Lokeye -vs- iLLaMinTid
 

I don't know how to check in, in less than fifty letters so, I'm checking in...
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close your mouth illamintid, your breath just wreaks
you need an iller mint, the normal dose is too weak
your message gots a poster of your asshole getting worked
with your nickname illamintid cummed all over it in spurts

it just hurts to see an emcee on the net cold gettin' reamed
by now your black hole's loose enough to suck in-an-entire team
I pity-the-crew you run with, cause they dealin' wit your stench
plus you walkin' like your ass holdin' a 10lb. monkey wrench
you need to take a seat, because your asshole's getting rent
here's a washcloth so your ass don't drip all over the loser's bench

yall both really lost me know my battles aint the best but.......
yeah imma go wit

lokeye cuz ill ya rhyme was ai but it seemed you didnt really give enough punches or anthing
5. Don’t have POSSESSION of any spears but I still manage to put a hole in this AMATEUR/
blastin with a lyrical bazooka to his MIDSECTION ~ DISCORVERIN a Wu-Tang life SAVOR//

i didnt get it,sorry i know others will think different though they always do!!

don't you get metaphors? look on his avatar . . he has Raekwon from Wu-tang dawg . . and a life savor has a hole dead in the middle . . you wack dawg! go to school more! may be you'll learn somethin good . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie!

uppin for votes, nice verse illaminted, come up this wit me

heh! your shit wasn't at all bad either . . but it's obvious we both need elevation . . but aright . . get at us soon fellaz! blah! i'm outtie! UPPIN! (1)

ill gets my vote for at least attempted word play...
His first bar was the best of the battle...

Lok just talked about ill's asshole a lil' too much....mabe alot to much...

I dont have enough posts to poll vote, sorry fellas

Please vote on my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107351

-W1

lokeye..nice verse i really liked this verse..illamintid i didnt see to much in ur verse that really attracted my attention..i think this battle goes with him..def nice punches from him..

v-lokeye

return da favor:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105765

illamindtid...is garbage.......vote goes to the other cat he just merked illamindtid........1 holla...

psh! you suck dawg . . if you actually sit down to think about the metaphors i had in my verse . . you'd think it was hot . . Lokeye's was elementary . . no hate on yuh Lokeye . . but you's hella weak! get at me! blah! i'm outtie!

HERE! ya'll see that shit! Lokeye stayed talkin about the ass! and yall call that fuckin rap? ya'll weak! again no hate on yuh Lokeye.. get at me! blah! i'm outtie!

no, it's cool man. I don't usually ever "talk about the ass". It just came, you know. So I ran with it. I think it's a cool verse for what it is, but you're entitled to your own opinion. Peace dogg.

wurdup . . it aint no hate dawg . . i just thought i had the better out of the both of us . . but i guess i thought wrong . . ay if i pissed anyone off . . that's my b . . i just hate losin . . LOL . . so we straight? and what's the easiest way to get votes in a battle? get at me! blah! i'm outtie!

My vote goes to Ill, from straight good use of vocabulary. Lokeye repeated the same stuff in every single line, that fag stuff is played outta context.

Punches: Lokeye
Wordplay: Ill
Multis: Ill
Vocab: Ill
Personals: Ill


You’re blinded fact I “LOCKED” your “EYES” down with your small INTESTINES/
KNOCKED your EYES out and CHALKED EM ~ then PAWNED EM in AUCTIONS//
Best bar of the battle

uppin for votes

come on fellaz.. this battle is not all that hard to vote on..

uppin for votes fellaz!

ill got it better structure and flow and was clearer and had harder punches..............
my vote-ILL

yup yup! too bad you don't have enough post . . you could have helped me out in here! lol . . sall good . . aright fellaz don't sleep on this aright? easy!

yo dis battle goes to lokeye cuz he had a funny closer beside dat every other catergory was tieed...good battle though
vote=lokeye
can anyone hit up my battle it gettin slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108745

are yall sure yall readin the same thing?!

Lokeye
close your mouth illamintid, your breath just wreaks
you need an iller mint, the normal dose is too weak
your message gots a poster of your asshole getting worked
with your nickname illamintid cummed all over it in spurts
it just hurts to see an emcee on the net cold gettin' reamed
by now your black hole's loose enough to suck in-an-entire team
I pity-the-crew you run with, cause they dealin' wit your stench
plus you walkin' like your ass holdin' a 10lb. monkey wrench
you need to take a seat, because your asshole's getting rent
here's a washcloth so your ass don't drip all over the loser's bench

iLLaMinTid
1. I’ma beat down this RAEKWON ~ with only a TROJAN CONDOM/
you must be a fag talking about DICKS ~ get off my LEX DIAMONDS//

2. You’re blinded fact I “LOCKED” your “EYES” down with your small INTESTINES/
KNOCKED your EYES out and CHALKED EM ~ then PAWNED EM in AUCTIONS//

3. This bitch has an eye in his name except HE can’t SEE ME/
ONLY possible thing HE can SEE is ME ATTRACTING the VICTORY//

4. This cat has zilch in his skull except four THICK HALLS/
my mind owns a bulldozer ~ demolishing his mind’s BRICK WALLS//

5. Don’t have POSSESSION of any spears but I still manage to put a hole in this AMATEUR/
blastin with a lyrical bazooka to his MIDSECTION ~ DISCORVERIN a Wu-Tang life SAVOR//

now? change yall minds? i aint hatin that i'm losin but actually read the verses! shit!

come on! don't sleep!

why isn't anyone voting?

Lokeye
close your mouth illamintid, your breath just wreaks
you need an iller mint, the normal dose is too weak
your message gots a poster of your asshole getting worked
with your nickname illamintid cummed all over it in spurts
it just hurts to see an emcee on the net cold gettin' reamed
by now your black hole's loose enough to suck in-an-entire team
I pity-the-crew you run with, cause they dealin' wit your stench
plus you walkin' like your ass holdin' a 10lb. monkey wrench
you need to take a seat, because your asshole's getting rent
here's a washcloth so your ass don't drip all over the loser's bench

iLLaMinTid
1. I’ma beat down this RAEKWON ~ with only a TROJAN CONDOM/
you must be a fag talking about DICKS ~ get off my LEX DIAMONDS//

2. You’re blinded fact I “LOCKED” your “EYES” down with your small INTESTINES/
KNOCKED your EYES out and CHALKED EM ~ then PAWNED EM in AUCTIONS//

3. This bitch has an eye in his name except HE can’t SEE ME/
ONLY possible thing HE can SEE is ME ATTRACTING the VICTORY//

4. This cat has zilch in his skull except four THICK HALLS/
my mind owns a bulldozer ~ demolishing his mind’s BRICK WALLS//

5. Don’t have POSSESSION of any spears but I still manage to put a hole in this AMATEUR/
blastin with a lyrical bazooka to his MIDSECTION ~ DISCORVERIN a Wu-Tang life SAVOR//

uppin for votes..........

DON'T SLEEP!

Lokeye
close your mouth illamintid, your breath just wreaks
you need an iller mint, the normal dose is too weak
your message gots a poster of your asshole getting worked
with your nickname illamintid cummed all over it in spurts
it just hurts to see an emcee on the net cold gettin' reamed
by now your black hole's loose enough to suck in-an-entire team
I pity-the-crew you run with, cause they dealin' wit your stench
plus you walkin' like your ass holdin' a 10lb. monkey wrench
you need to take a seat, because your asshole's getting rent
here's a washcloth so your ass don't drip all over the loser's bench

iLLaMinTid
1. I’ma beat down this RAEKWON ~ with only a TROJAN CONDOM/
you must be a fag talking about DICKS ~ get off my LEX DIAMONDS//

2. You’re blinded fact I “LOCKED” your “EYES” down with your small INTESTINES/
KNOCKED your EYES out and CHALKED EM ~ then PAWNED EM in AUCTIONS//

3. This bitch has an eye in his name except HE can’t SEE ME/
ONLY possible thing HE can SEE is ME ATTRACTING the VICTORY//

4. This cat has zilch in his skull except four THICK HALLS/
my mind owns a bulldozer ~ demolishing his mind’s BRICK WALLS//

5. Don’t have POSSESSION of any spears but I still manage to put a hole in this AMATEUR/
blastin with a lyrical bazooka to his MIDSECTION ~ DISCORVERIN a Wu-Tang life SAVOR//

Yo, check it out. I'd vote on your guys battles if I could, but I can't yet. I have three battles that are still active 'cause it's been two weeks and nobody's voting. So I'm stuck asking for votes all the time. Would someone just please vote. I mean, am I doing something wrong?
-Lokeye

/\ can't help but agree..

so it SO HARD to vote for a 5 bar battle? 10 bars total?! shiyet!

Nice battle
Punches & Rhymes: Lokeye.............

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress

^ You should be banned.
And Illmintid should be Dq'd to uping is battle more than 10 times
plus Ill your wack as fuck.

i didn't upthis shit for than 5 times bitch! so shut the fuck up! and i'm wack?! bitch! i murdered this cat! you wanna fuckin battle bitch? get at me!