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Phayme vs LM
16 lines, due tonite..2 hrs or whatever..u decide
Blind spit, no dickridin, crew, alias, or hate votes no biting or recycling, checkin in required (to agree to rules) aiiight, chekkin in... |
2hours timelimit.....other than that I agree
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see u in 2 hrs, or maybe 1ne...it depends........................................... ...................................
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Here we go again.....
This faggott wanted to be able to drop later on, in fact tonight It's coz he wanted to find someone willin to help and ghostwrite If I had no sight I could still see that this bitch is completely wack Your great at many things dawg.........shame none of them is rap I'm a just tap your here your to herbish to come here and spit hard Your drops make no sense, but thats expected, when writen by a retard And you want to free cannabarz.....why? You must be his gay lover But dont tell me coz I dont wanna know what you do under the covers You shoulda put I'm wack for your sig....then you'd be tellin the truth You think your an adult, but your rhymes prove your still in your youth Your words dont get past your tooth when bubbled up in your throat So even if you were a giant squid you couldnt spit here and rock my boat I dont mean to gloat but this will soon be your 6th loss, not a suprise Coz your bout as much use as a 100m sprinter with fucked up thighs And as the votes rise your dignity will continue to sink to rock bottom Coz if you ever had a dope line it wasnt so good coz it's already forgotten Goodluck |
This storys ending up a gory accident, The house in the rappers hid
Now His victories going out the window, like cecelies kid-nappers did! Go practice, bitch....Phayme's poetic literature from teens in rupture That'll decimate yours eyes on both sides of your verse to lean your structure! LM's dreams are punctured, break a leg..arm, nose, hand and teeth I mean, When LM was declared leader of Central, they all began to leave Damn it chief..Not even words can expand on what your flow-needs Your from the Promising land..an Centrals like your Peter Pan Chronies! Sadamn salutes the Way I bomb your coordinates track off all your piles I wouldn't be ringin in so much votes, if you took ya hand back off the dial! Roll an avanlanche over your victorious posture, an bold your pride His mistress took one look in his pants, he was like "c'mon baby, it's cold outside!" Fold your eyes, Oh guys...look at his denchers, pre-used bit trash so when He's gassed up, Im equipped with Gasoline and a lit match The finishin touch..of wackness, Yes it's true it's his pleasento And dw has a taste for male-children, nowonder you stayed in central done.... |
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very close battle, an very ill indeed!!!
LM came a lil played, but i still think he came harder than phayme, not much, just phayme had some simple lines!!! an LM was consistant with his punches!!! |
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wow.....nice battleee
lm takes it 4 better punches really close battle....both of u threw up madd nice shyt structure goez 2 lm punches go 2 lm personalz......... closer and opener go 2 lm propz 2 both! |
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Shit, is it just me or has it been harder to get votes on battle since RB got the new layout?
Anyway, nice battle. I'll break it down like this. Punches- LM (they just hit harder, landed much better) Personals- Tie (both had good personals, Phayme with Central shit and LM who probably has the upper hand in this category with the Cannabarz and other shit) Flow- Tie (They both rapped well in my head, both good) Structure- LM edges this one out, not that important though, both pretty tight. Creativity- Phayme takes this, less played concepts Win-LM, punches still win battles |
good battle, very close,...im gonna start with punches, they're what win battles, i gonna give it to LM, they jus hit that bit harder, and both verses had a nice flow... and some decent personals... and complexity.... like i said, even, but it goes to LM, for punches
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It was a good battle.....
Too long but a good one.... Phayme took the wordplay and vocab easily, very witty, the only thing that hurt u were the use of sum played punches and bad strectched out structure....but a good job overall....i say 4.0/5.0 LM took the Hard punches and structure, harsh, along wit sum really nice flo, Phayme and LM's meti4's were tied but LM definitly took the better quality of Multi's....Nice verse...kill the Italic....i say 4.5/5.0 VOTE LM.... drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107580 |
nice battle...i dont know though LM's punches were a lil'played while Phayme bought some conceptz to the table i've never thought about..still LM came with that none of them are rap punch which was a banger...but then phayme came with the gassed up punch which was also banger...pnches were a tie..but the multies were all phayme..
i guess ill go off of that... v/phayme |
^^^Damn.....so much for a KO, but why did you judge the battle on multies.....personals anyone?
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nice battle both of ya'll, u both came with nice verses.... i feel tht LM did come a lil bit harder though with his punches and they hit better, both of u had good flow but LMs punches won him this battle
vote LM drop an honest vote my battle is gettin slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...479#post1092479 |
i gotta go wit LM on this....
madd close battle nice punches by both... LM just had more consistant punches n meta4s multis were better from LM didnt see much from phayme.... My VOte-LM |
i cant poll yet but if this aint over by da time i reach 100 posts i will....
can yall vote on this wit honest votes....\/ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107414 Pz... |
Why has there been about 5 votes for me from people who cant poll yet.....just my fuckin luck
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Thought this was a good battle ...u both had sum good punches an came out swingin but i think Lm had better personals an metaphors..shit was raw..props..
Breakdown Punche-LM Mulites-Lm personals-Lm Overall-Lm Vote-LM..Can U Return an Honest favor..my battle needs to get closed to..hit it up plz..cuz i hit yours up honesttly..either u cats.but LM won.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108047 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^THERE IT IS..JUSt CLICK IT Man Ull LIKE IT^^^^^^^ |
^^Can you poll it so this can finally get closed.....so many people havnt polled
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hey i gotta say that LM took this i dont no hes verse just caught me when i read it
and other cats verse was cool but lacked compared to LMs ok and good job both so imma say that LM had better overall punches,personals,multis and better werdplay vote/LM |
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