Aesthetic Vs Sicwit
 

Aight we agreed

on 6 lines max

due couple min

goodluck

ay kid, i kno your aesthetic, so imma tryin act clean/
yea im 0-2 you 4-1 but ill rise above you like steam/
i looked on dictionary.com com,, guess what i seen/
aesthetic and the word beauty, u must be different/
athletic is me, im a man you must just be big chested/
pretty boy battlin me, well you must be depressed kid/

yea due in a couple minutes... you must just wait for people to post then get back at them by what they wrote, thats what ive seen so far on your past battles

0-2 ??..lol Yo Clown! Fuck-Punches Imma Just Eat You Like Cut-Lunches!/ Cause The Only Time This Kids Shit Gets Felt Is When He's Gettin His Butt-Punctured!/

You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/
Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/

I Spit Fire! R.I.P This Fool! Cause Of Death? .. Burn-Related!/
Jokin Me Right? Ya Style on Tha Mic is Like A Slip Knot! One Pull N You Terminated!....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/sickwitmusic.htm (his Audio site...sounds weak as fucc..lol)


done


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My bad fo being lil late cuz i have a battle i had to do b4 this battle between us...yo...


UPPUN VOTE HONEST.....................GoodlUck Nice battle

yea goodluck, i like your style................................ but i still aint tryin to loose this shit so im uppin my vote

n how you gonna diss my tracks? atleast i got tracks lets hear some of your shit.............................................. .................................................. .....................................

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must be time for you to practice your aesthetics and get some damn beauty sleep huh............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

your not allowd to do anything under 10 lines.. respit then ill vote.............................................. ...........................................

oooh 4 real....i didnt know so we need to respit both and make it 10 lines............................................. .................................................. ......................................

u need to useyour original verse and add 4 lines onto it, got it?............................................... .................................................. .................................

ay kid, i kno your aesthetic, so imma tryin act clean/
yea im 0-2 you 4-1 but ill rise above you like steam/
i looked on dictionary.com com,, guess what i seen/

aesthetic and the word beauty, u must be different/
athletic is me, im a man you must just be big chested/
pretty boy battlin me, well you must be depressed kid/

you talk about me gettin my shit pushed u must have experience/
go apply some aesthetics to your flow it may improve your aperance/
cuz your spits need to be put aside your tag should be clearance/

dissen my tracks damn child you must be stupid/
your words really stink they came out your mouth like poop kid/

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vote - As

took this easily, better punches and better wordplay overall...his verse was better worded, but his structure is the only thing lacking...fixed that up..

1ne.

vote on this battle in return...

Cannabarz vs Dan

don't forget to poll...one.

aight then im out for he nite, one,.............................................. .................................................. ..................................................

Aigh sic ama add 4 lines to my original verse

here it goes:

0-2 ??..lol Yo Clown! Fuck-Punches Imma Just Eat You Like Cut-Lunches!/ Cause The Only Time This Kids Shit Gets Felt Is When He's Gettin His Butt-Punctured!/

You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/
Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/

I Spit Fire! R.I.P This Fool! Cause Of Death? .. Burn-Related!/
Jokin Me Right? Ya Style on Tha Mic is Like A Slip Knot! One Pull N You Terminated!....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/sickwitmusic.htm (his Audio site...sounds weak as fucc..lol

(added 4 lines)

I'm wreckin ya hate, no need for argument Sic called this debate/
I run time without freight! like bombers with no wings, you never gonig to elevate!/

Can't feel me? Aes just left the debris, you should of said no to the callout cause my punches only getting worse!//
Truth be told yo avy is way better than your whole verse!!!/..lol


done deal.............

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ayo dont need to break it down Aesthetic got this he had hardher hitting punches and had better flow and good structure...................
my vote-Aesthetic
hit up my battle and return the favor......................thanx..............~*1* ~

shit heres the link sorry bout that................thanx.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109269

Punches: Neither
Multis: As
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: As
Opener: As
Closer: As

Both of you need punches and wordplay, i don't thikn I saw one in there. As had a more polished verse, hot multis. Sick's verse was all around weak.

Vote - Aesthetic

You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/
Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/
Best bar of the battle

Could you return the favor, in my signature

Aight...................thnx UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

0-2 ??..lol Yo Clown! Fuck-Punches Imma Just Eat You Like Cut-Lunches!/ Cause The Only Time This Kids Shit Gets Felt Is When He's Gettin His Butt-Punctured!/
Nice Punch..Funny

You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/
Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/
..The Weaker Of The 3 Bars

I Spit Fire! R.I.P This Fool! Cause Of Death? .. Burn-Related!/
Jokin Me Right? Ya Style on Tha Mic is Like A Slip Knot! One Pull N You Terminated!....
The Best Of Your Lines....Original



As Wins By Far....Punches Hit..But You're Structure Needs Working On....Even Though I Battle Like That..People Say Bars Are Too Long... :confused:..I Like It Though...

Good Battle. Vote = As

ightt Aesthetic came good but could have been beter..........
flow:Aesthetic
wordplay:nethier
structure:Aesthetic
punches:Aesthetic
over all my vote gos to Aesthetic
</ Aesthetic

oh shit 4 got to pole vote..........and hit this up and return the favor.thanx....*1*...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109825

Thnx all ya'll 1 more and this will be closed

uppun............................................. .

This Was A Nice Battle But Aes Took It Easily With Punches,Personals/Disses,Vocab,Wordplay, Etc.............

Vote=Aes

REturn Da Favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109945