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t-west vs rule
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blind spit 30 min after we both check in normal rules |
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hey man...i didnt think you were settin it up cuz you didnt reply in your thread so i started battlen other people...sorry man...if ye want leave this open and we will battle once my battle get closed...it was an easy merk...soo ye you down to wait?
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yea sure. Just key up a verse or watever and when one of ur battles close. We'll jsut drop out verses.
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u free now rule.............................................. .................................................. ..................................???
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You just a high school student, so ur nothin but a fool
pull out ur pen and paper and take notes on these rules! Number one...your dense, Flows are unrelated to intense only occasion u use (sense)cents,,,is when ur payin ur rent! Its meant, predetermined for u to come against me and fall U can try to lay down your rules...But I'll murder ya Ja-w You can't Joke us, Country music comes from your stereo "If I Had a million dollars"............. .......U just another Hick from Northern Ontario! great concentration is required, to make my verse rust But u've failed to deteriorate mine...because soft is ur focus! |
^^^^ HOT SHIT..
ill be back to vote fosho u no this..... can u peep my battle wit Ltheal INJECTIONS..heres a link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105750 ILl be back to vote.when rule drops..so hit it up West. k.. pc |
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Keyed...ten lines...
Pm'd me 3 times when you knew I had 2 battles untucked Don't understand Rules No wonder ya always fail..ya dumb fuck Current battles T-west Vs T-west the only out come worthy It'll be 50-50 a win an lose anybody else ya end up burried Fifty percent of the time ya lyrics aint writtin with murderous ink Irv denied ya ass sence Justin left..they need ya back in N'Sync I read ya verse..didn't feed, cuz looks like you already fed Stealin lyrics.. ..like ya familys virginity..understandable .T.O full'a inbred Reabilated ya hole verse then it might'a been win capable I ATE this herb..look at his record...isn't it explainable |
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vote rule
just came with some good lines and some good punches while twest came ok,nothing really stood out to me,i just felt rule more on this one |
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ok....heres the breakdown...no hate...
Flow:both...Both were flwoig on the dot...No hate Structure:both...Small and simple Punches:rule...Had a little more than t-west Personals:twest...Some personals were ill multis:twest....Had a little more multis overall...hmm twest...Seems like the breakdown proves that no hate...honest opinion on what i read... Rule u know better man...Come on...but i could be wrong though...i can still reconsider my vote....But still twest got it...no hate.. hit my battle up...need 2 more votes to beat that herb.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106034 |
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i jus wrote a long ass vote, breaking it down and shyit but just lost it, so im jsut gonna give a short vote
Some of T's punched were played and un-original. The attempts at word-play were kinda wack, and personals were kinda weak. I think Rule won this with overall better verse consisting of hard hitting punches, basic but hard and original personals. Flow was even, and Rule took it with Personals, Punches and Originality... My Vote = Rule pce |
This was a close battle....
Punches.... close they both came a lil played... but rule using tha same concept for tha Murder Ink. punch was wack Flow...this goes to west... he had nice multies in there which made it flow alot better than rules Structure..... about tha same... Personals.. t-west definately threw more personals in there so v/T-west Please return tha favor... I took tha time...I will poll vote this battle with my alias if you drop an honest one on this Right Here |
Close bout...
T West;Wording hurt ya piece...Esp 1st and last bars where ya played on names, ya lacked impact, aight ideas though and cents wordplay is played out yo.Aight verse overall, could of flipped some mo harder. Rule;Some forced shit, and tha N Sync line i wasnt feelin, otherwise i felt ya had a cleaner, last bar was nice wordplay on t's record. W/ that said, i felt Rule had this V - Rule Honest votes on these please... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1060300[/URL] PiZ |
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Flow: Tie
Punch: West...rules didnt connect to hard..west had a lil more wordplay addin to the punchs Meta: West Multi: West just about Enjoy: Both Personal: West Vote: West this battle was good..cudda done with harder punchs though..good job overall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106225 hit that up with a vote..needs one more :) |
hmm..tuff battle to call..I will have to go with rule on this one..he came harder..reasons..okay..let me explain..because I hate getting half asses votes my self..
I didnt like the very 1st line..because I'm a highschool student:(..and you hurt my feelings..but thats wrong saying we're nothin but fulls..so from right there..you had to win me over..the second line certainly was a step up..and blah..I dont want to go line for line..I'll just sum it up..t-west..you had a line that didnt rhyme..cents'sense lines are played out to the max..for real..I liked that northern ontario line..good personal.. now rule..you came MUCH!!!! better than I expected..the t-west t-west line was good..even though he left out a whole word..lol..I still knew what he was talking about..but umm..anyway..rule had some nice punches..didint like the n sync line..but rule edged it out by a lil.. my vote~rule http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105535 |
You just a high school student, so ur nothin but a fool
pull out ur pen and paper and take notes on these rules! Number one...your dense, Flows are unrelated to intense only occasion u use (sense)cents,,,is when ur payin ur rent! Its meant, predetermined for u to come against me and fall U can try to lay down your rules...But I'll murder ya Ja-w You can't Joke us, Country music comes from your stereo "If I Had a million dollars"............. .......U just another Hick from Northern Ontario! great concentration is required, to make my verse rust But u've failed to deteriorate mine...because soft is ur focus I didn't like it seemed like alot of missed punches to me and some filler on top of that..your opener/ personal was garbage...sorry dog i can only give you 12/20 on that verse... Pm'd me 3 times when you knew I had 2 battles untucked Don't understand Rules No wonder ya always fail..ya dumb fuck Current battles T-west Vs T-west the only out come worthy It'll be 50-50 a win an lose anybody else ya end up burried Fifty percent of the time ya lyrics aint writtin with murderous ink Irv denied ya ass sence Justin left..they need ya back in N'Sync I read ya verse..didn't feed, cuz looks like you already fed Stealin lyrics.. ..like ya familys virginity..understandable .T.O full'a inbred Reabilated ya hole verse then it might'a been win capable I ATE this herb..look at his record...isn't it explainable Well i didn't much like this one either but it had harder punches and was a more direct and thought out dis than t west en mi opinion so he gets 13/20 it was seriously that close but i gotta go with rule on this one ....peace.. |
Man.. this was close..
T-West had the better flow for sure.. wordplay/vocab used, even syllables etc.. made for a better read.. Consistant punches throughout.. some nice pers.onals, good finisher etc.. Also good use of multies.. opener wasn't the best start tho.. Rule had the weaker flow, and less consistancy.. but certain bars did alot more damage.. some tight punches.. Outta the five bars.. there were maybe two basic ones.. the 2nd and 3rd.. kinda played, didn't do much for me.. the others tho, were tight.. Hard decision really.. Umm.. basically.. I re-read each verse a few times to get a good view of 'em.. always comin back to T-wests.. The pers.onals and multies took it.. It was consistantly good.. whereas, Rules went from basic to tight etc.. if you get me.. Real close, but in the end.. Vote - T-West |
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punches - rule personals - t-west flow - tie creativity - rule opener - rule closer - rule OVERALL - rule Good battle.....hit this up since I took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106525 |
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