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Token vs Eki
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spit in 30 min..... same rules good luck |
Your shit is wack and played- every verse a shocker-like you birth
if you recycled anymore, you would save the earth This vet is just arogant , thinking hes god-given- this is reality check You couldn't pull of a good punch, if your verses WEREN'T wack All his wins , a simple cover-up- becaouse he only faces newbs Its like hes claiming hes high, but he never acctualy smoked herbs (fake) I wanted to take it easy, but he claims hes all that, so here's a hit You think you verses are hot, but to the rest of us they never been lit You say Reverse the Future and Advance the past -a hidden messige becaouse I am the future your a past, and now your looking for a time passige (think about it ) You should leave this site, your in the past, like the dinosaurs- old news Your trying to win this battle, is like trying to solve a murder case- with no clues And while am exposing you , am gonna mention the convo in your sig, this is the end just the beggining of one of you dirty convos - with a cross dressing -homosexual friend |
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i wanna see wa he throwz up........
u threw up sum MADD nice shyt eki....good shyt********* ********************************************** |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105349
yo eki....hit up mah battle.....n ill hit urz up afta token spitz....***************************************** ************************************************** ******* No posting links before both verses are up and without voting. -Token |
Blah KeyD in 3 minutes..
Fucka this kid.. Couldn't flip concepts if his tongue was twisted Wrapped him and put a bow on his head.. and he still aint gifted I'll show you the spotlight.. At The Tunnels End Thought you were moving the voters.. But it was just the wind The only way you'll give me comp.. Is to buy me a dell I'll put you in poverty.. And state your Fare Well (wellfare) Might as well call you chucky.. Cuz sonning you is childs play ...Wrote in the woods.. and claim you write the wild way You see.. It's impossible to be that wack and beat me Hows it feel knowing I beat you.. .. Like scratching a sportscar.. this was Keyed in 3 |
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v/token eki you came ok..but some of your verse didnt make sense to me.. a couple of lines didnt rhyme either All his wins , a simple cover-up- becaouse he only faces newbs Its like hes claiming hes high, but he never acctualy smoked herbs (fake) ^didnt rhyme..i even tried repeating it different ways to make it if hurt your verse... flow was there....and structure was good....but the punchlines didnt do it for me.. no hate man ..just being honest Token.... good verse on your part..youv'e done better...but you still managed to have a few quotables...that i liked I'll show you the spotlight.. At The Tunnels End Thought you were moving the voters.. But it was just the wind liked this one the ,ost for some reason... flow was kinda blah....structure was there.. but you just out punched him...and came more witty... no hate to either not a bad read..but i know both can do better.. out... |
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this was a pretty close battle
i gotta say the eki wins this by a hair flow-eki multi-tok humor-tok personlas-tie structure-eki tok you aint realy pu for the affort ive scene from you in the past plz place an honest vote on my battle i spent the time on you return the favor a spend time on me http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105423 |
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yo, Token got this one easily, like i say, The flow can maek or break a rhyme. Even if you had the illest rhyme in the world, a bad flow makes it sound like bad poetry...
Vote: Token |
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Eki=u was aite bars were to stretched and some shit was stupid didn't really like some punches
token=some shit played i liked the gifted though it was funny as fuck and had me rollin son u got this no doubt nice punches and flow vote=token |
Eki u had sum aite bars nuthin great like whoa..dint feel ya whole shi the whole time
sum ya bars were choppy this was a semi weak battel damn kid wit that great of a rec. ccaem aite nuthin sik for ya record u got damn.. but i dont no u so...u sitll got ym vote.. V-token http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105506 Peep that if possible..for sum heat |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105506
pee pi if u guys wanto eki came hard tho props ..shit was pretty good |
i vote for eki cause token was late.............................................. ..............................
Vote gone.. Me and Eki spoke in pms and I wasn't really late like it seemed -Token |
Uppin.. I realize this isn't my best work.. I keyed it in 3 minutes.. NO JOKE.
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token had this with punches flow and personals eki only had structure and i think i saw a little more multies in his verse but i could be wrong that was a good battle for both emcee
vote=token http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...236#post1072236 |
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aight i think that eki won this battle because i felt that his punches hit harder
i also thought that he had the better flow and sructure and i think his vocab was better good battle but i think eki edged out token token would of won if he spent more than 3 minutes on it but it was still a good battle my vote eki hit up the battles in the sig just copy and paste it on to ur toolbar return the favor |
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Good verse Eki. Uppin 4 |
Tok this easily.
He had a better flow, he flipped the script on eki...his punches were more persised an well on flow, an next to that...he worded his verse well...overall vote - Token |
token got this with much better wordplay and clever witty punches that werent hard hitten but did beat Eki...
i liked Fucka this kid.. Couldn't flip concepts if his tongue was twisted Wrapped him and put a bow on his head.. and he still aint gifted The only way you'll give me comp.. Is to buy me a dell ^lol nice v/Token can u vote on this plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105549 |
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