origin-Ill vs Decimal
 

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E'yo..
Avatars Played out,Spit From tha Top Sick…I’m Origin-Ill
challenged me,left him hanging like Ornaments to Furfill
Kids a Joke,Like ur Avatar your Personality’s a Character
You couldn’t contain ya Name..If u were tha Crews manager
L-y-r-i-c-a-l-l-y spelling out..that should teach u a Lesson
Even if u foget ya shoes kid..You could at least Check-In
Tha Looks Of ya Record..Confidence isnt what u’ve only loss
Like getting Dipped on..Losing is gon b tha Lonely Cost
No Crew?Ya Names Written Poorly u couldn’t Afford It
Lyrics Damaging ya Coslty..like home Owners paying Mortgage

E yo..
aite..nigga u better spit harder then that^...



Decimals HeatRate Is Critical And He Just Failed The Physical..
Worried About Facing, Being a Vitcim To A Miracle..
You’re Pitiful, Got It ‘Locked’ Down, But I Cut All-The-‘Keys’ ..
This Battles Cat And Mouse And I’ve Hid All-The-Cheese..
And-Your-Steeze Is Just ‘Wrong’ Like Someone ‘Bumming-A-Dyke’..
Cuz you’ve Took So Many ‘Licks’ That You Cum-On-Your-Mic..
I Summoned-A-Fight Wit My Saber Like Vader I’m Ya Father..
My Punches Loosen More Teeth Than Chocolate Mixed With Tartar..
For Starters I’m The ‘Cookie Monster’ Taking All Ya ‘Dough’..
Killed So Many ‘Lines’ When I Sneeze, I Try Not To Snow..
But i Alwayz Blow. Persitin Circumcesion Verbally on This Infant..
ya Spits are Nursery.U Rep It But u Aint Lethal Or Got Visions..



wutt.....i aint no newb beeyacthhh

uppin
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change that to UPPIN#2

ok... this was pretty wack shit. origin-ill used too many mets in one part, but overall it was good. bad closer, needed more punches too.
decimal was way off i thought, keep elevatin but, needed more punches and a stronger attack at his opponent... nice try

vote: Origin-Ill

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nook vs profit

nook vs castrol

peep those peeps...
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Uppin...By tha way Origin- Ill u a Fagget.....U had way mo time then i did..................Bitch........................ ...And i believe i still beat u but whateva its up to tha Voters

well..
 

i cant vote coz aint got 100posts, btu my vote iz wit: Decimal,

i was feeling his flow mo than origin-ill,

even though origin-ill had some ill punches, i'm feeling Decimal's skit,

ayo, hit me up on my battle,
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no doubt kid.................Thanks Man.....................Uppin..................... .................................................. ..........................#2 .........i will return tha favor if u guys vote

kings overview

flow- decimal
structure- tie
creativity- decimal
punches- decimal
personals- ???
metas- ???

decimal got dis one

vote: Decimal

could u plz drop an honest vote on dis one...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105273

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i gotta go with origin-ill on this one

decimal verse didnt have any hard punces really neither did ill's but he had good use of multies and shit

vote: origin-ill

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cuz they been open for like 2 weeks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

L's breakdown:

punches - tie
personals - origin-ill
flow - tie
structure - tie
creativity - origin-ill
opener - origin-ill
closer - decimal

OVERALL - origin-ill

And-Your-Steeze Is Just ‘Wrong’ Like Someone ‘Bumming-A-Dyke’..
Cuz you’ve Took So Many ‘Licks’ That You Cum-On-Your-Mic..

^^Killed it for me

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Decimal

Avatars Played out,Spit From tha Top Sick…I’m Origin-Ill
challenged me,left him hanging like Ornaments to Furfill
Good Opening
Kids a Joke,Like ur Avatar your Personality’s a Character
You couldn’t contain ya Name..If u were tha Crews manager
Hot personal
L-y-r-i-c-a-l-l-y spelling out..that should teach u a Lesson
Even if u foget ya shoes kid..You could at least Check-In
Good punch
Tha Looks Of ya Record..Confidence isnt what u’ve only loss
Like getting Dipped on..Losing is gon b tha Lonely Cost
Good punch again
No Crew?Ya Names Written Poorly u couldn’t Afford It
Lyrics Damaging ya Coslty..like home Owners paying Mortgage
Good closing...ok personal

Origin-Ill

Decimals HeatRate Is Critical And He Just Failed The Physical..
Worried About Facing, Being a Vitcim To A Miracle..
So-so opening
You’re Pitiful, Got It ‘Locked’ Down, But I Cut All-The-‘Keys’ ..
This Battles Cat And Mouse And I’ve Hid All-The-Cheese..
LOL...hotness
And-Your-Steeze Is Just ‘Wrong’ Like Someone ‘Bumming-A-Dyke’..
Cuz you’ve Took So Many ‘Licks’ That You Cum-On-Your-Mic..
Nice again...good line
I Summoned-A-Fight Wit My Saber Like Vader I’m Ya Father..
My Punches Loosen More Teeth Than Chocolate Mixed With Tartar..
ok lines...not feelin the rhyme scheme
For Starters I’m The ‘Cookie Monster’ Taking All Ya ‘Dough’..
Killed So Many ‘Lines’ When I Sneeze, I Try Not To Snow..
kinda played...ok lines
But i Alwayz Blow. Persitin Circumcesion Verbally on This Infant..
ya Spits are Nursery.U Rep It But u Aint Lethal Or Got Visions..
Good closer wit personal

Overall - Decimal...very close battle but decimal was more consistant

drop the --- origin

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yo i need a vote taken from decimal and one added to origin ill i clicked on the wrong name origin is up 4-2

Uppin............................................. .................................................. ...................................Up #3.......Drop a Vote wit an Explanation and i'll Definately Return tha Favor...................

aight i think that decimal wins this because of harder punches and better personals.

he has better flow structure and vocab

so for those reasons i say that decimal wins

my vote-decimal

hit these up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105343

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105342

i took the time to vote on this so please return the favor

Decimal Inched This One Out With Strong Punches, Flows, Multis and Personals<-->Those Killed The Competition.Orgin-Ill had some peronals and punches but just wasnt as good as Decimals...
Vote-Decimal

E'yo..
Avatars Played out,Spit From tha Top Sick…I’m Origin-Ill
challenged me,left him hanging like Ornaments to Furfill

this line is alrgiht but it doenst have a ton of flow and doesnt make a lot of sense i'm going wiht 3/10

Kids a Joke,Like ur Avatar your Personality’s a Character
You couldn’t contain ya Name..If u were tha Crews manager

good line but the rhyme was a little off, understandable 4/10

L-y-r-i-c-a-l-l-y spelling out..that should teach u a Lesson
Even if u foget ya shoes kid..You could at least Check-In

This is the first personal i've seen even tho it's weak not a lot of sense and not hard punch 3/10

Tha Looks Of ya Record..Confidence isnt what u’ve only loss
Like getting Dipped on..Losing is gon b tha Lonely Cost

k started this line out pretty good but couldnt match it wiht the second line 3/10

No Crew?Ya Names Written Poorly u couldn’t Afford It
Lyrics Damaging ya Coslty..like home Owners paying Mortgage

best line u had rhyme was a little off but i go wiht 5/10

that makes 18/50



Decimals HeatRate Is Critical And He Just Failed The Physical..
Worried About Facing, Being a Vitcim To A Miracle..

k good overall idea but what the hell with the miracle thing? you say you're a miracle, that doesnt rhyme wiht physical but 4/10

You’re Pitiful, Got It ‘Locked’ Down, But I Cut All-The-‘Keys’ ..
This Battles Cat And Mouse And I’ve Hid All-The-Cheese..

locked downthing was ok cat mouse thing no , oh shit you didn't hide the cheese did you, not hard enoguh 3/10

And-Your-Steeze Is Just ‘Wrong’ Like Someone ‘Bumming-A-Dyke’..
Cuz you’ve Took So Many ‘Licks’ That You Cum-On-Your-Mic..

this line was alrgiht best one so far but it could have been better 3/10

I Summoned-A-Fight Wit My Saber Like Vader I’m Ya Father..
My Punches Loosen More Teeth Than Chocolate Mixed With Tartar..

best line easily best line 5/10

For Starters I’m The ‘Cookie Monster’ Taking All Ya ‘Dough’..
Killed So Many ‘Lines’ When I Sneeze, I Try Not To Snow..

that line was too too weak no effect at all 2/10

But i Alwayz Blow. Persitin Circumcesion Verbally on This Infant..
ya Spits are Nursery.U Rep It But u Aint Lethal Or Got Visions..

that one was pretty damn weak 3/10


thats 20/60



that sets decimal wiht a better score he got my vote

now i just took a hell of a lot of tiem for that so atleast go vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104250

Uppin#4........................................... .................................................. .......................................And i will drop honest votes on y battle ASAP.................

flow- origin
structure- tie
creativity- origin
punches- origin
personals- ???
metas- ???

origin got dis one

vote: origin

original or whatever took this flow dont mean shit in a street battle metas punches and personanels do and he got decibal with that.

Iight............Last UP.........................My Last Up...........Uppin #5................................................ .................................................. .......

this close battle in my point of view...

punches - dec: wasnt feelin o's

multis - none: didnt see any that were 'good enough'

metas - o: didnt feel dec's

structure - dec: dec's was easier to read

flow - tie: both were good

overall - dec: close battle, but dec got it..

p'z...

vote - dec