AJ vs B.I.Detained
 

To explain me not battleing in six months. This is a new name, so naturally I signed up earlier thne October.:)

Anyway, rules:
10 Lines
No Crew, Hate, D/R Votes.
You Spit First.
No Feeding.
No Biting.
Etc...


This should be good, even know I am rusty, read well.
Good luck to ya B.I.

-in-
g'luk
20 mins
drop rite
afta me
pz
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Re: AJ vs B.I.Detained
 

Welcome bk..sniff..I knew ya were Bk


huh..ya bin signed up that long & still Nobody Knows Ya
ya can't be Sober..see AJ writes w/ an Alcoholic Jene..
coz yhisRhymes cunt spark Fire from a Dose of Carosene
wot I mean..is..how du Cum Bk to a Merkin in an Instant
Aj gets son'd e'where he goes..wel at least he's Consistent
Damn sure not Resistant..coz 6 wins Rep his Cat Lives..
this Pussy gets Owned..on Knife edge from Blunt Knives
he still Thrives..but still Dies..like Icarus chasing Blue Skies
in my Eyes..Aj's Wings got clipped the 2nd he got in my Line

The Fag Rejected From The Rejects Wannabe From The Projects
It's Time To Subject To The Object Known To You As A Prospect
The Kids Anarexic Spitten After Pussy A Faggot to Be Asskicked
The Kid Thinks He Quick Like A Crack Head Lookin For A Quick Fix
He Flipped On kitkaT To Get Laughed At By A 0-10 Willy Nasdaq
Terroist Strait From Iraq Commaco. His Own People By MisMatch
I'll Have A Heart Attack Cuz Could Lack No Less Skill Like Slack
Silhoutted In His Former Form Of Bri Speaks "NOOBS FORWARNED"
Shuned And Scorned By Lack Of Knowledge By GrannyTranny Porn
I.B Detained By His Impedasized Hanging Corpse Blood Stained

wow that looks damn familiar^^^
not sayin ya bit but did ya Recycle??
anyways 1st
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Yeah, I wrote that for a tryout a day ago. I thought it was pretty damn good so I kept it for further use. It's only the first 5 lines though. I will admit it, if I lose for that then let it be, but it is dumb. Oh well.

1st Uppin From Me...

2nd Uppin From Me...

Come on people, this isant a bad battle, drop your links and your battles will be voted on.

3rd Uppin...

Stop sleeping on this...100 Character Rule Is Cool.............................................. ....

4th Uppin For Votes

Come on people, drop your links and we will get to your battles, a good battle here, don't sleep on it please.

aj i thought u blew ass none of ur shit made any sense and neither one of you can write

v/brix

AJ...you lost me bro..maybe i misunderstood your verse..
but for the most part i just didnt get it..sorry..just being honest..
the flow was good and the structure was there..but i didnt get any of your punches
i have been here a while and i have read a lot of battles..most of them i understand
but i was completely lost...maybe you can explain wtf you were talking about..
but as it stands...i am confused...

B.I.
nice overall...
fell off in some areas but you were pretty consistent..
you have elevated alot...since i beat you *wink*lol
naw...for real good shit...flow was there..nice structure
and nice punches...seen you do better..but u got the job done here

quotables
wot I mean..is..how du Cum Bk to a Merkin in an Instant
Aj gets son'd e'where he goes..wel at least he's Consistent

made me laugh..

no hat AJ..just didnt get most of your verse...

B.I.Detained you have to many wins

wtf???
y the fuck is it 1-1 wen ya havent got a vote??
anyways uppin this shizznit
2nd
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Vote B.I....overall verse was aight, you had some simple concepts a bit N only a few of ya punches relly hit in my eyes...but you caught the win no doubt....nice scheme N flow....

A.J your verse was alot of multis and just mainly rhymin words....i mean that's koo in a battle verse but there's no real punches.....i don't think you hit him enough to get you this win.....

My bad i forgot to add this ish in when i was puttin up my vote but can y'all..............
Please return the fav on this battle if u may........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105811

3rd
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5th From Me...

For The People:

My verse made perfect sense, you just got to read it slow and then read it fast, actually use your brain, I really dident expect people to get it. It is mroe of a person to person in reality spit, on the streets, so people can hear and I can make motions to make it workout.:) Hey not hate though, the votes go the way they go.:)

Are you serious???... about this??? and i? i mean is it legal that i say this??? ... welp... i'mma say it anyway... MURDER BITCH!.. Aj... ya shyt was stait... for a cypher... battle? i have no fucking idea you thought u were thinking/doing... i was more lose then batman & robin in the last cave... son... you have vocab... an YADI.. dunno... just how i see it... it wasn't a COMPLETE... blow-out some punches hit... but

like i said

vote-B.I.

Caesar On3

4th
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Decent battle.....

You've done better BI....but your punches hit...your personals were effective
Flow and structure was good....AJ... I don't like tha reusing tha verse deal you did
But BI edged you out in all category's

so

v/BI

hit this up... its getting slept on..... thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106391

BI ate this up...

Better punches, wordplay, personals.
Flow was on mark as well.

AJ came ok...
I guess he takes complexity cuz alot of that shit was like, "huh"?

Decent flow, no problem there.

Just couldn't find any punches.

Get original and watch how vets punch...

You'll learn, or, get back inta the swing of things, AJ.

Peace

Holla back...

Vote here!