¢orrupted Vi5on5:What Up Gang5ta <~( Yaz )~>
 

[What Up Gang5ta]

[Ver5e 1]
¢ut throat viloun¢e, enough ta make ya s¢ream
an get ya ta relize what you ¢learly do not see
yo lifez all easy, yo ri¢h, layed bak an ¢hilled
on ma blok, if u were ta tri dat yad be killed
unlea5hed wene u afraid ta bring a lil beef
how u a real thug if u neva lived on da 5treet
I live the 5treetz ni¢¢a, naw gohead an 5krat¢h that out
I made the 5treetz ni¢¢a, they were made ta faze ya out
I'l blaze ya up an put yout life through liven hell
dun tri an lie gansta kuz all ya liez seem ta fail
i see the truth wene i look into ma ni¢¢az eyez
an the only gang5ta i 5ee iz one liven in dispize
5o what up gangsta, or 5houd i say the real groupy
if u were su¢h a real Gansta go ahead an shoot me
ni¢¢a how do u figer that u kan pull da trigger
get away qui¢ker befo u kat¢h a bullet sliver

[¢hour5]
what up gangsta, ya trina run ma hood
what up gangsta, pop ya ni¢¢a i would
what up gangsta, ya u aint gonna do shit
keep runnin yo mouth an ima split ya lip

[Ver5e 2]
ya keep doin it ni¢¢a, an prosed ta akt viloent
be 5ilent wene im 5pitten but prai5e a vilet
a liven vetrin, waz a legend in da pa5t
but dat 5hyt dun lazt, it flyz by 5o fa5t
but ni¢¢az kud neva la5t kuz nex ta me dey 5ekon be5t
an if they der prote5t theil have kapz in their ¢he5t
an if one dem kok 5ukaz iz fronten ma krew gonna be jumpen
runnin an rantin bout whoz a real G
ni¢¢a prai5e me befo i got ya in bullet 5pray
leave yo head a5tray an blow out yo fuken brain
drive thyz ni¢¢a in5ain, but naw i aint ta blame
im juz doin what a true thug doez,
dun fuke it kuz, u blowin ma buzz
u frontin wit me an u bown ta fuken trip
get ya killed qui¢k trinna fuk wit ma 5hyt
5lit ya wri5t, like u already 5hould know
ma krew will hit ya up if ya realy wanna go
ima take yo gurl out fuk her an play ya
u think u a real G, well den waz up gan5ta

[¢hour5 x2]
what up gangsta, ya trina run ma hood
what up gangsta, pop ya ni¢¢a i would
what up gangsta, ya u aint gonna do shit
keep runnin yo mouth an ima split ya lip

I like it everything was on key man keep doing yo thing............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

uppin fo fead yo

Decent..Good flow...nice wordplay...still having problems with the spelling..LOL~

yo bro I like. had some good flow and some alright multi's could maybe use some more vocab though but other then that it was down.

haha pimpen an pen... READ MA 5IG :laugh: j/p kuz, but i enjoied thyz one, uppin fo mo feed

iight im uppin thyz... again

yea Yaz I think this one was Really Nicely Doen ya have Improved on ya strucutre and ya flow a bit and ya have real good vocab in this i enjoyed this Piece man i think it ya Second best after Tha Collab With Gene...yea so i think this here was really Good...feep that shit Droping Man...PeacE...

You're gay, type correctly, faggot.

^ ^ ^

True. . My Dope Compadre . .

Yaz . . Honestly Kid. . Typing That Way Isn't Cool In Any Way, Shape, Or Form . . I Know You Want Your Own Style. . But Typing With 5's And That Fucked Up C Isn't Your Own Style. . It's Annoying.

Maybe For You To Understand I Need To Retype That . .

Yaz. . Hone5tly Kid. . Typing That Way I5n't Cool In Any Way, 5hape, Or Form . . I Know You Want Your Own 5tyle. . But Typing with 5'5 And That Fucked Up C I5n't Your Own 5tyle. . It'5 Annoying.

Damn, I Just Annoyed Myself.

yo fuk u ni¢¢a, u dunno 5hyt an if u keep runnin yo mouth ima fuken pop yo bit¢h a55 lil fuken punk.... o ya uppin fo feed :D

Shut up, now.

Peep The Sig. . Ya Not Even On Our Level Kid. . And You're Not Gangsta. . Threatening To Pop My Ass Over A Fucking Machine . . The Fuck You Gonna Do ? Throw Your Wack Bars At Me N Kredit ? Kid, Our Bars Lacerate. . And They're Just Fucking Words. . Imagine That.

yo imagin thyz, u runnin yo fuken a55 off from 9trey 5^ motha fuka, or u to preppy ta know wtf dat meenz, an u aint evan ben in a fuken battle bit¢h, that 5howez how good u are, dumbfuk, u gonna find yo5elf punked wit yo mouff runnin off. now quit freepo5tuin on thyz 5hyt befo 5hyt happenz. fuken punk a55 ni¢¢a. uppin on thyz 5hyt an if u gonna 5ay 5umtin bout ma s'z bein 5'z ju5t 5ay iz hard ta read wit it.

it was aight...might wanna up ya vocab and add multis in there....but not too bad...

pce..

Hey, 5 man .. Do you not realize .. Formula was in your crew, like a week or two ago?

Also, his other accounts have battles on them, he just has password troubles and can't log on to the other names at the moment.

Now, get your facts straight before you decide to 'mouf off' again.

Also - Since when do battle records determine how good somebody is? Last time I checked, there is more to writing than dissing someone else. In open mic, real creativity is shown.

Go home.

whats really good jaywop holdin that bishop status billy badass what ya red b like, get at me, bz up red rum 5 alive ya heard

get at me homie

OK drop...nuthin special...
nuthin about it really stood out...
the spelling made it difficult to read...
took away from the flow...and effect of the wordplay...
but an OK drop nonetheless...

Keep Spittin and Elevate...