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Tek Verse Weezy Snypz
you know the rules
if i dont respond soon im changin classes |
Yeah.. im almost done kid.. i'll post in a min.. an u post weneva u can.
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imma drop around three is that cool wit you ?????????????????????????????????????
im about to switch classes |
Ya' career took a dive off the deep end, there's no reason to battle you-
Claimin' you wear a vest, but walk on the shallow end of the talent pool-- And maybe we should post this on a different site, cause RB likes me- Dawg, I'd get more replies on a sig test, then you do on an open mic peice-- Lessons are cruel, ya' endin' up with ya' brain matter spread on ya' tooth- I'll throw ya neck in a noose, and send your medics out on stretchers with you-- Not to mention ya punches, so watch this dumb kid get kicked in the stomach- Crippled in public, and left with his legs staple stitched to his crutches-- I'll stand on ya' block, with hands on mah glock, and flowz that'll dismantle ya knot-The only way you hittin the 'big time' is boxin' wit 'grandfather clocks'-- But I guess you're fit for tha' comp, I punch key's and I landed a few- Woah!! easy faggot.. I'm only grabbin' ya' ass to hand it to you-- I'd run through ya' crew, now you next on mah list, so wit clout I blast- Make you bite da' bullet, til there's nothin' but lead comin' out ya' ass-- This shits more then a mismatch, you're under armed so your holsters fit- Ya' rap career is like a 'limo wit no driver', you got nothin' to 'Chaffeur'(Show For) it-- Weezy, you're just an act, you're not worth mah time. Imma target a sucker punch- I'll 'plant' 'left and right hooks', and give you a whole 'harvest' of 'uppercuts'-- Tek got more 'Def Jams' than the 'hearing' impaired on 'busy streets'- Imma replace ya' 'vital organs' wit a 'Turnip', so ya heart don't miss a 'beat'-- |
Weneva dawg.. thas cool.
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Watch as i Break you down like im digestin' Your mind/
All my merkin's get a turn and your just next in line/ Tek...what chu know about a gun on your waist/ Only bullets that you droppin are the ones on your face/ Speak what youll Actually do Not what chu thinkin' will happen'/ Get you mad after this little freestyle im tappin'/ Tek...Listen up you'll never pose a threat/ ...You need to give it up and stop postin' threads// your jus a.. open target For the missles To Launch kid // Rhymes Like your Bullets blank so they not posin' a caution/ Half way therre and excuse the accent/ Tek couldnt win roses at a ulgy pagent/ He Gotta to check himself and really recognize/ Bang yourself..oh..you can use the "tek" to die/ You tellin' jokes in your lyrics we know whos the clown/ i told this nigga he "wait"to much he try losin' pounds/ my young bulls lit his back up givin' him "flash back"/ he got played in school thats how he got labeled class act/ as i.. finish it off i'll just diminish him all/ light work gets sent to "born to kill" to finish him off/ |
it would be nice if we could get 5 votes please............................................ ........
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uppn this.. post links an i'll follow them..
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word well it seems i can't poll it but tek definatley took this one.....actually his opener alone took thisone.....heeh weezy some of your shit was just dumb kinda weak ass punches all throughout you were really predicitable wit your ryhme scheme and sometimes you just reused the same word....well anyway it was a fine battle but i believe tek won i think you polls are fucked....no hate..both ya'll check this shit out..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107655 ^battle.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106602 ^open mic thats mad slept on i would rather get feedback on our open mic then a vote on the battle if your only gonna follow one thanx and pece.... |
Werd.. thanx dawg.. i cant drop a vote on the audio coz i havent got the compatability but im followin the txt link..
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Links in my sig
punches - tek personals - tek flow - tek creativity - tek opener - tek closer - tek OVERALL - tek......simple win for him really Follow the link in my sig please These votes aren't allowed. -Axe |
If a mod's passin thru could u poll the two votes plz..
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tek took it more consistant verse...
harder hitting punches n better meta4's tek try not to italicize your verse it messes with my eyes... My VOte-Tek for better overall punches and metas.... Pz... return the favor wit honest votes on the links in my sig... |
Lessons are cruel, ya' endin' up with ya' brain matter spread on ya' tooth-
I'll throw ya neck in a noose, and send your medics out on stretchers with you-- holy shit that was a fuckin fag line... man. this was bad as. Weezy takes this, cause he just dissed harder and had better punches. tek just filled his up with meta's. pretty boring shit. both of youse sucked actually. but i think Tek was just a lil too confident this time, and lost... stay on your toes kiddies... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106989 sweet___ |
tek nigga yo shit was raw fo real shawty...i was feelin it way more and you won about every category i could think of..........liked how you switched your text cus it kinda went wit ya flow..i was feelin it
weezy- yo shit was ok.....not good enough to win though sorry.... vote-tek |
punches - tek
personals - tek flow - tek creativity - tek flow - tek OVERALL - tek Great work, far better than Snypes Vote-Tek |
uppn this.. yo an thanx a lot Rookie.. real funny.
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Ya' career took a dive off the deep end, there's no reason to battle you-
Claimin' you wear a vest, but walk on the shallow end of the talent pool-- heh, opening is ok, good meta in there punch could be a little more directed but good line. And maybe we should post this on a different site, cause RB likes me- Dawg, I'd get more replies on a sig test, then you do on an open mic peice-- good follow, nice concept.. expecting a better flow from it, but good punch.. setup could have came off better Lessons are cruel, ya' endin' up with ya' brain matter spread on ya' tooth- I'll throw ya neck in a noose, and send your medics out on stretchers with you-- setup could have been a little more clear as well as connected better... punch isnt that hard Not to mention ya punches, so watch this dumb kid get kicked in the stomach- Crippled in public, and left with his legs staple stitched to his crutches-- thats the type of flow im talkin bout, not that strong as a directed punch but good flow I'll stand on ya' block, with hands on mah glock, and flowz that'll dismantle ya knot-The only way you hittin the 'big time' is boxin' wit 'grandfather clocks'-- setup was more of a filler ta me, follow through was an alright punch, the meta's good But I guess you're fit for tha' comp, I punch key's and I landed a few- Woah!! easy faggot.. I'm only grabbin' ya' ass to hand it to you-- flow could have been worked out better, good line though I'd run through ya' crew, now you next on mah list, so wit clout I blast- Make you bite da' bullet, til there's nothin' but lead comin' out ya' ass-- nice line... follow through was better than your set up though... This shits more then a mismatch, you're under armed so your holsters fit- Ya' rap career is like a 'limo wit no driver', you got nothin' to 'Chaffeur'(Show For) it-- good concept. setup need to be a little better i thought Weezy, you're just an act, you're not worth mah time. Imma target a sucker punch- I'll 'plant' 'left and right hooks', and give you a whole 'harvest' of 'uppercuts'-- i woulda cut whole, to save the flow a little. Punch could have been better Tek got more 'Def Jams' than the 'hearing' impaired on 'busy streets'- Imma replace ya' 'vital organs' wit a 'Turnip', so ya heart don't miss a 'beat'-- __________________ ending isnt bad, punch was alright, liking both your setup and follow through. Good verse, had some good punchs, nice metas n such,. flow wasnt bad, could have used a multi or two more oveall a good piece. Watch as i Break you down like im digestin' Your mind/ All my merkin's get a turn and your just next in line/ good connect with your opening, although the punch could have been harder Tek...what chu know about a gun on your waist/ Only bullets that you droppin are the ones on your face/ i thought the follow through was gunna be a bit more.. your setup started nice though Speak what youll Actually do Not what chu thinkin' will happen'/ Get you mad after this little freestyle im tappin'/ again good setup, but the follow through was hitting with the punch Tek...Listen up you'll never pose a threat/ ...You need to give it up and stop postin' threads// punch is weak, no real explanation in it but still pretty good direction your jus a.. open target For the missles To Launch kid // Rhymes Like your Bullets blank so they not posin' a caution/ ok line.. good concept with your meta, the punch wasnt to hard though Half way therre and excuse the accent/ Tek couldnt win roses at a ulgy pagent/ i see what you were trying for, but you lost flow, and werent clear enough on your line good attemp He Gotta to check himself and really recognize/ Bang yourself..oh..you can use the "tek" to die/ ok personal, i see the meta you were shootin at You tellin' jokes in your lyrics we know whos the clown/ i told this nigga he "wait"to much he try losin' pounds/ the setup could have flowed with the follow through a little better, punch wasnt that hard my young bulls lit his back up givin' him "flash back"/ he got played in school thats how he got labeled class act/ good line, could have been more directed as i.. finish it off i'll just diminish him all/ light work gets sent to "born to kill" to finish him off/ ending was ok, not much of a punch there You had an ok verse but it sort of seemed a generic.. you had a littl e bit better direction i think, however your punchs and metaphor/wordlay concepts werent that hard hittening, lack a little creativity... Vote- tek came with better punchs, his metaphor style seemed to have a little more thought put into it |
Now thas a breakdown! ^^^ -applauds-
Uppn this.. |
breakdown~
metta-tek multies-tie structure-tie flow-weezy punches-tek effort-tie overall-tek vote-tek nuff stated peeps check dis battle dont sleep on it http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...631#post1111631 |
There's only one vote for Weezy yet the poll reads 2.. an a couple of my votes need pollin.. if a mod's passin thru would u b so kind.. much appreciated.
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