.:Freeman:. vs. Severin
 

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good luck man

iight........

checkin in...........

im keyin it up now...................................

good luck..........

iight im done.............................................. .........

here it goes.............................................. .

in this battle im curious, as to how you got your win
im already sick of ur punchlines, so take this on the chin
after this verse im gona leave your head 'hang-in-off'
leave you wiv no more air in your body 'left-to-cough'
ur a church goin boy, and while you singin your hymmns
i'll be the one that is 'severin' your limbs
personals, they are fundamentaly the basics of a battle
where as you spend ur time cryin, like a baby wiv no rattle
your a newb that makes 'open callouts', just plain dumb
battlin me, 1-1 is the best you can hope to become

Peep this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105860
I will come back and vote when the verses are in

why you gone offline pussy??!?!?!?!?!?!

dont no show me for fuck sake........................

hurry up and drop ur shit

The way im sunnin FreemaN bitch feels like hes back pickin cotton,
Like a cyber M16 i'm firin e-clips till fags black holed and forgotten,
.:FreemaN:.? Even ya name's imprisoned in dots, you're delirious,
But the way your bars are so weak, I can tell this pussies serious,
Av's mysterious,like red riding hood's been kidnapped by art fags,
Think ya ill? You got merked by Carson, so ya only sufferin jet lag!,
Ya ain't got tight shit, guess it's 'cuz ya ass been fucked so loose,
Name should be FreemaL(e), even in Front Lines fag takes abuse,
Don't take much to kill ya when ya think wit is with spelled wrong,
F and N trap 'reamer' in ya name, ya slap balls over da net like ping pong!

Sorry homie. I said around because i'm writing an essay while i type this. Anyway, if you don't get da wordplay, don't vote.

Note: CarsonJetX2 beat him 5-1, other than that you can pick up on everything.

vote on this battle..........................................
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iight.....

no probs man...

good verse... might be a close battle here...

lets get some votes on this..........................................

thanks
lets get some votes
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uppin #1

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Omg this is a 1 sided battle...AND HOW THE HELL DID U WIN THAT BATTLE.....u SHOULD HAVE ELEVATED

wHATS A CYBER M16?
AND YOU TRIED A BIT 2 HARD 2 COME PERSONAL

NICE PUNCHES FREE
SERVIN-WACK WORDPLAY ELEVATE

vOTE-FREEMAN
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105028

flow-free
personals-free
punches-free
originality-free
overall-free
vote- free

vote on this battle and then i will poll vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105861

iight thanks both of ya....

IceMan... poll ur vote damn you!

2-0 txt... 1-0 poll... at the moment...

uppin #2

updated freeman........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

put returns in ur full stops man lol!!!

it fuks the page width up if you dont...

.............................. thanks neway man

freeman took this a bit 1 sided punches hit alot harder flow was aight disses were better and wordplay was good...iceman i didnt get ur start and ur punches didnt land as hard...keep at it and u will elevate in time...........

vote-freeman

iight...

thanks for all the votes...

uppin this #2

thank you...

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laterz

those were aight lyrics waged in that battle, servin ur lines and flow need improvement although u stepped it up at the end, but then fell right back off at the closer, free i can tell ur a vet, not ur best work, but pieced together nice enough to get by.


vote=free

yo ite my mAN FREE merked this shit nice verse man,

good flow also tite structure and ur punches hit unlike the other dude.simple......pz