B . A -vs- 730
 

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The Clock Stops At 7:30 Armageddon Just Begun./ This Kids Missin' Talent Like The Earth Wit' No Sun./

Just A Hoe Wit' A Diffrent Area Code (730) So Get On The Train./ Don't Be Mad At Yaself Ya Mom -n- Dad's Ta' Blame./ 8==D (V)

Treat This Loss Like A Jersey Throw -It- Back./ Your The Opposite Of Seran Ya Can't Fuckin (W)rap./

Ya Rhymes Stink - Write Em' In Degree./ This Battles Like Eazy Wit' No (E) - Jay Wit' No (Z). (Easy)./

Kid Ya Rhymes Are Sick You Should Rap On ComicView./ Fuck It - This Kid Prolly Won't Even Post - I'm Through./ p'z

nice verse sort ur structure out and check yo pm box...waitin on the other cats verse b4 i drop a vote

Sorry duke this the first time i came online since yesterday so i didn't see this........10 lines??....aight....hol up

What a dumbass? this kid ain't gettin past the knowledge
Cuz this B.A majors in losses...like a fuckin college
dawg i'll salvage ya lines cuz it ain't shit to eat
so i'll feed ya spit to all the hungry kids in mozambique
dude's just weak...N this loss'll loosen guys fibres
as his concepts hit the ground....like lousy sky divers
you ain't live N who fears you?...ya losses i'll counter
while this fag's
just scared to step out of the closet...like pussy monsters
la la la la....boo boo boo....730 sucks <-See?
^^there.....maybe that'll prolly help ya verse battlin me

^^sorry dude again.....didn't see this till now...

votes please......this battle was quick so if y'all would kindly like to reply that'd be appreciated.....i'll graciously return the fav.....

C'mon people vote!! This was a quick battle an all we need are a few votes!! Honest Votes PleeeeeeZe!

Quit Sleepin' People

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B.A- Like me, bro, you got a problem with filler. it aint like it ruined your rap, it just caused a weak opener. your punches were kiinda weak toward the begining, but toward the end you pulled it off.

730- Good word play in the opener and good rhythem all the way through. Never seen a closer like that before, though. but, still, it worked.

vote- it was close, but 730 pulled it off with a better opener.

straight up both were straight but ima have to give it to 730 just cuz he merked b.a. wit this line

What a dumbass? this kid ain't gettin past the knowledge
Cuz this B.A majors in losses...like a fuckin college

keep workin on yo stuff itll come out right b.a.

vote=730

Haha Aiiight...2-0 730
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730 takes this one easliy

B.A.'s verse was some punches and some just rhymes.... try and aim for the other guy more often...

730 had better punches and didnt draw in his battle
8==D

vote 730

LMAO!!! LMAO!!!.....BS......Whateva Ya'll Say........

.........................................P'z

^^^as much as u may think it is BS.....it's truly not...ya scheme N concepts killed ya verse....................elevate a bit

Damn y'all sleep like muhfuckaz up in this place......drop a vote N i'll return the fav how hard is that.......i don't have a problem with votin on peeps battles but why can't they return the favor??...

Opener - 730
Flow - B.A.
Structure - B.A.
Multi's - 730
Punches - 730
Closer - 730

Overall - 730

B.A. - this line was sick bro... Ya Rhymes Stink - Write Em' In Degree./ This Battles Like Eazy Wit' No (E) - Jay Wit' No (Z). (Easy)./

But unfortunetly you didnt have more punch/wordplay bars that ill, cause if u did youd have my vote.

But I think 730's opener and closer alone beats your verse. Good Battle both of you, keep at it and good luck battlin.
Pz.

ite wak verse by b to start,

b-work on everythin dawg spec structure and harded punches u came week man,

730 - nuthin special but did wat u had to do bnice strcucture and not bad lines,

v-730 easy,

plz plz hit this up na http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107085 thx.........pz

iight...

730 takes this... he had a more harder hittin verse... other guy had too much filler in there... not wack... but not decent...
730 had some good punches and a nice flow...

vote - 730

OUT

pretty decent battle

punchlines- 730 that shit bout sky divers was clever
multies- 730
metas-ba.. that line bout jiggas was pretty clever
impact of disses- 730
overall verse consistensy- 730

vote 730