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Tay-g Vs Vitalz
10 lines up yo spit first
no d/r votes check in it may take me few to type mine cuz im really fucked up |
Aiight how many votes to win?
Good luck... Hurr go my shit... All ya weak meta~phorical~phrases get SCORNED~to SHAME like JEWs that FORN~I~CATE My words will TORCH~YA~FACE like eatin’ out a whore~wid~GENITAL~WARTS~&~AIDS LISTEN ass~hole I’ll “LASS~O” ya verse to make sure~you~“HEARD”~I “SETTLE~THE~BEEF” And I’ll AIR MAX ya NOSE IN to ensure ~you~ can~per~sonally SMELL~da~“FEET” (defeat) (dayum!!) My words will turn you INSIDE~OUT so you can “IN”~“CHANT”~ya~sounds (“enchant”… think about it) These sim~i~les slice you pretty much lit~er~ally AT~THE~KNEES so you can no longer “STAND~YA~GROUND”(fiyah!) My PUNCHES will “FORCE” ya “AIR” out like NIKE and make niggaz wanna~“REE~BOX” I’m come CLEANER than DE~TOX- Split ya ATOMS (Adams) so you can no longer~EVEs~drop You finna “DREAD” how I’m “LOCK”~in~ya flow~down in this show~down And dyin’ on “HANDS” and knees in ya HOME~TOWN is the only way you can “HOLD~YA~GROUND” (good god!!) That's it... hahaha... Murder in tha 1st degree!! lOl... Now, don't keep me waitin' long ya hurr!! lOl... Good luck! |
ill drop my verse in a an hour cuz i dont have but 2 min to do it now .................................................. ..................
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iight sorry so long heres ma drop.................
Hes getting abase so whys he tapping his foot smile on his face bout to get shook// mistook him for the garbage man hardly hes hard so parden me mam// your versus are plainly menial as if you start with error then start trial// Mile length stretched out spits heard you could flow but u just broke that myth// hes an addict to drugs cuz rap didnt embrace him with an infinite amount of love// If whackness is a skill then ill try your methods but i need a powerful pill// more posts shouldnt make you flyweight especially when you bite lines from die anotha day// Im fuckin you up with versus your unable to rehearse and use your mangled worse than a rubix cube/// rude nah this is just tha start ya battle lines dont match ya need to be debarred// depart from r&b its not far fetched to say you didnt alarm me that you a whack emcee astray// your shit fades fades faster than a denim jacket so sensitive it blows more than when a fat ass steps on a ketchup packet..// sorry bout lines messed up cuz i really fucked up right now.....cant see screen worth shit........... |
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Damn niggaz, can we get some fuckin' votes or what?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????
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Tay G took this one, his punches hit harder, he seemed more experenced, and his verse was batter overall!!!
no hate, both y'all had good verses jus one came better, an that was tay!! peace plz drop an honest vote on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105813 |
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tay G getz vote 4 betta thrown punches......better flow..n structure
close battle n vitalz.....juss elevate man....ur shyt waz ite tho.... good lookz ~wunnnnnn~ |
Uppin'........ More votes folks......... C'mon now...................
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Breakdown:
punches - tay personals- none flow - tay creativity - tay opener - tay closer - tay OVERALL - tay......But lose the capitals and the ~'s |
lOl^^ Thanks 4 the advice, but no thanks. The ~s are there to show the multis and the caps are there to help the dumbfucks understand the punches. lOl
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I forgot to say....
Drop a vote on this please since I took the time to do this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106525 |
upp'n 4 votes... niggaz be sleepin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!11
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Yeh tay you got this. Aftre i got a headache reading you battle. I have to agree with LM lose the capitals - it will make reading more attractive. This way it looks like some little kid wrote it. Anyways you get my vote becaouse you came harder and had better punches
plz return a honest fevour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107004 |
mo votes ppl c'mon now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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damn nice battle yall, Tay won this one, nice drop man better punches flow, structure and creativity, u came more like a vet and u got my vote.... vitalz not bad just elevate some u had a nice drop......
vote Tay g can yall drop a vote at my battle thnx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...043#post1104043 |
damn i never been in a battle dat takes so long to get votes... ima jus have to go back to sixshot, coz this is bullshit. lOl
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