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explicitot vs D.liver.E
u spit first
no crew votez no hate votez explain votez same old shit good luck. PZ. |
iight kid check in
good luck to you too playa hope dis battle gets some ga damn attention ....................................imma drop in about 15 minutes i gotta change classes |
k. good luck drop whenever u ready... I'll drop shortly after............................................. ......................
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fuck it man. I gotta go so I'm just droppin' my shit now
yo yo who the fuck iz u man, thinkin u explicit? u juzt another fag, battle? dun even risk it u claimin' u hot steppin' up to the mic but u only some wack mc that pre-writes fuckin' fake ass battler, ya name could b 50 cent fake as hell, a snitch and u talk shit we dun undastand fuck around, u end up on that sidewalk in a line of chalk thatz what u get with that talk when u aint shit at all u on ya knees, cryin' prayin' bitchin' hopin' someone will notice when u speak but then people walk over u like a doormat and leave footprintz whipin' they feetz get outta here dawg, this shit is just straight battlez u probably better off just realeasin' intrumentalz. PZ. |
dun feed of the verse and drop at least 5 barz.............................................. ........................................
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ok mayne i read ya verse ya probably right mines worse//
still you "DUN" nomatter my verse gun shatter ya first// cursed~i guess you can it that, you fuckin materialistic fag-rapper// stead o' disc scratcher u like dick-smacker, go back to suckin dick of gay-crackerz// see mayne i dont give a fuck, na man// imma spit n bust crush ya brain somin like the effect of a fryin pan// quit lyin man, so gay you could wear ya fagness in braids// call it homo-rows n post on the net for sale on e-bay// |
"cursed i guess you can call it that"
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dawg I told u, 5 barz minimum... u dropped 4... But itz all good.... votez plz............................................... ............................................. drop a link and I'll return the favor
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kings overview
flow- Ex structure- ex punches- ex personals- ??? creativity- ex multis- ex vote: Explicitot Vote gone.. read new rules. -Token |
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explicot got dis 4.....
punches: good shyt...yo d.liva...ur shyt waznt bad..but hiz hit a lil' harder peronalz: d.liva humour: tie multiz:???? flow: tie vote: ex....if i culd...but dawg repay da favor n hit dis battle up ..thnx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106241 |
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Yo this is how i see it.
Personal - D. Liv Flow - EX Multiez - Ex Wordplay - Ex Punches - Pretty even. So Vote Explictot. Holla Man.... Peace |
expliciont??? or however got this one his punches were a lil better, not much but just ebough to clench the battle!!!
nice battle n e wayz peeps pecae |
thnkas playaz
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not a bad battle wish i seen more actual rhymes
"who the fuck iz u man, thinkin u explicit? u juzt another fag, battle? dun even risk it" that was a great starter but from there rhymes got a bit weaker "ok mayne i read ya verse ya probably right mines worse// still you "DUN" nomatter my verse gun shatter ya first//" good starter also but keep it up more i give the battle to explicit better punches and a bit more flow |
i need votes on a battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106471 thanks let me no what you think even if you dont have 100 posts but i rather have votes |
thnks dawg u gotz to remember to poll too iight
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Gotta go with explicitot on this. His verse was more comlex, clever, and his punches hit harder.
D.Liver.E just came to plain. He got the idea right tho, he just needs to be more clever add some meta's an shit |
thanks playa i apreciate the honesty tha realness thats how a vote should b.
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fuck canibus
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D Liver
who the fuck iz u man, thinkin u explicit? u juzt another fag, battle? dun even risk it Blah...not a great punch u claimin' u hot steppin' up to the mic but u only some wack mc that pre-writes Pre-writing punches are played as fuck fuckin' fake ass battler, ya name could b 50 cent fake as hell, a snitch and u talk shit we dun undastand Not a very good punch fuck around, u end up on that sidewalk in a line of chalk thatz what u get with that talk when u aint shit at all What talk? ...its text u on ya knees, cryin' prayin' bitchin' hopin' someone will notice when u speak but then people walk over u like a doormat and leave footprintz whipin' they feetz Good punch...but streatched to hell get outta here dawg, this shit is just straight battlez u probably better off just realeasin' intrumentalz. Meh...not a good closer Liver - work on ya punches and structure, take a visit to WEC and ill help you out there Ex ok mayne i read ya verse ya probably right mines worse// still you "DUN" nomatter my verse gun shatter ya first// If ya's is worst then why is it gon kill him? dont diss on yaself cursed~i guess you can it that, you fuckin materialistic fag-rapper// stead o' disc scratcher u like dick-smacker, go back to suckin dick of gay-crackerz// Not the greatest punch see mayne i dont give a fuck, na man// imma spit n bust crush ya brain somin like the effect of a fryin pan// Decent... quit lyin man, so gay you could wear ya fagness in braids// call it homo-rows n post on the net for sale on e-bay// Decent Closer Ex - Work on ya flow..try to keep all ya lines the same length, dont space ya bars and drop the // at the end. Work on ya punches and drop overload wit multis, they dont mean shit/ Overall - Explict took this, weak battle but he actually had 1 or 2 decent punches Keep elevatin guys...and take a trip to WEC |
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wackness emergancy center, but dont worry bout it. i'm sure we can elevate jus fine on our own
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