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D.liver.E 01-10-04 12:34 PM

D.liver.E vs :)
 
ok
10 linez min
20 linez max
no crew votez
no hate votez
no feedin'
pz. good luck.

:) 01-10-04 12:41 PM

lol.. oh shit i just saw this who's spitting first?............................................ .................................................. ..................

D.liver.E 01-10-04 12:44 PM

yo
dun b scerred man, thatz just a gun on my waist,
I aint gonna bust it, juzt gonna smack that smile of ya face.
u in the wrong place butz that ok becuz theze dayz,
everyone can drop they shit pre written all the way.
ayo, call me cancer cuz I spread like a disease,
ppl call u ho cuz u on ya kneez 7 dayz a week.
think u thug but dun even know how to spell 'street'
truth is, u just a computer geek in my 2 e-y-e'z.
fuck that shit, u lil' dick I'll just murder u quick
why the hell u even smilin' for kid? think u gonna win?
than u better spit without that smile u prick.
somebody get me a fuckin' doctor cuz I'm sick.

PZ.

D.liver.E 01-10-04 12:45 PM

me I guezz ? :p................................................ .................................................. ..............

:) 01-10-04 12:54 PM

fuck writters block.. fucker your MINDS BLOCKED
every single one of your LINES SHOT,
you should stick your damn lyrics in a microwave just to make your gay ass RHYMES HOT
cuz their COLD AND WEAK~ you HOE AND GEEK, you were NEVER LETHAL
faggots like you are perfect examples of why abortion is BETTER LEGAL
dude youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE
compared to you, the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE
so just GET AWAY from Rap battles cuz you dont deserve to STAY HERE
so keep talkin shit and im a tear your FACE BARE
and leave your damn head with more knots than macy GRAYS HAIR
only chace you got of winning is with dickridders, but NAH REALLY THOUGH
you probably got more aliases than andre in that hey YA VIDEO



ripped!

:) 01-10-04 01:03 PM

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ......................

:) 01-10-04 01:22 PM

uppin for my ko... lets go with these votes............................................. .................................................. .....................

The Jett 01-10-04 01:29 PM

punches- :)(D was played....guns....blah)
flo- :)(by a tad....both were choppy at times)
multi's- none......nothing to really go wit here
meti4's- :)(more original.....funnier)

overall- :)(he just came less played.....and he didnt use the word scerre'd......lol......thats so herbish.....)

The Jett 01-10-04 01:31 PM

honest vote here- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105465

thanks-......

rule 01-10-04 01:35 PM

pretty good battle...lol...

D..you came soft man..your punches didnt really hit..try making you lines longer..maybe that will help you out...and think of personals and things like that man..it helps in a battle

:)-- good battle, you had a more complex verse harder punches and what not...you could tell you were overt this guys head with a verse...but good verse man

Vote- :)

Dick Tator 01-10-04 01:36 PM

better punchers and slightly more complexed from :D, like carson said kinda played but at least :D flipped the concepts slightly.......................................... ....
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can u vote on this plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105549

:) 01-10-04 01:44 PM

ok man.. 2 to 0 uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. ..............

D.liver.E 01-10-04 01:48 PM

uppin'............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ......

:) 01-10-04 01:54 PM

3 to nothing 2 more votes for a ko................................................ .................................................. ..........

:) 01-10-04 02:06 PM

uppin for votes lets get this shit over with.............................................. .................................................. ...............

D.Zaster 01-10-04 02:13 PM

smiley took this fo show....his punches were better and his wordplay was better, his opponent was basic, so was smiley but still had his punches to back him up. so overall vote

vote - :)

:) 01-10-04 02:32 PM

uppin for final vote.............................................. .................................................. ..................

D.liver.E 01-10-04 02:48 PM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................

:) 01-10-04 03:11 PM

uppin for last vote shit lets wrap this up niggas............................................ .................................................. ...................

RhymeTyme 01-10-04 03:22 PM

I think :) got this. He had better wordplay and personals. The battle was overall weak, but :) has this if i had to choose one.

D.liver.E 01-10-04 03:29 PM

I dun wanna bitch but almost nobody explained their vote: he was better my vote goes to ... explain ya votez next time. I aint gonna b a bitch and get all this dq'ed juzt mentionin' it. PZ.

Kautious 01-10-04 03:30 PM

this was a ok battle

but i think smilie endged it out in every thing

the otha cat was way too basic

and smily had some sick punches that wern't that played
like the MJ line


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