personals....work on it....k....overall 5/10
retard101 dis jst that...ur verse was week as fuck...the punches would'nt harm a fly....no flow...no structure....no nothing.....please please please evaluate!! overall:1/10
v/zedd(by far)

retard101 02-17-04 09:03 AM

um lets vote please

retard101 02-17-04 02:58 PM

up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it up it


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