"WiZ~KiD" vs ~Rythmic Hints~
 

1 round 16 lines
3-0 ko 5 wins
spit

checkin in..

Man check in my fault for openin up one

Your Words Wouldn't Be As Hot As Mine Even If You Heated Em'/
This Newb's are Forbiden Fruit, Human Nature Makes Me Eat Em'/
Look Kid I Submerge Hits...Your Words Cant Hurt This/
To Post Is Worthless,My Puns Stir Wits In Turn To Burn Kids/
"W"?You Wont Earn This Cause Like Pornstars...Your Full Blown/
Victory Was Postponed,This Battles' A Wrap So Jus Leave It Alone/
You Could Be Throwin Stones But You Strike No Fear Hoe/
Ya Skills Appear?No..Cause Wackness Isnt Sub-Zero/
Drop This With Hot Spits?...Kid You Cant Spark Shit/
Not Even If You Passed Gases To Lit Matches Like You Farted/
These Hits Come Wit Pain & L's With Your Name But Get This.../
This Num-Skull Knows Shit So Ill Stitch-Brains For This Knit-Wit/
Switchin Shifts,Like Hittin Gears Kid Ill Make You Double Clutch/
Mumble Much? Or Has Your Tongue Started To Double Dutch/
Huddled-Up,Im Callin Plays & Your Headed For The End-Zone/
Broken Phones Dont Send Tones But Listen Closely For Your Cheers Holmes/*

*=No Dial Tone...Phones Dead...You Only Hear Silence...Get It?



holla........

damn dowg dis pos to be off da top if i knew u wuz gonna write some shit i would have too but fuck it aint no shame in my game im a champion

yeah all I read was a bunch a blah you aint making no noise
I gotta hunch y'ur ass an a wild nights gettin down with the boys
unlike you I drop Rhythmic hints and give up the real secret
cause I'm the best kept everyone knows how tight I keep it
the flow I speak with is focused on aim and shoot
and wrapped tighter then the laces on them white boy boots
I'm ancient rap royalty the original like king tut
you aint my dog so lemme show you quick how i ring muts
are you garggle'n seamen or can you really sing nuts
I bring cuts lacerations abrasions and fractures
cast this faggit from battle see if theres somethin' fa'actors
cause I can match y'urs with out even a second thought
I KO* any Production an like 80's crack I'm still new on the block
the shit you cum up with to spit I can tell you was chewin a cock
heres a hint rythmic this is gonna be the first dub I see
and for you the menus serving L's courtesy the dub I Zee

* KO any production K~O, "N" "E" productions in his sig

i show you how its done riden on me playa plese you done battlein me i rhyme words you cant even timetorhyme

^^^^^^^ the fuck?

Uppin dis for votes!!

(2) Uppin dis for votes!! dont sleep on da battle!!!!!

I'm still new to the site but I'm hoping that it dont take a week and shit to get a battle voted on....thanks for the battle rythmic good spit :thumbup:

^^^^^uppin for the first and only time `1

both emcees main problem is lack of direct punches............both cats were focusin on flowin and sayin how tight they were............its a battle ppl.........not a written spit/keystyle

dunno thought battle was weak but R.H edged this with a bit more creative lines, basically played, but it proved to be the better verse in my eyes

vote = RH

Breakdown:

punches - Rh
personals - none
flow - Rh
creativity - Rh
opener - Wk
closer - Rh

OVERALL - Rh

Both need to elevate and concentrate on punches more than flow, even then Wk's was choppy and Rh....take the /'s out of your verse coz not many people like them.

Anyway....since I took the time hit this up:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106525

if you say there was no personals it means you didnt read or didnt get my shit ....new board its whateva man......"I KO* any Production an like 80's crack I'm still new on the block"

(3) Uppin dis battle............................thanx for da feed back!!!

(4) Uppin dis shit lets get da votes in and dont sleep on dis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both had some played concepts........
Punches goes to Hints.... nice and strong
I was feeling wiz's flow lil more
But tha punches took this battle

so

v/Hints

This battles getting mad slept on.........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106391

both of your verses were not bad but you didn't come at the other person directly....rhythmic, you had some nice multis and punches but they weren't very effective cuz they didn't hit the other person directly...wiz you had good wordplay to but you weren't personal either, overall this battle was kinda hard to judge but i think rythmic takes this one, he did have some decent punches...return the favor and vote on one of the battles in my link (you have to have 5 plus wins to vote on the top link in my sig)

Hints wins this for more punches landed.
Bottom line.

Wiz threw alot of self prop which really hurt him.
Too much filler...
Especially when Hints is hittin with wordplay on pretty much every line.

Good battle, coulda used some personals from both sides.

But, eh.

Guess not.

Peace

good lookin dowg..........................uppin for da last time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok I think that RH won because of his punches and his creativity.
if there was a few more personals the battle would be better.
I cant poll vote because of lack of posts
Winner: RH

please take a look at

Drealest vs JayD (A great batttle)
and Drealest vs Lethal

WE NEED VOTES so it can be over

Breakdown/

punches / Rythmic hints
personals / none
flow / Rythmic hints
creativity / rythmic hints
opener / Wiz kid
closer / Rythmic hints

overall / rythmic hints

Both need to elevate and concentrate on punches more than flow, even then Wiz kids's was Lacking and Rythmic take the symbols out of your verse cuz not many people like them. yeah dogg word but i liked rythmics approach a lot better than wiz kid aight peace

vote/rythmic hints

wiz kid took this he had better punches......period............................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................................

this was no brainer this battle was a merk by rh he jus over ran the other dude wit skill in most battles dont see bein a newb as a disadvantage but rh came wit harder punches tho not very personal better flow and structure

vote: rh

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