Bretheren vs Prophacyz
 

rules as posted in last battle...sorry bout forgettin bout it...but shit happens....i'll copy ur verse and put it in here than i'll spit...holla...

i got 20 mins...

Breth's verse:

Faggot, waiting to see you drop, but you forgot to erase your boyfriends phone number,
Annoyance, no one other than Proph, destroy you, make another name to 'pick a bone' under,
I don't even have to throw a punch at you, you are a living pun,
Ha, Proph goes to school with a wedgie, so nobody gives him one,
So kiss on my shoes, move up the leg, while I piss on your dues,
I'm sensing the truths, in this bitch, literally, he's missing his jewels,
Spitting hot shit, like I searched all words that meant fire, and had it delated,
Straight through your optic, murk you till 'death do us part', have you in a casket cremated,
You fucking dork, you lucky your here today, leave you like a foster fish, abducted orphans, (or-fins)
Tuck-in orifice, like dogs do between their legs, scared boyscout, have you go door to door, sucking at porches.

checkin in....i'm finna drop.............................................. .................................................. ...........................................

check it


similar to 'nas' my rhymes are 'sacred' like i was
'god's brethren'*...when my 'punches' hit you
the send you ya body two different 'directions'
ya brains 'out' and ya body the 'opposite direction
of heaven'...this kids on rb's 'most wanted'
he's got more 'gs' on his 'head' than the fuckin 'green
bay packers'...kid u could never 'follow in my footsteps'
betta watch where you 'steppin'...you'll never 'fill these shoes'
bitch, they 'too big for you'...leave you layin on da ground wit
my 'feet in ya face'...this is the 'biggest' de'feet' you seen...bitch...

sorry it took me so long..u know school...haha its a bitch...

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PLEASE VOTE ON THIS PEOPLE>....this isn't an uppin............................................. .................................................. ............

vote bretheren




i thought he came with more of a verse that i felt,more punches and wordplay..just a better verse..

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I guess Breth takes this one, both had good material but wack structures. Hey proph, i think you would have won but i didn't like some of your rhyming choice or that you didn't finish your ideas and the lines kept carrying on and on so it read like a long sentence. Sorry i can't vote.
Vote on this if you have the chance
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106285

uppin # 1

you lose

uppin #2

i think breth took this one, no hate, or d/r...... his verse just came harder i thought and thought his punches were hitting

Prop u had a nice verse but structure was a lil shakey,,,,,,,, keep elevatin

Vote Bretheren

i think breth took this one, no hate, or d/r...... his verse just came harder i thought and thought his punches were hitting

Prop u had a nice verse but structure was a lil shakey,,,,,,,, keep elevatin

Vote Bretheren
if yall could drop an honest vote off on this battle id appreciate it thnx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105641

Hey could you vote in the poll? Please, thanks.

Vote=======Brethren

Why??

b/c Prophs shit was str8 wack halk of it made no sense and none of it really rhymed

delte this vote if ya want but its only the truth

all cats go to Brethren

uppin # 4 .

uppin #5 .

ok....all these damn posts and only TWO fuckin votes......

.......I think Brethren took this....I can't vote yet....But I'M expression mahh opinion anyway...lol

breth took this... 'nuff said

v/breth

vote here plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=100995

well.....after viewin bretheran I thought proph would have this in the bag....
but...the only thing he had on Breth was structure...
Breth takes this one on the fact that he somewhat flowed and actually delivered punches...
I don know what Proph was doin....but that was a pretty pathetic verse..

vote- Breth...both elevate

Brethren on this one for sure, simply because proph's rhyme didnt- well, it didnt rhyme. The words didnt rhyme and it had a bad flow, and it didt really make much sense either. Brethren defenitly cam harder and had better punches , flow and everyhting.No poll vote though sorry.

Please vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107269

prophacyz...truthfully, your structure was messed. I could barely read it, remember this isn't audio, you need to make your structure so its an easy read...and because of this bad structure, it really destroyed the enjoyment of your verse. 2nd, Brethren had better personals, and that also created better punchlines. I was'nt feeling the whole nas-god brethren thingy espically...and your punches weren't fresh...
This was an ok battle overall, nothing that was above the ordinary.
My vote goes to brethren.

Both of you need to get better though.

vote-brethan,

nice structure more compolex but not streched,
nice flow and harder punches,

prof ur shit was abit streched also didnt have many hard punches ,
elavate,

..........................................pz