bloodymurder vs. Dan Da Man
 

10-15

Is that 10-15 lines or should i reply within 10-15 minutes. wtf????
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ten to fifteen line man, u know what the hell i'm talkin about, just spit ur shit and let me spit mines and then u will see that u had no chance from the start, so let's get it on

ok wise guy i see u like to take ur time, the size of my dick is what i carry on my waste umm let's see that's a 9---i see u like to battle it ain't hard to tell, but fuck with me, i'll get in that ass like a fag in jail----yeah i'm ruthless, i like gettinn head from ur moms because she's toothless.....ahh yeah the best---as a matter of fact u bore me, i got ur sister talkin bout she adore me, and i don't even know her----yeah it's over, i assumed that b4 we started, this victory was mine for the taking because i have that rappers anointing----i ain't even heard u rap yet, but thoughts of sex keep me horny,as for u frito lays is hiring because ur oh so corny---so think b4 u challenge me, if i were an orange u still would not appeal to me, this isn't even my tightest and i already have u with rubbery knees---nucca please get ur weight up, b4 u challenge the man, cause i plays no games at all call me juve u understand

(First question that popped in my head)
Whether dan is a man, or that's just what he said?/
i know it's just a LIE so i'll shoot him until he's dead/
Murder this faggot while "IT" is sleeping in "IT's" bed/
So nuff said... i'll just give this old fag "IT's" month's pension/
So "IT" can live with "IT's" kind in "Fag's Mansion/
He's no rapper he's crazed like Marlyn Manson/ :thefinger
That's where he got his name Da_Fag_DAN_SON/

[switch_style]
I'm the genie in this "Battle" to grant your three wishes/
(first): i'll slash you balls and penis, to look like a girl's clitoris/
(Second): i'll send you old table covers so you could cut and press/
turn into your new dress that you can use to impress/
(third): I'll call [beyond pissed] with his friend [no abuse]/
so you can have two little boys for you to choose/

[da murder]
Playing Games is Over, it's the time for Take-Over/
The coup-de-etat attempt by the Bloody Murder/
Shooting :shoot: fag like a thug in a grand gender-cide/
Leave this Pest-i-cide with no option but sui-cide/
Burn you down till you suffocated after you're smokez/
Cremated to ashes for being a faggot and hoax/
So bookmark this webpage as your new tombstone/
While i write the word's RIP, Rest-in Pieces/
There's nothin left on you, not even bits-and-pieces/
until The only things left is smelly shits-and-feces/

RIP

As i said. Rest in feces. that's a fucking curse.


i can't believe i wasted my good verse on you

BEACH. oh, i mean VITCH

Sorry bout that! i exceeded 15 lines! damn, i was thinking 15 bars. sorry bout that. just forget the last part y'all.

first 2 parts is already 14 lines. so that's just it.


upin this for votes.

com on man i killed u in less bars all that talk and sayin nothing, can we get some votes please, as a matter of fact i typed that with one had i was smoking a cigarette, u did all that talk and said nothing, by the way, that gay shit is old, ol sock chewing ass nucca, tally the votes please

quote:

i'll get in that ass like a fag in jail----yeah i'm ruthless

-dan_da_man-

read your own verse dumbass.

THAT WAS A METAPHOR BOI, U MAKE IT SEEM AS IF I'M GAY OR SOME SHIT, THERE IS A DIFFERENCE, BOI, COME ON FUCK WITH ME, COM ON YA'LL TALLY THE VOTES

kings overview

flow- dan
punches- bloody
personals- dan
structure- dan
creativity- dan
multis- ???

vote: Dan_Da-Man

could u honestly hit up these ones plz...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...49&pagenumber=2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105273

yo i voted u need to drop ur verse now...or im goign to get u dqed for checking in and not posting ur verse....u wanna battle then do it in 5 mins now..or i will post the link of our battle to the mods for you checking in and leaving the battle

oops i didnt...................heres the breakdown

flow:bloody....dans
Structure:bloody,,,,dans shit was majorly fucked up
punches:dan....better stuff....
Personals:dan....Ok stuff...
multis:dan...not a lot
overall:dan....cuz of punches.....and personals got this shit

bloody had to much shit to read...make it simple and stick to one text style.

flow-dan da
personals-dan da
complexity-dan da
punches-dan da
multies-tie....werent any


bloodymurder is a rookie, what you need kid is a flow and steady pace cause your style is wack. I read it and nothing rhymed or had rhythem and that the base to rapping. practise da

I see you wrote 3 styles right but while reading you cant get anyone of your verses in a rythem a smig of a bit.
OVERALL=DAN da

uppin, get this one over ya'll lemme see them votes, not to much to ask is it, show love to me and i'll browse to show u guys love

uppin 2 come on peeps show love on the vote.............................................. .................................................

flow=dan had it tight
personals=no question
but tho y'all were both tight DAN was tighter!!
bloody jus kept goin round in circles instead of gettin to the point
thats straight diss...
dan got to the point..
which was bloody..
and thats what he concentrated on

flow-dan
personals-dan
punches-dan
multies-tie
this battles is a wip out dans hot as shit i liked his vs
vote...dans

upppin, ok ya'll this battle is almost over let's get some votes and get this thing closed and from there we'll see what's good, until then maintain ur thoughts by smoking that wood, holla!!!!!