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Ja'e Roc 01-12-04 03:38 PM

hybrid cypher vs. Ja'e Roc
 
10 to 20 lines
bring it all son, it'll be ya last:thefinger

Ja'e Roc 01-12-04 03:52 PM

freepostin hybreed, zoomen thru london on his moped,
fuckin round bout to end up dead, im wit his mom gettin head,

how you gonna spit in another battle, it not yours,
oh you a newbie i see your rattle, next to ya shitty draws,

first thing first, at battling,
you the worse, 1 punch shattering,

talents what you lack, every thing you spit,
is str8 wack, better yet shit,

after hearin ya flow, the only thing u do for paris,
is let us all know, y they so imbaressed,

dog hurry run, get off this site,
listen up dun, better believe the hype,

lyrically your not incline, so step up n get stomped,
you cant rhyme you can't rap, you ain't no comp,

lets get the wigs split, necks cracked,
your face i'll hit, your back i'll snap,

u need to take a step back, give up rap,
your shit mos def wack, n the vote will show that.

Ja'e Roc 01-12-04 04:02 PM

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checkin for hybrid to spit
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Ja'e Roc 01-12-04 06:34 PM

uppin for vote since this cats a no show, lets get this thing closed out, uuuuppppiiiinnngggg#1 .................................................. .................................................. .............

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 02:04 PM

spit

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 02:07 PM

f** you man, i'll send threting messages on your pager,
to get the fuck out of hear would be your best wager,
and what do you mean "it not your" don't you mean it's,
if you can't shell go home, cos i'll make you throw fits,
bouncing up and down on your mumma's tits,
oh, and your so called freinds i'll killing them gits,
F*** if you what bastard, cum on sicko,
i'll go get a grape and sick it in your dick "yo",
what a fool, fuck me up you can't,
put up a fight little bitch, you stupid cunt

LM 01-13-04 02:13 PM

L's Breakdown:

punches - Ja'e
personals - none really
flow - ja'e
creativity - ja'e
opener - ja'e
closer - ja'e

OVERALL - ja'e

Best Line:
after hearin ya flow, the only thing u do for paris,
is let us all know, y they so imbaressed,

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 02:16 PM

I may have 0,
but i'm still a hero,
Cum on your face like robert dinearo,
hard like k.ro, big is your ego,
were you at n****, come out to play,
just watch what ya say wha cha say wha cha say what!
bum boy squwat, shut ya blood clot,
facaltie is watching,
so watch what ya touching,
head up boy, cos i'm gunnu cut it,
bleed baby bleed, yo f*** it,

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 02:18 PM

after hearin ya flow, the only thing u do for paris,
is let us all know, y they so imbaressed,

is a SH** line, and i'm gone but it not MOTHER F***ING over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 02:19 PM

you won cos you got ONE F***ING VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

LM 01-13-04 02:34 PM

^^^shut up bitchin

Casualty 01-13-04 03:07 PM

lose

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 03:36 PM

SHUT UP GIANT TALKING HAND...HOLDING A F***ING PEN!!

I rule, I'm cool so shut up a your face!

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 03:41 PM

by the way

"after hearin ya flow, the only thing u do for paris,
is let us all know, y they so imbaressed"

does'nt make any sense.

and i don't like paris, so why would I even want to do any thing for it.

handy man sucks, from HZA

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 05:03 PM

sip

hybrid cypher 01-13-04 05:05 PM

if roc is on this page rite now speek

Yu Bin SunD 01-13-04 05:11 PM

jay=his verse was wack but flow was smooth u need to work on punches and drop metas and personals son or no1 gonan like ur verse

hybrid=ur shit was just messy and realy wasn't hot both of ya need to elevate but espiacially u son u need to work on all ur shit......it was wack and i didn't like it and i'm being honest

vote=jae just the fact he came better with the flow but i wasn't no big thang or good job 1


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