Solgooberdier VS osiruz
 

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this is my cheq in.....waiting on your to drop...|1|

I'm doing that. Your the guest here, drop.

I'll delete you from the atmosphere then obliverate your atoms to the statosphere//Punk mother fuckers go down you know what happens here// Your rhymes suck like 3 transvestites with a dildo// I suspect you dropped your verse then called your boy to get fucked in the ass real slow// I'll talk publically about your sexual choice since you dont// Everybody knows now so rejoice, but you wont//Dont front we know your gay// I read it between the lines of the shit you say//I see through you like light in the day// we dont want fagets surfin this site go away// Your wack, and I'm on attack to assault as many emceeing fagots like you as I can with rap// Watch your back cause I'll be blowin up the spot where you live at// You cant rap you dont have gift// My style is swift, after this you'll need a face lift cause my punches hit so hard your face will shape shift// I'm dangerouse when I bus and hazardouse to Osiruz// I'm meticulouse and overly ridiculously fastidouse// Your style isnt new to us// I'm the king of this shit A.K.A your HIGHNESS.

~15 lines~

ight, nice battle... 1st up..

osiruz -

don't expect you to come first, your too-weak-to
u r still gonna be left behind because iam gonna P-Q[peak you]*
^ nice line, good punch. and i like tha p q comes before u r

find-your-smacked-hard, when you try-to-rap-scarred
after I leave you "rolling fucked" like-you-avatar
^ haha, nice! good punch, rolling fucked line wuz tight.

your faggotish resemblese shows in a flow-so-bland
iam too raw-for-stan, actin like a QB the way ima throw-your-plans
attack ya peeps with sharp weapons, no one likes you cuz i SAW YOUR FANS!!!
^ HOTT SHIT! tha QB line, and tha saw your fans line were tight

despite-the-call this fag is too shook all he can do is hide-or-fall
have him smoke pounds of weed and he still wont drop sick high-per-bowl[hyperbole]!!!
^ nice vocab! and hott finisher! although, half these ppl prolly dont know wut a hyperbole is lol

ight... next up...

solgooberdier -

I'll delete you from the atmosphere then obliverate your atoms to the statosphere//
Punk mother fuckers go down you know what happens here//
^ nice vocab... not really a solid punch though

Your rhymes suck like 3 transvestites with a dildo//
I suspect you dropped your verse then called your boy to get fucked in the ass real slow//
^ nice bar! tight punches.

I'll talk publically about your sexual choice since you dont// Everybody knows now so rejoice, but you wont//
^ umm, WEAK... if he wont talk about it, why wuld he rejoice?

Dont front we know your gay//
I read it between the lines of the shit you say//
I see through you like light in the day//
we dont want fagets surfin this site go away//
^ pretty weak, tha only good part wuz between tha lines you say

Your wack, and I'm on attack to assault as many emceeing fagots like you as I can with rap//
Watch your back cause I'll be blowin up the spot where you live at//
^ no punches. you need punches in a battle! 99% of your verse is filler homie

You cant rap you dont have gift//
My style is swift, after this you'll need a face lift cause my punches hit so hard your face will shape shift//
^ now thaz a tight fucking line! nice solid punch! your best line yet.

I'm dangerouse when I bus and hazardouse to Osiruz//
I'm meticulouse and overly ridiculously fastidouse//
Your style isnt new to us//
I'm the king of this shit A.K.A your HIGHNESS.
^ sorry, but half tha werds here didnt rhyme. and tha werds you used lol... nice vocab, but it might help spelled right. lol

my vote - osiruz... more punches, better punches, less filler.

PEACE!!!
~1~

please return tha favor... vote here... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106748

i thought this was worst than my battle wit watshisface i thought solgoober whatever
jus sucked he lost me in the beginin' this batle wasnt even all that good but imma go for

Osiruz

Alright, I dont have to agree with ya'll votes and I sure as fuck dont. First of all Sm0e Ki said more good about my verse than the fool I battled, then votes for Oziruz WTF, second Weezy need da call his own number 1-800-STOP FUCKING HATEN, cause he didnt explain his verse, is probably a favor vote, ya'll know how that BS is, drop a vote for me and I'll return the favor. EXPLAIN, no fucking point for his vote. READ THE RULES FUCKER, this aint the first time I battled on the net. I know how the shit goes down, bitches just trying to sneak a win. YOU GRIMEY FUCKS.

aint nobody hatin cuzzo i was jus feelin him more now jump off
and i dont hate vote i have no beef for you

OK dawg I believe you because you awnsered back. ~1~

ai we cool?????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????

yea osiruz got this easily.....that fag shit is mad played unless your in the 3rd grade rappin about bullshit ..then its ok but not on this site....you must be new to it or something...anyway no hate ..you had little to no sexual punches ..i'll give you one good one the one about punchin him in the face so hard..blah blah...lots of filler...
Oziruz nice drop don't do-this-shit cuase no-one-likes-it.....fix your sturcture your obviously from a different site too but you dropped it intelligently and i respect that my vote....the big O peace...

yea osiruz got this easily.....that fag shit is mad played unless your in the 3rd grade rappin about bullshit ..then its ok but not on this site....you must be new to it or something...anyway no hate ..you had little to no sexual punches ..i'll give you one good one the one about punchin him in the face so hard..blah blah...lots of filler...
Oziruz nice drop don't do-this-shit cuase no-one-likes-it.....fix your sturcture your obviously from a different site too but you dropped it intelligently and i respect that my vote....the big O peace...

No swaying votes please...solgooberdier..., madd respect to the underrated....

i only connect multis cause its a bunch of newbies voting in front lines thats all....|1|

Osiruz Won this one w/ his quality of punchlines used

The guy with the unpronounceable name had way too much filler an the played 'sex' lines are simply tiring.. structure wasnt too easy to follow either..

osiruz took erry catergory coz his smooth flow held together some nice original punches an it looked more tailor made to his opponent whereas the other dude coulda posted that against anyone..

VoTe = osiruz

Peep this plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106773

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To awnser that, My verse is more versitile I dont give a shit. I'll strike much harder next time I didnt think that ya'll wouldnt see talent.

Fuck you, swaying votes thats bull. I want a rematch next week.

aight this battle was kinda weak....osiruz ya verse was aight...you had the structure down even tho ya concepts were kinda played u still managed to come off with a straight verse..........stay elevatin...

dude with the long name:::...aight you had mad fillers and a bunch of gay shit in your verse....Literally......talkin about peeps bein gay went out a long time ago...and your bars are a little stretched, i see u got the hang of flow but u need punches to go along with it.....keep at it N elevate some aight?....

vote Osiruz..

STFU! seriously kid....what the fuck you been smoking????
dont freepost any more unless you wanna get reported...

^^^that goes to the dude with the long stretched name!!!

yo yall i can't vote don't have a 100 posts yet ish i aint een got 10 ...

but i can state my opinion ..... osiruz took this with punches n personals n the complextion of them was just on anutha level of creativity.......

peace

aite......just need one more poll vote......all favors have been returned so far!

UPPIN For the CLoser.....

common peeps Dont sleep on this!

osiruz won this battle..much betta punches..oh yeah and osiruz did u poll vote mine?

v-osiruz

vote on this peeps: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107063