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It Vs 730
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You'll ripped...straight up ripped bars packin dozen
'sides most just puke at IT...like an addams family cousin dude you wasn't ever ill...N no you'll never be as nice cuz this pussy'll never see it straight...like bein a fuckin Dike get spiked up...N on the real this kid'll get sonned and this Dick's gettin pulled N cut right off...just like a cheatin husband get ya numbers right, really cuz ya ass just got delete his skill's still watin for job to do...like unemployment sheets N ya sweet too, this freak dude's about ta get clipped when i give Piercin news of losin..through his top N bottom lip |
1st line:"You'll get ripped...straight up Stripped my bars packin a dozen"
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This Ars Is So Whack That He Registered A Number Instead Of A Real Name..............
Yo Look At Me I`m 730...But No One Gives A Madd Fuck About What A Girl Claims... Your Battle Record Displays A 3-3 Ratio...Wait...I Mean Literally Now It`s 3-4.................... Before Yer Whored,Imma Just Say Please Stop Now,Ripped Yer Fuse From Ya Main Core... Man What More Can I Say Yer An Unknown...Wouldent Cause Camotion.......... Even If I Gave You The Wetest Ocean...You Still Couldent Soak Me...No Potion... I Guess 7:30 Wasnt Yer Time To Shine A Divine Win Over This Intalectual........... But Even If A Punch Was Landed To You To Use...Still U Would Hit Wrong Textuals... U Have No Sense Of A Keyed Verse That Comes Straight From The Random Scriptures... So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick Cuz This Kids Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures... |
730s best line!!
get ya numbers right, really cuz ya ass just got delete his skill's still watin for job to do...like unemployment sheets nice punch!!! Its best line!! U Have No Sense Of A Keyed Verse That Comes Straight From The Random Scriptures... So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick Cuz This Kids Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures not bad flow! flow: tie punches: 730 wordpaly: none humor: none disses: tie multis: none overall this wasnt that dope of a battle but its all good! overall VOTE: 730 HIS verse was nicer !! nuff said! take it or leave it! |
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^^^thanx 4 ya vote.....wish it could've been a poll vote cuz i'm tryna get outta here as quick as possible........N no it wasn't funny cuz it was a keystyle on both parts........lmao
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vote 730
i felt he had the better verse and this punch stood out to me i like it. get ya numbers right, really cuz ya ass just got delete his skill's still watin for job to do...like unemployment sheets-730 |
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Both of u had nice structure, nice flow, even both had nice metas.BUT the difference came in the punches. 730's best line was his dyke line, kinda played but nice just the same. It had a couple nice verses mainly the one about rippin out the fuse.
Yo this was a close ass battle but i give it to .......IT http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105535 |
It gets this becaouse he had better personals ( paying out his name) and shit. Overall a close battle , 730 came good with some ok stuff. I was feeling Its verse more. I just dont like that Capital letter for every word crap. But thats just me.
Vote it return a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105830 |
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Yo, i think 730 took this. His style was more straightforward which helped his punches land better. It, you're cool man but tone down the verses about, get better structure and make your punches more direct. Sorry i can't vote yet.
Drop a vote here though if you have a chance http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106285 |
aight fuck my structure got fucked up........................
lol..............aight................dont let it effect that i have 2 votes though....... aight....................uppin for a win.......................peace................ |
^^^wow this is so convenient..........i get 3 votes N the two voters that can actually poll vote....vote for It....
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wow...just remebered how you checked in...lol...aight...this shits been sleeping...RB is getting to many heads and half R too lazy too vote... |
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730/ nice vocab and wordplay aight punches and personals flow was great keep it up it/ not much there but wasnt to bad needs work elevate and get ya shit goin vote 730 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106438 hit dat up wit a fair vote thnx |
aight thanks for the vote..........................
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730 gOT THIS ONE HIS PUNCHES CAMES MORE CONSISTENT N CLEAN..
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sorry one lined votes dont count try again
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this battle wuzn all dat great but it had its good points..........ima have to go wit IT on this one nice flow and punches yo structure could use some work but nice drop
730 u came good i mean it wuz aite just yo punches aint hit dat hard and it wuz a predictable read.....i kinda of knew what u wuz gonna say b4 i read it....elevate vote = it |
no hate to any of u but both need to elevate some
votes needed..........gettin slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...75&page=1&pp=15 |
What the hell??..........this is the second battle i've been in that wack kids come in here N vote..........i lost one battle cuz Flow apparently wins over punches.... Now i don't have punches??......what the??
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hm....close battle.....it fix yer bars, shorten them a little....other doods structure was alright....metas were good here...it's were betteer///punches were tied id say, both hit pretty hard.,..complexity was in its favor lotta complex lines...personals goes to it....he just had more they were blah....730 had like n 2-3 nice pucnhes...it had some good hgard htting ones as well....overall i vote it for more consistant verse...better dissing
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ok i need 1 more vote obviously i won if i got 4 votes so someone give me the last vote please
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730 - structure was good, flow was good, some of the multis were ok, wordplay was ok, i wasnt feelin most of ur punches, no good personals
it- structure was ok, flow was pretty good, tight multis, i was feelin most of ur wordplay, most of ur punches hit hard, nice personals conclusion - it takes this in multis, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote...... VOTE - IT |
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