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TheProphet777 Vs. Obscure
U know the rules...................10 lines max. both drop afta both check in.....1 hour drop. Enough time to do ur shitting and eating and whatsoever. Gl
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checking in................................................ ..........ok waiting on u now............................................... ..........................gl......
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ok checkin in
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like your custom title says "get ready to lose" cuz this a merking...
i fucked ur girlfriend,she liked it.. that tramp needs more workin... you once were light but im covering your shadow into darkness... this emcee sucks, he bites lines from "The Young and Hopeless"... im lyrically stragling you, making you gasping, choking for air... this kid has no life hes livin in a box and livin on well-fare... Prophet, even your own church will be dissin u after this battle... if u werent livin on well-fare ud be collecting chicken and cattle... hang your self now so u dont feel the pain, my wraith"dopeness".. one emcee up, one emcee down, im out, this battle is dismissed... |
lol ok...I quik a quick key...Just got back...
10 lines eh....Should had already fuckin known/ I might as well put some hurting to this bitches dome/ Fuck...this is gay shit...im going to drop something thats about/ This bitch is so fucking lame...he needs extasy to help him out/ the pills will be poping into his mouth...down in his body sewage/ Chemicals extracting...Drains all his spinal Fluids/ man just quit already obsecure....Ur to fucking insecure/ Face the news..all ur getting is a -1 on ur battle score/ wait a second...Check ur av man....it proves ur a whore/ Damn....even that dogs moth is your only source to explore/ |
ok good drop uppin for votes now..........................
First up ......................Uping #`1 |
uppin 2 come on dont let this shit get slept on people............................................ ..................Hurry up now
damn |
Uppin #1....
U...U P...P P...P I...I N...N Uppin...Uppin Uppin..Uppin Uppin...Uppin Uppin...Uppin Uppin...Uppin |
Wordplay,Structure,Flow, Goes to Obscure....So do tha Punches...Both had Metas........Obscure Stay Away from them Sex Lines they Played Out,....Prophet work on ur Flow....
Vote~Obscure |
^ Thanks ... Uppin (2) Uppin (2)............................................... .............................................
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FLow: Obs
Punches: Obs Wordplay:Obs Meta's: Both Personals: both but Obs ones were hittin hard...made me laugh Yo this was not close at all Vote: OBsecure prophet.....u was basic homey get more harder punches Yo return the favor in 2 of my battles...... Read rules.. Vote gone -Token |
^ Thanks.. Uppin (3)
I'll go look for links...but if you can drop them in here.... uppin...uppin.......... |
^bunch of herb 1 line votes.....uppin 3...u guys are so lame .................................................. .............................
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well it's really not hard to tell prophet took this one, here's the break down.....
flow-prop struc-prop meats=prop personals-prop punches-obscure, for prop taking all categories, lol vote=prop Vote gone.. Must explain votes -Token |
opps i did it again, i'm going to start readin battles 3 times b4 i decide i readvote, then go back and read the the personi voted for is wack as shit upon 2nd opinion, oh well, no love lost
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First off are they one liners... no! are we lame? no did you lose? yes! is dan_da_man hop on your dick for a vote? yes! Uppin for honest votes. Uppin for honest Votes.:thefinger |
^^a hate vote because i merked his ass......others are dickriders cuz he voted for them...........upppin
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Ummmm Prophet ......Obs took this so stop whining i voted honestly
anywayz....if u think am a herb battle me next..kido.. OBs link: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106043 ^^we lackin on voters vote honest No beefing in battle forums. You have already voted. Now leave. -Token |
Uppin 4--
Prophet I dont know any of the voters that voted. Dan changed his mind because yours sucked. You lead a herb crew into destruction. Your crying because your going to be 12-8. Your crying because you just got merked by a kid 6-9. You got beat by a kid thats probably 8 years younger than you. Otherwise Uppin :thumbup: |
i gotta go wit prophet better punchlines obscure some of ya line didnt rhyme hopless does not rhyme with darkness and dopeness with dissmissed odnt either if it were hopless dopeness
then it would... porphet got better punches personals.... not many multis form either so i wont judge and since obscure didnt rhyme prophet got flow/structure too... My VOte-TheProphet777.... thanx... Pz.... |
less and ness.. yes it does rhyme d/r
uppin (5) Uppin (5) Uppin (5)............................................... ..................................... |
k just quit the bitchin
Flow:Prophet..Obscures urs sucked...u have no flow Structure:Obscure Werdplay:Prophet ..no much but he took it Punches:Tie..both were about the same...a lil weak but ok close batle but i see it as Prophet took it cuz obscure ur flow sucks..u talked to much shit bout like his girl n other homo shit...set ur focus on personals...n work on ur flow...n u might get better...n next time prophet dont take it so easy ive seen u come better..ok..come better in every battle..push ur self further |
uppin 5th time.............................................. ..............ok lets get this shit finally closed...........................lol hurry up
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I break shit down real simple ... scale 1-10
TP777(12-7) VS. | Obscure(6-9) Opener : 5.0 6.5 Closer: 5.0 4.0 Punches: 4.5 4.5 Flow: 7.5 7.5 Structure: 9.0 8.0 Personals: 6.5 6.5 Metas: 7.0 7.0 Creativity: 5.0 5.0 Enjoyment: 5.5 5.0 Total: 55.0 54.0 This was a good battle, nonetheless TP777 takes it. Bad vote.. Read voting rules. Vote disqualified -Token |
like your custom title says "get ready to lose" cuz this a merking...
i fucked ur girlfriend,she liked it.. that tramp needs more workin... you once were light but im covering your shadow into darkness... this emcee sucks, he bites lines from "The Young and Hopeless"... im lyrically stragling you, making you gasping, choking for air... this kid has no life hes livin in a box and livin on well-fare... Prophet, even your own church will be dissin u after this battle... if u werent livin on well-fare ud be collecting chicken and cattle... hang your self now so u dont feel the pain, my wraith"dopeness".. one emcee up, one emcee down, im out, this battle is dismissed... __________________ not a bad verse kinda of weird choices on how to attack him as far as punches go but i'll give it 13/20... 10 lines eh....Should had already fuckin known/ I might as well put some hurting to this bitches dome/ Fuck...this is gay shit...im going to drop something thats about/ This bitch is so fucking lame...he needs extasy to help him out/ the pills will be poping into his mouth...down in his body sewage/ Chemicals extracting...Drains all his spinal Fluids/ man just quit already obsecure....Ur to fucking insecure/ Face the news..all ur getting is a -1 on ur battle score/ wait a second...Check ur av man....it proves ur a whore/ Damn....even that dogs moth is your only source to explore/ __________________ hmmm nice closer but the X thing kinda made me go yawn so i'll only give your key a 14/20 i thought it would of been more towards a 15 but ....you keyed kinda sloppy my votre prophet hit these up honestly.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2 ^FL http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105960 ^elevated FL |
All invalid votes were disqualified. No more freeposting. Both of you have 5 more ups. Case closed.
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uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........
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upping 1st again......................case closed.............yup..................lets get this battle reclosed ...
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second up.......................................UPping come on dont let this be slept on now
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In my opinion Obscure took this one cause he had some good punches and made betta to the flow than Prophets and flows go to both and of course personals:goes 2 both, not many but its ok..... My vote goes to Obscure it was a nice battle but he took this one...... pz out
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uppin 3rd time...uppin for votes..lets reclose this again...
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IT MUST JUST BE ME BUT I THINK THE PROPHET TOOK THIS HE HAD .......
STRUCTURE:PROPHET METAS:TIE BEEF:PROPHET PERSONALS: TIE I VOTE:PROPHET NO BEEF BUT CAN YOU VOTE ON THESE GUYS http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106604 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107137 |
upping fourth time......Lets get this shit close come on
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uppin 5th time..........god my wrist hurts
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ite i think this just goes to prophet he just had better flow and structure,
also although ob took punches he was more consistent, take the */*s of your bars they wak man, but not a bad spit dawg, make sure you return the favor man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107881 thx.........pz |
uppin 5th time..........god my wrist hurts uppin uppin
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like your custom title says "get ready to lose" cuz this a merking...
i fucked ur girlfriend,she liked it.. that tramp needs more workin... you once were light but im covering your shadow into darkness... this emcee sucks, he bites lines from "The Young and Hopeless"... im lyrically stragling you, making you gasping, choking for air... this kid has no life hes livin in a box and livin on well-fare... Prophet, even your own church will be dissin u after this battle... if u werent livin on well-fare ud be collecting chicken and cattle... hang your self now so u dont feel the pain, my wraith"dopeness".. one emcee up, one emcee down, im out, this battle is dismissed... __________________________________________________ _ pretty nice to simple 7/10 __________________________________________________ __ 10 lines eh....Should had already fuckin known/ I might as well put some hurting to this bitches dome/ Fuck...this is gay shit...im going to drop something thats about/ This bitch is so fucking lame...he needs extasy to help him out/ the pills will be poping into his mouth...down in his body sewage/ Chemicals extracting...Drains all his spinal Fluids/ man just quit already obsecure....Ur to fucking insecure/ Face the news..all ur getting is a -1 on ur battle score/ wait a second...Check ur av man....it proves ur a whore/ Damn....even that dogs moth is your only source to explore/ __________________________________________________ __ more creative 8/10 better Approach _______________________________________________ vote/thaprophet777 hit this up homie nice battle in audio too peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108069 |
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