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Vendetta Vs. casualty
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10 lines spit do in 30 minutes no d.c.h votes u spit first u set up no bullshit no alias no swaying no feeding no biting |
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My ill verbs and nouns that cut your vertebre in half like im using scissors// Im BIG like espn magazine pictures// I am cutting ya up so I can hand you your spleen, and bounce round your intestines like a tramp-O-line// You hafta get your own girl hiv testing every week to make sure that “tramp-is-clean”// Lemme introduce you tro my guilletene my skill’s obscene, I got more flavors then jelly beans// I’m tryin to watch Freestyle Friday,and u jus tryin to think of “106” ways to get in “Nelly’s Jeans”// I'm viscous in every matter when my ryme's told// You thought blind posting was typin wit a blind fold// I'm high strung like i posess five lungs// I have a poetically "alive tongue," and will get you "higher to heaven" more then a combination of "Mase" and a dozen "high monks"// |
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this kid is infested with wackness gotta spray him with lysol/........
well see how it goes before this room becomes frightful/........... i cant understand you your wack im ill like an infected skully........ cause me and you are very the oppisite from a hyperbole.........(comparison) this is over before it started just give me a fair-ness-win........ this kid holds more things in his hands than mr garrison........ kid got has a crew full of dickriders and 50 cent biters............... this battle is more one sided than a pitcher with only a slider...... youll causaily miss this win with my last line ill finish him.......... like an unneded builing im just totaly diminished him........... back and spittin.. uppin (1)............. |
casualty you need to work on the following:
-structure -punches -multis -personals vendetta, you had a good verse...you could improve your punches and elevate em a lil bit...but you at least had the things that casualty didnt.. u were direct...nice verse vote-vendetta |
fuck you prophacy if you gave me as much time as he Had I could have a tight verse too
BUt it took him 2 hours fo that shit and why start a battle if had had to leave anyway expescially when it was a timed spit have you thought about that you stupid mother fucker |
This Was A Decent Battle Both Came Nice But Ima Have To Go With Casualty He Had Some Nice Punches,Wordplay And Decent Multi Attempt And His Disses/Personals Were More On Point Good Battle Tho...
Vote=Casualty Return The Favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hreadid=105371] |
This Was A Sik Battle Liked Both ya SPits but Casuality He Had Some Nice Punches,Wordplay And Decent Multi Attempt And His Disses/Personals Were More On Point Good Battle Tho...
Vendetta U didnt Come Half As Bad as i thought good SHit Keep it Up Vote=Casualty Return the Favor SHits ILL....PLz peep Ben slepted on shits Hot!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105750 |
thanx fo the honest votes lets get some more in here
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105754
hit that up dawg i droped a vote u do the same u want more votes hit more battles up aite.. hit mine for starters..pc |
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i think vedetta got dis 4 da followin
punches flow opener..SICKKKKKKKKK closer: it waz ite.... ___________ humour: tie vote: vendetta....if i culd....yo plze hit dis battle up.....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105843 |
Yep... this was murking at its best... very one sided... good structure, had complexity, some creativeaty... some punches.,,, Cas... your structure is really fucked... you gotta EVEN out yo lines like sone above me did... its not that hard... just gotta fix that ish... and multis... you had them... don't let dunny say ish... he had'em,... but everything else just fix ya ish dunny... ok battle
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Casualty- your punches were sick and the metas that u used were fuckin bannanas.(that line about gettin in nelly's jeans was crazy. Your structure could use a little work but overall id give u a
7/10 Vendetta-alright now u had a pretty good vocab, ur structure was good, flow was pretty nice but ya personals and ya punches weren't that good. For the time u took i think u could've done alot better. Keep working yo. 6/10 VOTE-Casualty somebody hit this up wit an honest vote. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105535 |
casualty - wack structure, flow was horrendous, vocab was basic, all played punches, u tryed to hard to force in wordplay, it fucked everyting up, no personals
vendetta - good structure, flow was on target, vocab was good, most of the punches hit hard, wordplay was good, some of the personals were good conclusion - casualty is gettin dr votes like whoa, cause he got merked in this battle, vendetta takes it in structure, flow, punches, and personals VOTE - VENDETTA |
thax fo the honest votes I will work on my structure though
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^agreed
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damn this was actually a good battle
check the breakdown My ill verbs and nouns that cut your vertebre in half like im using scissors// Im BIG like espn magazine pictures// I am cutting ya up so I can hand you your spleen, and bounce round your intestines like a tramp-O-line// You hafta get your own girl hiv testing every week to make sure that “tramp-is-clean”// lol.. good use of mutlies shit was funny Lemme introduce you tro my guilletene my skill’s obscene, I got more flavors then jelly beans// I’m tryin to watch Freestyle Friday,and u jus tryin to think of “106” ways to get in “Nelly’s Jeans”// lol nice diss I'm viscous in every matter when my ryme's told// You thought blind posting was typin wit a blind fold// I'm high strung like i posess five lungs// I have a poetically "alive tongue," and will get you "higher to heaven" more then a combination of "Mase" and a dozen "high monks"// again nice use of multies however only the 2nd line of this shit was a diss the other lines were using mostly filler with the other line overall good disses you had some clever lines in here like that shit bout 106 and park this kid is infested with wackness gotta spray him with lysol/........ well see how it goes before this room becomes frightful/........... i cant understand you your wack im ill like an infected skully........ cause me and you are very the oppisite from a hyperbole.........(comparison) only the first line was truely a diss and skully and hyperbole do not match.. you cant have lines that dont match or it throws your whole verse out of wack this is over before it started just give me a fair-ness-win........ this kid holds more things in his hands than mr garrison........ kid got has a crew full of dickriders and 50 cent biters............... this battle is more one sided than a pitcher with only a slider...... youll causaily miss this win with my last line ill finish him.......... like an unneded builing im just totaly diminished him........... aiight disses overall vote.. both verses came pretty nice which is rare for a battle on this board i think that casualty came harder in the diss and punchline category.. that shit about tramp is clean and nelly's jeans were better and more creative than any disses that vendetta had.. however i feel like vendetta had a more consistent verse than casualty did.. however i give the wordplay to casualty because vendetta had lines that aint even rhyme.. vote: casualty.. im voting for casualty mainly because i think his disses were more creative than vendettas |
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hybole and skully do match thats a total d/r vote uppin (5) too many dick riders on this site |
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casualty took this 1` in my opinion his punches hit harder and his flow was aight...........good attempt wit the multies...u also had sum funny shit.......casualtys wordplay was better than vendettas aswell...vendetta keep doin wot ur doin an du wil elevate.........
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could both ya drop votes on this shit aswell....nice battle aswell both yas....casualty take prophacyz advice aswell
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105844 |
yo for me casualty gets this his shit wasnt amazing and had fucked up structure but his punched alot harder and was more enjoyable..........................was very close but cas u get my vote and the win.
plz hit this up now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...580#post1077580 .thx. .......pz v doesnt count -feeble |
feeble why did you cancel that vote
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My ill verbs and nouns that cut your vertebre in half like im using scissors//
Im BIG like espn magazine pictures// I will disregard the structure problem...this line was not a punch I am cutting ya up so I can hand you your spleen, and bounce round your intestines like a tramp-O-line// You hafta get your own girl hiv testing every week to make sure that “tramp-is-clean”// not a punch nor personal Lemme introduce you tro my guilletene my skill’s obscene, I got more flavors then jelly beans// I’m tryin to watch Freestyle Friday,and u jus tryin to think of “106” ways to get in “Nelly’s Jeans”// almost a punch but not quite I'm viscous in every matter when my ryme's told// You thought blind posting was typin wit a blind fold// I'm high strung like i posess five lungs// I have a poetically "alive tongue," and will get you "higher to heaven" more then a combination of "Mase" and a dozen "high monks"// well i stopped breaking down bar by bar as i thought it was not going to help...sorry man but you put more of a open mic verse than a battle verse...... this kid is infested with wackness gotta spray him with lysol/........ well see how it goes before this room becomes frightful/........... not good i cant understand you your wack im ill like an infected skully........ cause me and you are very the oppisite from a hyperbole.........(comparison) decent wordplay though you dont need to bring it up this is over before it started just give me a fair-ness-win........ this kid holds more things in his hands than mr garrison........ /\played kid got has a crew full of dickriders and 50 cent biters............... this battle is more one sided than a pitcher with only a slider...... /\personal? youll causaily miss this win with my last line ill finish him.......... like an unneded builing im just totaly diminished him........... /\blah well all in all both verses were average though Vendetta wins because he had some attempts at punches and personals and he also had better structure |
I am cutting ya up so I can hand you your spleen, and bounce round your intestines like a tramp-O-line//-casualty
only line that stood out to me,nice visual.. but i thought vendetta got this one,with a little more wit and better puches..nothing taking away from casualty,even some of his lines werent that good..just didnt hit that hard vote vendetta |
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casualty got this hands down, likin the play on words dawg, keep goin wiv it. HOLLA
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Vendetta Took this In My opinion.........Better Structure,Better Wordplay,Better Flow,Better Punches...........casualty Came tough......Though u got to Elevate
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