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Lute Vs. MichaelMadness
Ight heres the deal,
check in, 10-15 lines, post within a hour no crew votes, no hate votes |
Eyyyo hurry ep and check in Mang .....................................
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They shoulda told ya not to fuck with Lute, cuz he don’t play/
I’ll leave ya fuckin’ face split up like B2K/ Battlin’ me dog, you gone need more than a few hot words/ I’ma treat you like that new movie and you’ll know that You Got Served/ When I posted the challenge you was quick to reply like you not scured/ You ain’t a street nigga just cuz’ you used to sit on the curb/ You prolly one of them white kids from the burbs that listen to NERD/ And don’t think you can wrap me up just because I spit first/ Cuz’ you just ahead of yaself like a premature birth/ But since you really wanna battle I’m give it to you/ Even though my son spits better ,and just to prove I’ll bust a nut on a cd and send it to you/ You ain’t a gangsta you bout as hard is jelly/ I’ll put black shit around ya eyes like one of them mask on R. Kelly/ Michael Madness , nigga be for real/ Clippin’ coupons is the only way you ever seein’ a deal/ |
Even though my son spits better ,and just to prove I’ll bust a nut on a cd and send it to you/
He used this line in a battle before........but thats ok Ima still get at you |
C'mon you takin' entirely too long to respond. What you feedin' off my verse or something. Just post this ain't an all day thing.
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This cat say he don't Play??, Thats why to battle me he had to copy n Paiste /
his punchlines were already placed in another battle he previously Raped / As for you bein Gangster, I doubt that....Criteria Is Fake,Come 2 the streets of Bk N Blades will Breeze yer face/ fuck that Gangster shit Dog, You Ain't a Fucking thug / Only Gat This Kid has access to is his Gramp's Rusty Gun / U don't hustle drugs, u don't Connect w/ yer Punches / This Bitch better get his G.E.D. Cuz he ain't rappin or Hustlin / Fuck it, Take out yer gun,I ain't runnin, If You Live by the gun, You'll die by what comes from it (bullets Nucca) You Literally fuckin nothin, this cat couldn't win Battles if they were at preschool Lunches / This punk is.....bout to lose bout to get ripped in too, Son, you couldnt seem to get at me, But Im gonna get at you / You got ahead of your yerslf dude, wasn't me it was you / Cuz from the begin of this battle I knew I could Out rhyme you, fool / Only way the judge's votin for u is "For us ,By us" Like Fubu / |
Yep...Lets get these muh fuckin votes posted now.......................
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Whoa lute your just a lil rusty dog but it was good
MM nice verse son I was feelin it pretty hot good way of bringin it to the table Vote MichaelMadness |
Keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppp voting ....................
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cMON YALL LETS GET THESE VOTES UP SO WE CAN GET THIS SHIT OVER W./
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vote goez 2 mike 4 betta punches...flow...n dat it
good battle mike had tite a tite flow ....wit overall better punches n yo lute- good shyt....but werk on ya punches n flow....mikk creamed u on it punches: M flow: m structure: none creativite:.......... opener:mike.....yo lute....urz waz wak ( no offence) clozer:........... vote: michael maddness no hate...no d/r 1 |
Ok i thought MM won this one
he definately had better punches (brooklyn holla back. lol) the battle could have been a lot better though. I cant poll vote cause i dont have enough posts. people please vote on my two battles D realest vs Lethal and D realest vs JayD (i PROMISE you wont be disappointed with this battle) I gonna try to up them but make sure you look for them please. later. |
upppin for some more votes............................................
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Uppin(5) Eyyo I didnt even know this was still ....open ....cmon yall vote on this ish so it can be over w/......Please for the love of god vote on this and leave a thread behind
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ok lute you basicly diised your self........MM u came hard and prove this kid ta be a herb..WoW lut next time u battle diss the hell out of the person u are VSINg and dont talk about your self in your verse............
flow:MM stuctuer:MM punches:MM lute eleavte PM for some advice i hope i have helped both oe u out........ my vote:MM |
aiiight 2me MM took this 1 his verse was alot better and iwas feeling it more.
he also had a better flow and punches.................. Lute u verse wasnt bad it jus didnt seem 2flow........ ialso thought u punches wernt hittin like an armless man was throwin them.... v/MM |
sorri can u all return the fava and dop a vote on this please, i took the time 4 u all....
Link...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...581#post1159581 |
that was a invalid vote some one pleazz remove it.........
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Another Battle thats almost what like 2 or 3 weeks old, seriously why cant yall just vote rt quick and get this shit off of here, CMon Vote ....What the hell is the problem, These battles get slept on for days , how can u elevate when u don't even have a response from someone telling you whether or not your last shit was good, On the real this is straightup bull shit, Ive hit up so many fucking battles i have blisters on my fingers and muh fuckers pay me back how....By not voting , I dont think so, cmon for the fucking love of god get these votes up
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hahahahaha no doubt im feelin ya...........................where ya at........ISS................peace nigga's
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YEh...................MAd gay homie .. Im gettin bitched rt now
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I totally was feelin MM verse, he had a gud flow with sum nice rhymes and a gud wordplay, structure was not so gud but I liked your punches and personals cuz they just came hard, you probably can work a
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liitle on your vocab but that's aight
Lute, you didn't had gud punches or personals that wahy I think MM took this so, you had a gud srtucture but you weren't so original, Vote MM |
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lute - structure was ok.......flow fell off.........vocab was pretty basic.........ok multis.......wordplay was weak...........some of the punches were ok........most were wack........no personals......
MM - structure was aight........flow was ok........vocab was pretty good........pretty good multis........some of the wordplay was nice.......pretty good punches........ok personals...... breakdown - structure - tie flow - MM vocab - MM mulits - MM wordplay - MM punches - MM personals - MM conclusion - MM takes this in almost all of the categories......this was a one sided battle........ VOTE - MICHEALMADNESS |
They shoulda told ya not to fuck with Lute, cuz he don’t play/
I’ll leave ya fuckin’ face split up like B2K/ lol soso Battlin’ me dog, you gone need more than a few hot words/ I’ma treat you like that new movie and you’ll know that You Got Served/ When I posted the challenge you was quick to reply like you not scured/ You ain’t a street nigga just cuz’ you used to sit on the curb/ all of that is decent but didnt hit hard You prolly one of them white kids from the burbs that listen to NERD/ And don’t think you can wrap me up just because I spit first/ Cuz’ you just ahead of yaself like a premature birth/ so so But since you really wanna battle I’m give it to you/ Even though my son spits better ,and just to prove I’ll bust a nut on a cd and send it to you/ madd stretched You ain’t a gangsta you bout as hard is jelly/ I’ll put black shit around ya eyes like one of them mask on R. Kelly/ second part is decent Michael Madness , nigga be for real/ Clippin’ coupons is the only way you ever seein’ a deal/ ........no This cat say he don't Play??, Thats why to battle me he had to copy n Paiste / his punchlines were already placed in another battle he previously Raped / decent As for you bein Gangster, I doubt that....Criteria Is Fake,Come 2 the streets of Bk N Blades will Breeze yer face/ fuck that Gangster shit Dog, You Ain't a Fucking thug / Only Gat This Kid has access to is his Gramp's Rusty Gun / U don't hustle drugs, soso but stretched u don't Connect w/ yer Punches / This Bitch better get his G.E.D. Cuz he ain't rappin or Hustlin / Fuck it, Take out yer gun,I ain't runnin, If You Live by the gun, lmao soso You'll die by what comes from it (bullets Nucca) You Literally fuckin nothin, this cat couldn't win Battles if they were at preschool Lunches / This punk is.....bout to lose bout to get ripped in too, Son, you couldnt seem to get at me, But Im gonna get at you / You got ahead of your yerslf dude, wasn't me it was you / Cuz from the begin of this battle I knew I could Out rhyme you, fool / Only way the judge's votin for u is "For us ,By us" Like Fubu / all of that was soso but nothing really hit hard michael took it with better verse..peep my link and poll peep mine please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414 |
mm won this quite easily to be honest
I mean lute came really played.. half decent if that. MM could have done better, but you still won this your punches were on point, and your flow matched well with them. Even out your structure a bit though.. a lil hard to read. Lute man, jus work more on the quality of your punches, n' come original v/ Michael |
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