True-Souldja vs. skorpius
 

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you go first

ok checkin in...my spit will be up soon
\ / \ / fkn 50 character count shit

hey YO

we got some white trash from ottawa
tryin' to rap for north america
u wanna take a shot at skorp
u gonna have a problem uhhh
claim to sell drugs do ya?
well here's a little tip for ya
go back to dealing nigger
i mean cmon it got u this far

so cmon dawg use your head
spit your best shit - stoner
but i suggest you play dead
we all know dogs are loyal to 'the0wner'

Call me white trash then referr to me as a nigger,
Means ya reading at a third grade level, or so Id figure,
Copy his style to know what its like bein dumb and wack,
This fagget probably hasnt even heard someone rap,
Im from ottawa ready to laugh at the 'soldiers' off beat, (His crew is Soldiers)
His style so boring I cant stay awake even wit foldgiers coffee,
Whyd you battle me son, all ya fuckin lyrics bore me,
Stick to 'snowboarding', cause its better 'safe' then sorry, (cant snowboard in aust.)

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I see people comin in here, why dont ya vote if ya comin in anyways.

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3rd upping.......
Stop sleeping on this please...
Need some votes

this battle was str8 up wack no real skill, nor flow, metas or vocab. i give this to skorpius, skorp had more punches.
breakdown:
punchs: Skor
vocab: tie
flow: tie
metas: tie
even a wack battle gotta have a winner, so i vote Skorpius.

Unexplained vote.. DQed.. -Token

weak!!!...

flow: tie...
rhyme scheme: tie
punches: soldier
personals: soldier..

please return the favor and vote on this battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...224#post1091224

Read voting rules... Vote gone -Token

Yo both yall niggaz need to work on ya shit, I gotta go wit Souldja though.Straight up most niggaz be gradin on rhyme scheme an all that bullshit, It's a battle dawg an to win u gotta get the other nigga, an souldja just got u. But keep wurkin both ya'll.

P.S.- watch them racial slurrs, u aint gon' win that way dog

peace

yo 65 views and only one person votes, and he dont even have enough posts to vote apperently, UPPIN. please vote on this.

Will Somebody Vote, I See More And More People Viewing And No Voting, Ive Been Voting, Fucking Shit.

maddd weak shyt.............................................. .................if i could vote true wuld get it cuz he had better punches besides dat all crap....

uppin, and i dont care if u think its 'weak shyt' (your brains weak there NoSpell)
just vote, and leave a link Ill leave a fair vote on your battle.

that's 2 for 2...i gotta admit both me and souldja were pretty pathetic though lol

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Nobody Votes, This Being Slept On For Weeks Or What?
Up.

Please vote, Leave a link and ill return the favour with an honest vote,
Uppin this shit.
again.

iGht ,
both were ight.....
Structure-Both needed work,but true's was better
Flow-True had a much cleaner flow, skorp, was all over .
wordplay-true put more creativity into his shit..he used more defiant words in his verse
punches- true hit harder w/ his punches....but I think personal were a tie, I think true could have came up with a better concept.. but good battle keep elevatin

v/ True-Souldja

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108569

Be an honest person and Honestly check out and vote my battles........sorry bout the free post..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108569

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I meant Vote on my battles...................sorry for freeposting

As long you both had fun and tried your best, you're both winners! Oh yea, Souldja gets my vote.

skorpius- I honestly didn't see two words that rhymed together in your first verse. (Maybe Ottawa and Uhhh.) I suggest coming up with a simple rhyme scheme next time. Keep working and you'll improve.

True-Souldja- you took it cause you had a stronger opening, although it kinda died off near the end. I give you props for trying to come up with some interesting ideas (like the foldgiers coffee) Keep practicing is all the advice I can give you, we all could use more.

Fuck, I forgot to include my link.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108289

Thanks.

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