yte grl vs yo what up
 

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CHECKIN IN.............

IM GONNA SET THE DUE DAT FOR TONIGHT AT 12 EST CAUSE I GO BACK TO MY MOMS SOON............

check in................................................ ............................................

yte girl sorry ur day has come do u want to get banneD?? read the fuckin rules u got more than 2 active battles and all u do is freepost and plus i don't like u so pack ya bags and get ready

aight check this..............yo, yo.............

see i enter this battle ready-for-combat, this chick claims she can rap, but cant figure out where "she-lives-at!"/
during this battle my punches will be-gats, she doesnt wanna lose, but when u battle me that just a guaranteed-fact/

with all ur drops i laugh-like-ur-not-serious, u act talk rough, and ur profile says u play football, but the only time u really wear "pads" is durin-ur-period!/
ive read ur shit, but i just starting turning-delerious, its hilarious how wack u r, and yea i keep to myself, but just take a "lesson" and learn-from-the-mysterious/

my rhymes ull swell-ya-brain, ya claim u can rap, but how u supposed to show any talent when u cant even "spell-ya-name"/
i dare ya to tell-ya-fame, cause theyll just laugh cause ur wack, u say that u on top, but fuck, like hell-ya-reign/

when u post it seems u might be good, but u cant even create-an-act, how supposed to drop hot shit, when its obvious u straight-wack/
my punches land wit a great-smack, and u try ya hardes to be good, but already my rhymes have started to decimate-ya-attack/

throughout ur battles ur skills tend-to-slope, cause im exposin ya for wack, its time to stop tryin to pretend-ur-dope/
u may be a chick, but my rhymes ull "arrest" ya and end-ya-hope, but while u locked up take this line of advice and dont "bend-to-get-the-soap"/

EXPLANATIONS - FOR U DUMB FUCKS

1st bar - where it says where ur from, her profile says vancouver WA, WA stands for Washington, but vancouver is in Canada

2nd bar - under her profile where it says interests, she says she plays football

3rd bar - her name is spelt yte grl instead of white girl

4th bar - self explanatory

5th bar - in prison, u drop the soap u get ass raped

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waitin on ur verse yte grl............

vancouvers right across the bridge from portland OR u dumb bitch/
u need 2 go back 2 the 5th grade and study the map u dip shit/
how the fuck am i supposed to get but fuked/
maybe ur girl does but i dont any girl who has nuts/
i do play football i play 4 different positions/
one of them is punter and ur ass is the next thing im kickin/
maybe i do wear pads atleast i dont stick tampons up my ass/
at least i make since when i fuckin rap/
ur a useless peice of shit/
only thing ur good at is suckin ass/

i meant dick.............................................. .................................................. .............................................

not bad..ya'll both spit nicely..but she killed u wit tha tampons line kid...1nE......................................... .................................................. .................................................. ..

i think yte grl did pretty good up in here........the best ive seen her do so far.........nice.................................. ..................

This battle was good, but...

Yo What Up: Your verse didn't flow at all. Trust me, I read it 3 times. Besides that, okay metas, multis and wordplay. I know you could bring it stronger.

Yte Girl: Your verse had nice flow. You attacked his verse. You took some of da insults and put em back in his mouth. Good verse.

Vote: Yte Girl

^^^by sayin house rules, that means all the rules that apply.......INCLUDING FEEDING.......just there u broke that............but whateva...........

UPPIN # 1!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok
First All votes that voted for yte girl is hate/dr because yo what up fucking merked the hell out of yte girl

the tampons line didnt do shit
half of his lines beat that garbage

fuck the d/r and haters

v/yo what up

Vote doesn't count.
-Axe

^^^thanx for the HONEST vote..........

UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice shit all around.

YO- it seemed like ya tryed to hard wit the punches but they still connected. ya metas were pretty good but ya need more multis and u really woulda killed her. And work on ya structure cause it hendered ya verses a bit. and u coulda came way harder.

YTE GIRL- it seemed like u just tryed to reverse and defend everything he said about u in all ya lines. the Tampon line was hilarious but it didn't seem like u tryed hard enough to beat him. your metas were played and u had no multies. U could come alot harder also. Keep elevatin.

Vote_YO

^^^thanx for the vote............

UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES ALL UP IN DIS PEICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well both of yas had some interesting thigs to say, and there is a vancouver washington, anyway, yte girl did the damn thing i sensed she rapped out of anger therefore allowing her to steal this very rare one, hey yo, u did ur thing a lil also, but she had a lil more determination.

note=yte girl

Didn't explain shit... Vote gone.
-Axe

nyce stuff all around...but yo...u was long for yte girl to spit only those few lines and murdah must mean u went wrong sumwere....check out CL vs WEEZY SNYPZ...

^^^WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG U WIT THE FAGS ON THIS SITE??????????? a lil more determination??...........^^then this cat says i got murdered???..........what the fuck, all she did was flip my punches, no creativity what so ever..........i cant murder myself wit my own punches dickholes, so heres an idea for u.........how bout u take a gigantic leap off my dick and quit clit riding fuckin fags...........

UPPIN # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well yte grl bit most of her punches which is a big no no in my book...and then even when she did bite em.....she uh didn't punch that well.....check it...

how the fuck am i supposed to get but fuked/
maybe ur girl does but i dont any girl who has nuts/
^you don't need nuts to get butt fucked so that makes little sense there.......
all you did was take what he said to you and flip it...which is against the rules try originality it helps my vote...
yo what up ....1

uh mabye i already voted not quite sure but i can't poll that peace out............................................... ..................................................

^^u havent voted yet.............thats weird........if it comes down to where i really need ur vote then ill holla at a mod, but if u know anything at battles i wont need it..........thanx though homie.........

UPPIN # 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!

i'm tellin u like this somehow i can't vote for some reason yte girl i wanna battle u bitch i don't like u for shit seriously and ur a biter dickrider and whoever voted for her battle me ya bunch of d/r i'm serious ya herbs and this battle was yo wat ups win and yte girl sorry ur gettin investigated already so fuk u

Yo your flows was a bit off but you still did good
vote for ~Yo What Up~
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^^ Fuckin idiot son do u know how 2 read the rules??? son u need to explain son

aight yo what up is dumb as fuck... made himself look dumb wit the Vancouver Wa line... Yes there is a a Vancouver WA and a Vancouver Canada.

girl you need to impove cauz some of your lines were a lil cheazy but you fliped it nicly

vote for girl

Explain better... vote gone.
-Axe

word and i also felt that his verse was bigger and had more effort for a win
even though big ass bars are wak imma give it to him for effort

No quoted votes.
-Axe

Yo----had decent flow--good use of vocab and wordplay--had some nice personals and punches but nothin outstandin---but overall i would rate it a 5-10


Yte----u def need ALOT of help with your structure--flow--vocab and pretty much evrything else---you didn't have a bad verse--but it lacked alot--in the punches personals and flow cats..


Vote ---YO

YO WHAT UP HIT THE PUNCHES HARD.......YTE GRL STILL NEEDS TO UP STRUCTURE AND RYHME A LIL BETTER WIT THE FLOW.....BUT GOOD BATTLE....

vote-YO WHAT UP

~yo what up~
All we all know sloe this win. Good try yte grl but you need much more of a rhyem ya know.
Punches- yte grl
Flow-~yo what up~
Multies-~yo what up~
Vocabulary-~yo what up~
~yo what up~

Vote-~yo what up~
Elevate
~1~
Drop a vote please, hit my link up.

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im new n shit here...but ayo from wut im used 2 listen 2 ( J-Hood,D-Block,Shyne etc...) i think Wut Up cut yte grl up.....he aint jus killed u 1st he punched u then bodied u then stomped u then killed u


Ma Votez 4 Yo What Up......iLL shit nigga....keep dat up

yte girl gets this by far yo what up your shit was just dull she had better punches and stronger flow
my vote yte girl
return the favor

yte girl- an elementery type flow not very good on the personall or vocabulary, multis ok but not very strong. overall weak flow

yo what up - started off shaky but got stronger as you read along much better use of multis vocab and punches than your apponent easier to read as well, overall not badd

vote- hands down yo whatup took this no contest of a battle on every category

Pretty much one sided the whole battle,
yo what up took punches,As others said tho Yte Grl Is elevatin and showing sign of improvment....Multies...wordplay..gonna also have to go to Yo what up, he put a hell of alot more creativty in his shit then yte grl put into hers, Structure..I don't know both were somewhat wack..both yall need to improve them in my opinion,
flow... Like I said alot more creativity was put into yo what ups verse so the quality of the flow was also better...
Yte grl Keep elevatin,good battle
v/ Yo what up

see i enter this battle ready-for-combat, this chick claims she can rap, but cant figure out where "she-lives-at!"/
during this battle my punches will be-gats, she doesnt wanna lose, but when u battle me that just a guaranteed-fact/

with all ur drops i laugh-like-ur-not-serious, u act talk rough, and ur profile says u play football, but the only time u really wear "pads" is durin-ur-period!/
ive read ur shit, but i just starting turning-delerious, its hilarious how wack u r, and yea i keep to myself, but just take a "lesson" and learn-from-the-mysterious/

my rhymes ull swell-ya-brain, ya claim u can rap, but how u supposed to show any talent when u cant even "spell-ya-name"/
i dare ya to tell-ya-fame, cause theyll just laugh cause ur wack, u say that u on top, but fuck, like hell-ya-reign/

when u post it seems u might be good, but u cant even create-an-act, how supposed to drop hot shit, when its obvious u straight-wack/
my punches land wit a great-smack, and u try ya hardes to be good, but already my rhymes have started to decimate-ya-attack/

throughout ur battles ur skills tend-to-slope, cause im exposin ya for wack, its time to stop tryin to pretend-ur-dope/
u may be a chick, but my rhymes ull "arrest" ya and end-ya-hope, but while u locked up take this line of advice and dont "bend-to-get-the-soap"/
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yo thought it was 10 lines o well 8/10
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vancouvers right across the bridge from portland OR u dumb bitch/
u need 2 go back 2 the 5th grade and study the map u dip shit/
how the fuck am i supposed to get but fuked/
maybe ur girl does but i dont any girl who has nuts/
i do play football i play 4 different positions/
one of them is punter and ur ass is the next thing im kickin/
maybe i do wear pads atleast i dont stick tampons up my ass/
at least i make since when i fuckin rap/
ur a useless peice of shit/
only thing ur good at is suckin ass/
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ehh w/e 6/10 k peace
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vote/yo what up
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