Michael Madness Vs. Lokeye
 

Ight hears the rules no Crew votes ,10-14 lines in 25 mins

michael, it's madness trying ta step to me
I'm the sanest on the mic, psyche's intact, you see
it's not clever reppin' skills built on foundations of madness
when each key you press is echoed by the rustles of bad pests
fest-er-ing deep in your mind-vats of rhymes tryin' ta chime in with
space but it's not that defined so you can't even taste
what it's like to hold time as a concept,
your eye's 20/20, but your mind's eye is convex,
it's nonsense mike, quit wasting time and drop dead
or atleast just resume your daily regiment of meds

-Lokeye

Didn't wanna have to go all out,
But fuck it /
Lokeye Thinks he has Guts,
He'll get em cut out his stomach /
I ain't even at the summit /
N already my 32 words have merked yer 100 /
I didn't understand A word of what u said?
20/20?,minds convex,/
hmmmm..jus bust be to complex for my head
Yeh rt That shit jus didn't make no sense /
so next time you wanna battle don't step in my path way /
a lil advice, take yer poetry shit to yer local caf'e

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so this is how it works huh?
 

damn, that sucks, my first battle, and nobody even votes. So what now?

really though, could someone please vote?

both of yall sucked
i think i would have to go wit lokeye on this piece
whoever the other guy was
u didn't rhyme very well or nuttin
it wasn't a diss at all u lil pussies
out

i ll go with lockeye but you both did suck
Mike work on your shit go take some advice in tutoriols your rappin more how you suck and your confused then throwin diss's and punches make the readers laugh n ow were laughing at you
dont get it wrong lkockeye you one but you still need lots of work

you suck you jackass LOL

This was a ok battle but to me the harder hitting punches and better and creative overall verse came from..

My VoTe - Lokeye..

Cmon Lets Get These Votes Up, I Need To Get Some Wins

uppin uppin
 

uppin this

I don't know, I thought my verse won, but maybe I'm the only one who can make sense outa my flow. Who knows...

Punches-lokeye
Flow-lokeye
personals-Michael Madness
Structure-tie
wordplay-lokeye
vote:lokeye

Lil jons vote or post should i say was out of hate, but o well this battle is old news any way

imma vote for michael on dis cuz he had better personals and dats wat winz battles....
good battle though
vote=michael madness

once again lets get this voted on this battle is over a fucking week old , lets get these votes up,
leave yer thread and I'll post on your battles

Lokeye takes this battle

Nobody won in any category, seeing as neither had anything! But Lokeye's had more vocab, and was much more polished.

what it's like to hold time as a concept,
your eye's 20/20, but your mind's eye is convex,
Best bar of this battle.

Please return the favor in one of my battles.

uppin for votes

MichaelMadness takes dis.
Lokeye out bad for ur fist verse,keep it up.mike took dis tho harder punches.
Vote:MichaelMadness
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