Jay-O Anthem!!! IM BACK, BITCHES!!!
 

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...902#post1074902

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...898#post1074898

Iight...
... Lets Get Into This...
Just A Lil' Anthem Type Thing, Yah'Mean...
... Lettin' Dudes Know Whats Really Good And How I Gets Down...
But Anyway...
... Here's The Link...

www.soundclick.com/jayo

Title: Jay-O Anthem

... Listen, Enjoy, And Drop Some Feed-Back...

- Jay-O

JAY-O ANTHEM is dope dawg...Good hook....good vibe...good performance..i like that beat -sounds dangerous...
I DIDNT WANNA SAY GOODBYE..thats some ill shit...keepin the lyrics street but the beat is mad radio-frendly with a rugh edge..dope performance ...I`ll download that one...
ROUND HERE...good beat...i like the little synthlines and the arrangement..This shit is dope again.....
Peace

Yo Good Lookin', Man...
... It's Appreciated Highly...
Keep The Feed-Back Comin', Y'all...

I'm typing while I'm listening to it..

the beat is good..but I dont like how your voice sounds..dont like the hood..not at all..like the sex with strangers line..you got a harlem juelz santana style..the ass cheek line was golden..lol..once again..the chorus sucks ass..you need to up yo vocabulary..alot..I've heard..Jay-o/yo/tho/dough/ a million times..and the sounds effects sound a lil more clearer than your voice..but it's tight though..

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... HaHa @ Not Soundin' Hood...
Fuck Out Of Here, I Aint No Lil' White Boy, Man...
... Dont Get It Twisted...
But Yeah, The Critisizm Is Appreciated...
... Ima Take It And Use It To The Best Of My Ability...
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homie i think your voice sounds tight...beat was sick, rhymes were pretty tight, but i agree with Dixie that ya need to up ya vocab, once you do that - shit dawg i can see big tings happenin for ya - no bullshit.

PS - your rhymes on "round here" & "Milkshake" were tight as hell.

i feel tha voice and flow....... good punches... you flowin slower than i would expect on this beat.... quality is ass like one butt cheeck.. you should be rippin this fast........ i dunno. i like ya style..
until next time fam

JAY- OOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Good Lookin', Y'all...
... Yeah, My Quality Is Ass...
This Fuckin' 5 Dollar Labtec Is All I Got Tho'...
... Gotta Work Wit' What I Got, Yah'Mean...
But Yeah, If You Willin' To Make A Donation To The "Jay-O Needs A New Mic" Foundation, It'd Be Appreciated...
... HaHa...
Thanx Again...
... UPPIN'!!!

Can A Muhfucka Get Some Love???
... No Homo...

Jay-O Anthem

"Listening...Beat is mad crazy. Chorus is nice, original, catchy. Emotion is there. Lyrics are clean -n- point. Quality is decent but could of been better. Needed to turn up the vocals in your verse a little more. Vocals sound little muffy. Didn't like the end how you had that toilet effect. Should of just had the beat playing -n- fade at the end. Overall it a nice track."

SCORE: 8/10

you need a bit better quality...other that that dope, i was feeling your punches
your flow was kinda of slow

Good Peice

Peace

Can you do me a favor and check my song out..I took the time you should too

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106893

Thank You. Much Appriciated

beat is nice... flow was so slow, words to stretched, a lil to mainstream for me... quality sucked though... but overall its an ok track..

return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106350

this shit is definitely a banger, good flow; goes perfect wit tha beat....its all on point, wish i coulda listened to it on hi-fi but my broke ass still got dial-up, lol....stay up dogg...pz

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um checked it..and dont see where the hypes at.....you put a muffled effect on your voice....or maybe its your mic...your lyrics need work...just overall need work...

LoL @ My Lyrics Need Work...
... And You're A Textcee Wit' Over 1000 Posts...
And Yeah, My Mic Is Fucked Up...
... So Its Not A Muffle Effect...
But Anyway, Good Lookin' For The Feed-Back...
... Uppin'...

textcee sorry mayne im audio.....think before you speak.

Right...

well the hook....the words is hot but i aint really feelin how you said it. might be me, i dont really like that slurring shizz. ya bars is hot, yea and you already kno bout ya quality. im feelin ya other tracks too

holla back at me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=101599

That's Whats Hood, Man...
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Nice Man...

Good Beat...But I Think You Flowed Too Slow For This Type Of Beat...
And Your Voice Wasn't Very Clear...

But You Had Some Sick Lines...Like The Sex With Strangers...Keep Working Man...!

Overall...
8/10

By The Way...
If You Need Beats...Check Me Out...

Third World Productions

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Yea it was straight probly would of been hard if you did it in da studio but you good peep my tracks at [url]www.soundclick.com/abstractmindzmusic Overall 6out of10

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ya delivery is blah... clean that up... flow isn't that hot... hum... your hat is to big... No 50/50 for you... the you are what you eat line isn't hot... Ride the beat shit... stop fightin it...


and never say Yah'mean again...


deacon said everything else...

This Comin' From A Kid Wit' Over 1,000 Posts... HaHa... Wheres Ya' Life??? Anyway... Umm... The Feed-Back Is Appreciated... But Remember One Thing... You Can't Beat Me... Simple... Uppin'!!!

- Jay-O

its aiight..i think the flow is ass like a downsyndrom juelz...b/c you shoulda been going fasta on the beat. chorus is catchy..JAY OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO lol illlllllllllll...hot shit duke. bad quality.




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