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LM vs Ja'e Roc
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1hour time limit No hate, d/r votes Blind spit Check in dawg so we can start |
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yo LM, watch the teck, ja'e roc bout to catch wreck,
was next, rolls up, snaps ya neck, your spits just pathetic, need some anastetics, skin turnin blue, here comes the paramedics, but what can they do, Ja'e had it in for you, lyrically ya thru, all votes for me, none for you, nice track record, must of been ya crew checkin, not tryin to hurt ya feelins, just being real, your flow were not feelin, like ya legs, in the chair u wheel, you fam cant believe it, now ya's a parrapalegic, use to push, now ya gettin pushed, now by midgets ya get mushed, no more can ya work, strapped down you got merked, you calimed you once played soccer, til i rocked ya, or shall i say football, dont try an stand you'll fall, everything rearange, now the only way you get change, is sittin on the corner, wit a cup, an a note that reads, will suck for a buck, will the real limp cat please try an stand up? |
Here we go...
How the fuck can you claim to be a fuckin crowd mover Look at your record, your simply a mutherfuckin loser And a total truth abuser, sayin you rip cats on the mic Yeah...but only with other peoples verses coz you bite And when you write you think of your fuckin username I saw the 1st 2 letters, and couldnt link you to the game But I feel your pain coz I was a wack newb once too However I am glad, that I was never as wack as you Time flew when I finally found my feet here on rb But unfortuatly.....for you it's gon' be like an eternity You'll certainly be told you spit good, dope lines But It'll only be off people you've asked to dick ride You'll never have a crew by your side coz you get rejected I've been in three....If you get in one you'll get erected I sent out an open callout and a herb selected to reply to it I wouldnt mind it as much if he could rap.....but he's shit Now I've spit 17 lines already......it's now time to go Coz compared to Roc....Stephen Hawkings has more flow Check his profile for explainations |
Uppin for votes (1)
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yo ite this is how i saw this,
j-r = nice flow nice wordplay(inparts), nice opener.work on your structure and punches, lm = nice structure hard punches, personals, close shit but lm gets my vote due to harder punches and nice structure..........pz |
fuck you
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^^^You fuckin bitch.....You voted against me and didnt even put an explaination.
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Will somebody hurry up and ban Casualty....he's fuckin up everyones battles
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aight fuck casualty honest vote.....
personals:LM he had a lot punches:weren't very many but lm multis:jae flow:tie opener:tie closer:lm overall:lm took this one fairly easily...not bad on jae part but he didn't really drop that hard and lm still took it but looked like he wasn't tryin that hard either |
hey my bad i forgot to tell you to vote on the battle in my signature...thanks....
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Flow: Tie
Punch: LM Meta: LM Structure: LM Personal: LM Enjoy: LM Vote: LM LM hit harder..nice structure..Jae work on punchs..youl get there good battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106225 hit that up please...1 more vote needed |
J.R. - You had an alright flow, it was consistant and didnt really seem to fall off. You had punches that had a start, but no finishing effect. Maybe work on the effectiveness of your punches. The structure was choppy, but didnt interfear with the rhyme scheme. It was an ok verse, but I dont think your punches were fully brought.
LM - You had very nice structure, and the flow was pretty good. You added some personals in there, havent seen you do that befor. You had some pretty good punches, but the others wernt as effective. The rhyme scheme was simplistic. The structure made up for that though... You also had some meta's that stood out, nice work on that... Vote = LM ( Pretty good battle, but LM took it. Keep elevating J.R. ) |
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your flow were not feelin, like ya legs, in the chair u wheel,
^Best Punch of the whole battle right thurr^ So, my vote goes to Jae Hey, can ya'll folk vote on my battle?? It's been up fa like 3 or 4 dayz or some shit. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...304#post1087304 |
^^Read the verses again and think bout what you just posted....I think you've got a bit tangled, that wasnt one of my lines
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Actually it was me who got a bit tangled....I read your post wrong. My bad dawg. Sorry bout the freepost
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ROC- you stuff was decent it seemed to flow pretty good, you had a few punches in there but nothing major an some nice vocab at times. But you gotta learn to throw punches an use meta's.
LM- You verse was pretty nice, it had alot of punches in there an personals an all that shit and was pretty creative OVERALL- LM took this cause he had the punches Take some time an drop a vote in my battle thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542 Good Battle Guys |
Aight battle....
LM i've seen you come way harder.... But ya personals...and punches got this You also had better flow..and nice structure Jae...elevate...well both of you could so v/LM Return tha favor..hit this up with an honest vote..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106705 |
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