Telekinetic vs TheUnderRated
 

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kool good luck man i wish you all the best checkin and keyin for a minute pz...one.......................................... .................................................. ..................

kinetic energy is the energy of an object in motion yet your frozen..
left frosted by the coldest lines that were ever written or spoken...
your a flyweight applying to a known authority for a licence to ill ....
got stuck right in the face by striaght ace and even tried to take on born 2 kill...
i'm bout 2 cock back and deck her this female MC right in her grill..
add in the L on this kid and its just like i'm running another drill...
i'm like a tanker truck crash into to me and i explode leavin you in debree..
on different level on the MIC so telekinetically is the only way to reach me...
My brain overpowers your telekinetic powers which will leave a slight mishap...
why you hittin your self son oh shit cause i'm leavin you telekinetically bitchslapped....

i usually don't explain but i don't think people will get this one so..
back and deck her.....then add the L....and it like i'm running another drill......black and decker........one

I see you're in IJL, I guess you're the head dick of the faction
You actin all great but you break down more than a fraction
This Insane Joker has got more dick riders than a sexual offender
Im a title defender but your just a 10 an 13 middleweight contender
You not a winner, you got more losses than the US over in Vietnam
You claimin to be a lyricist but you been dropped more than bombs
This guys not right like the sight of Marylyn Manson with preachers
And he's gettin slept on more than all the Orlando Magic bleachers
Who's your teachers they need taught no way you from MC town
You need to change the Joker crew to The Overrated MC Clowns

*his crew is Insane Joker Lyricist
*last line- claims to be from MC town
*line 4- he is 10 an 13 an middleweight
*line 8- Magic lost like 18 in a row
*last line- ripped on his name and crew

kool nice drop lets up it for votes............................................. .................................................. ..................................

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ok first off the orlando line wus whack cauz even tho they lose alot (becauz tmac has to do all the work) people still fill the stands...
anyway Underated had better punches, metas, flow in my opinion...
didnt see multis form either not much...
flow n structure got to go to telekinetic but that wont win a battle
My VOte-TheUnderRated....
return the favor with honest votes here...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...89&pagenumber=1
ThanX....
Pz....

i meant to say that telekinetic only got structure cauz it wus easier to read she/he didnt get the flow my bad.......
consider this an uppin for both...
Pz.....

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This battle was pretty weak....Underrated... came with a bunch of fillers and your punches were bland as hell, you were usin telekinetic all over your verse with no real wordplay or disses....

Telekinetic didn't do anything nice either....all your punches were played, Yes even the Orlando majic's line......the only thing you had about your verse was your closer....it was the strongest punch of the whole battle, bring more of those and u'd win easy as fuck no doubt........

vote Telekinetic

return the fav if u may...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105817

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^^^werd...dis battle waz "itee"
Ur took dis for harder hittiing punches n better flow
both of u had a good structure n had nice punches....but UR's hit harder.....if i culd vote itd go 2 Ur
yo plzeee hit up dis battle.........literally sleepin on it.....thnxx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105843

Under- your opener and closer were hot that shit set u up already, structure was nice, flow was good. not many multis, and metas were alright but some good shit overall. 6/10

Telekinetic-your structure was good also cause it was easy to read and flow with,ya punches were a little played and so were ya personals. if you woulda put a hotter line were you put the vietnam line you woulda had him. Keep elevatin. 5.5/10

Vote Underrated

honest votes only plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105535

heres my breakdown...No hate plz........................

flow:under....both had good flows....
Structure:both...Same size......thats the same size lol...
Punches:some witty punches from under
personals:....hmmm
multis:under had multis...other tech was..nm
overall=under

no hate....

okay here comes the break down ... scale 1-10
The Underated(11-13) | Telekinetic (3-2)
opener: 5.0 | 4.0
closer: 6.0 | 6.0
punches: 6.5 | 7.0
flow: 7.5 | 8.0
structure: 9.0 | 9.0
personals: 7.0 | 7.0
Metas: 7.5 | 7.5
creativity: 7.0 | 7.0
enjoyment: 6.5 | 7.0
Total: 62.0 | 62.5

Uppin for votes

Severin' CitiSinz
"ok first off the orlando line wus whack cauz even tho they lose alot (becauz tmac has to do all the work) people still fill the stands..."
It wasnt meant to say they dont come to the game it means they
sleep in the bleachers while they there like they sleep on Under
And I take it your a orlando magic fan

Also I would like to know if anything is not played an weak to you people. I see people with higher posts an wins using the same style an everything.........ohh but I guess there shits good tho

Alot of you mutha fuckers wouldent know talent if it fucked you in the ass like all these high post people doin

Had to get that shit off my chest sorry if it offended anybody
Had to be said

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I acctualy enjoyed this battle good works guys

Underated- you came good man. Some nice shit in there. good punches, flow was oright ..... nice verse 7/10

Tele- also good verse man. Some pucnhees were funny . I liked the closer . and overall you take this battle by a bit 8/10

props to both

can u both return a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105830

this was a pretty simple one, flow, structure, punches, and all other catergories...........................RATED....any questions???


vote=rated

sry misclicked on the vote, it went to tele instead of rated, nothing i can do, but correct it if u can, one

got stuck right in the face by striaght ace and even tried to take on born 2 kill...

^^bad line considerin ace would destroy me let alone shitty born to kill......

fortunatly ur strectched lines and shitty meti4's didnt hurt u that much.....Telekenetic was simply blah, stale, boring......Under took this in punches, flo, and creativity......Tele took the personals' but that was about it....

vote- Under

sombody end this its some close shit..........................................
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Just one more vote people............................................ .........
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