730 vs Dan Da Man
 

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100 or more posts to vote
no recycling
no biting
no bitching
10 line minimum no max
spit at ckeck in, i'll go 1st

checkin in............fuck this 100 character shit.........this site is gay out of it's fuckin mind for havin this shit.....i can just keep sayin this shit until i have 100 characters......cuz i don't care....:)

checkin in>>>>>>>>>>>>>let's rock, this is sort of like the moment peeps have been waitin for, well let me make ur ear drums dance.........

i'm tired of taking falls, i belong at the top---
i'm tired of nuccas not thinking that i'm ground and i rock/
As for ur rhymes they need to stop, this may really hurt u alot---
but i'm overacheiving, like moving in that big house round the block/
Now niggaz grab they glot, u better know what cha doing---
cause i'll fuck over ya in time like the old ancient ruins/
Perfection i am pursuing/el producto top i'm unscrewin---
and i'm mackin to this groupie, playin BBD bout do me
As for u, i'ma tell like this it doesn't come that easy---
see u that while everybody sleepin ass nucca palm caressin ur disappoinment, bout please me/
So today just isn't ur day if u wanna know the simplicity of the facts---cause i'll appear to keep one eye on ya like a pirates patch/
So please didn't they told ya i always demand respect---
call me that duce staley ass nucca, game day runnin thru vets////

Deflection of ya wack ass rhymes as I leave ya ass in sections
Cuz the man's a stand up guy....Standin next to my erections
you'll get bent son...N fuck a lesson, tryna help him grow
cuz he don't need a hand....he also needs a wrist N elbow
you DO blow..N if it really just occured to you bitch
then i'll shove u in a righteous path....right down a fuckin cliff
he's pulsin stiff, rigomortis your bones to hang-ups ya prone
cuz I'm poundin dude until his ass here's fuckin dial tones
N you'll get thrown...cuz u ain't the truth N really u die
call me the Assist king in this...the way I'm passin the lies


^^that's a keystyled 10..........

well ladies and gentlemen there u have it, u have Da Man, and then u have the "the man" who really thinks he's a challenge, well the polls are open people, get the votes in!

uppin...show love ya'll lemme see them votes..................................this character shit is really a character, lol

uppin ya'll come on let's get them votes in, i'm not going to say this is bull shit, but damn i'm busy too, come on guys let's unite show love, will return the favor good or bad, one

come on peeps let's get the vote going, i'll return the favor, leave a link............................................

Uppin this battle please......return the fav to me N drop a link N i'll do the same in yours...................i'm just tryin to get this done with quick so hit it up aight?....

heres the breakdown yo......

Flow:730...Slightly both...But dan lost a couple of flows
Structure:730...dans was ok but some what stretched a little
Punches:730...some good punches came from 730...dan had little weak punches
personals.....im not commenting on this....lol
multis:both
Overall=730....Dan good try but try harder...u need to elevate. And 730 good but i was about to say u bit off of my rhymes in my battle but nm cuz u had it differtn...The erections and shit...my flow was this

I spit halk venom in every direction..../
This guy is sex screwed he needs viagra to losen his erections/

thats what made me think but nm....GOOD battle both...

my vote goes to 730

flow-DDM
punches-730
made sense-DDM
entertainment-DDM
personals-tie
humor-DDM
overall-Dan Da Man
commments: very good battle

^^^^^...............lmao........the votin on this site is fuckin hilarious....lmao.............. but uppin this piece.....wanna finish this battle soon y'all

this was an ok battle but nothing spetacular...both openers and closers were ok......730 had the harding punches where as dan da man had some but they were a bit weak....i thought both structure we ok but 730 takes this 1 as his was consistent whereas dan da man was sumtimes a lil messed.......my vote goes 2 730 on this 1............

as i took the time 2 vote on this battle cud u drop a vote on my battle wit The*reign*man....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106188

Flow, multis & rhyme schemes: 730's short structure made it easier to read...
dan your bars are long and stretched.....
Punches:
Now niggaz grab they glot, u better know what cha doing---
cause i'll fuck over ya in time like the old ancient ruins/
^^^not bad....one of the few time you spit a similie 6/10

call me that duce staley ass nucca, game day runnin thru vets
this one is aite too...but not aimed at your opponent tho~ 5/10

you DO blow..N if it really just occured to you bitch
then i'll shove u in a righteous path....right down a fuckin cliff
^^set up is nice and its also funny...6.5/10

he's pulsin stiff, rigomortis your bones to hang-ups ya prone
cuz I'm poundin dude until his ass hears fuckin dial tones
^^^nice metaphore here....7/10

My vote obviously goes to 730, due to better punches, rhyme scheme and flow...

please return the favor and vote here

uppin this battle y'all............thanx to those who voted...as u can see i kept my end of the bargain N returned the fav.....uppin 4 mo cats to do tha same.........

uppin 4 tha win............i been returnin the fav to mad battlers........c'mon..... ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

It was aiight battle but my vote goes to 730 cuz i was feelin his shyt a lil bit more....good battle though............

730 takes this with the better format, for sure...

And he utilized some sweet wordplay in those punches.

Nice work.

Dan was a bit stretched.
Really didn't use wordplay or metas...
(cept for that "ruins" line, nice...
if you'd have done that more, this would be close as shit)

Just a bit outclassed was Dan...

But good shit, Dan...

You'll improve!

Peace

^^^^^^thanx alot y'all............i'm uppin 4 tha closer quick.....this shoulda actually be a k.o but he had to get rode............lmao....

well it was a good try by Dan. He had an oright verse structure was fucked some punches were oright. 730 on the other hand came a lot better and his punches were felt more. So my vote goes to him

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107004